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Collision Course 4.36
Collision Course 4.36
Carmen walked into The Planet, the papers that Rosita had given her were stuffed into her back pocket, signed, sealed and hopefully never to be used. Wills, power of attorneys, all those insane legal things that typical Rosita would have thought of at a time like this. She knew that Rosita was this proud and honorable woman, but damn it, why not confess you were gay, deal with the domino effect, and come home?
Cell phone ringing in her pocket startled her, Carmen flipped it open, answering it with a muted hello, sadness wanting to drive her into a dark room and hide for a week. But she knew that would just be wrong to do because that wasn’t who she was. Even when Shane had left her, she hadn’t gone peacefully into that dark night, she’d fought back and tried to get up and be herself again.
“Carm, I just wanted to tell you that my flight is delayed until 3pm or so, but I’ll call you when I land, ok?” said Rosita at the other end of the phone.
“Ro, please, come home?” begged Carmen uncharacteristically. “You don’t have to report now, god damn it, why are you being so fucking stubborn about this?” sobbed Carmen the air being shoved from her lungs as the thought of something happening to Rosita kept flashing into her mind.
“I have to do this bella, please,” said Rosita. “I love you.”
The phone went silent and Carmen spun around in anger, coming face to face with Alice. Carmen looked down at her feet, then into Alice’s dark sad eyes, “Where is she?” asked Alice in a desperate voice. Alice had heard every word that Carmen had uttered, and could only imagine what Rosita had been saying.
“LAX, her flight was delayed…”
Alice turned on her heels, dropping the cup of coffee she’d been holding and it bounced twice, spilling all its contents onto the floor before shattering into a million shards of jade colored porcelain in Alice’s wake. Carmen watched for a minute, seeing Alice breaking into a run, her handbag swinging behind her.
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Wow…such action packed drama…I couldn’t remember if the frog was real or not so during the story…her fall down outside to the struggle with Henry I was wondering if it was a real frog did it get squished…anyway that’s my dememnted mind…lol. I hope Henry is dead and I hope Sam will be okay. I hope Tina is okay too, but poor Angelica is probably traumatized for life. Keep posting and work that 15 minute orgasm into a chapter or two my interest is awakened.
wow wow!!! i love ur story!!!! hhmmmm… whats going on with shane and carmen??? and damn that dumbass henry!!! stupid ass guy…. anyway please continue with this awesome fic!!!
Holy sh_t! What happens next?!! Please update soon.
Oh, Holy Mother of God. You didn’t, you, I repeat, did NOT just do something… bad… to Sam. Or did you? I hope Ro comes back safe, and I really don’t think Shane is going to take the night’s events too well… And I hope Henry gets what’s coming to him. Post soon
I can not wait till your next post. I could see Henry doing some crazy stuff like that !
Great stuff…luv the drama…and Angelica screaming all the way thru it…of course mam T will survive but where is Bette? PPS
How dare you to have a life besides writing for all of us. Thank you for the new post, and have a wonderful holiday. Don’t work to hard!!
OMG! U cant kill Sam, or Tina for that matter. The only one that can die is Henry! If he doesnt die i hope he leaves Angelica alone and doesnt take her with him. After this one PLEASE dont leave us waiting to long. That will be just plain torture!!!! So PPS. Oh and loved it by the way.
Missed Friday nite. I know this is a busy time of year. and hours at work paids the bills. Get some sleep and take care of your self. or we will be missing a lot of Friday nites. Sam will be okay abd so will Tina, and is going to be the one that will hurt. If henry is alive, he will be someone bitch in jail I hope. thanks and take care and if we dont hear from before the 25th have a Happy Holiday bvh
so much druma can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
80hrs? YIKES! I love this story too much to say take your time w/ writing but I do sympathize. Will you get some relaxation during the holidays? Hope you do, leading a double life ain’t easy, but we appreciate the effort. Here’s hoping 911 gets someone over there quickly to save Sam’s ass. Ro and Al seem to be the real deal. Can Carmen hook up w/ Lara? After Lara realize’s she and Al are not meant to be? Thanx for the update, your eye’s must have been crisscrossing as you typed this.
Oh you evil evil gah!!! Okay, what happens next? Come on you can’t hang me like this! …Great update and my cardio-pump is stuck in my throat! pps!