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Cries Of The Mass – Chapter 2
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Tina felt the nurse’s gentle pulling. She felt the woman bringing her closer to the inevitable disenheartment. Beyond the closed doors, she knew lay Bette in whatever mangled state the crash had left her.
Mechanical beeps washed over her as she crossed that lonely threshold. Tina’s heart fell to the polished floor and shattered. The sight before her was insufferable. The exert to remain standing suffocated Tina and she felt immeasurable tides of lament begin to surface.
The eyes that habitually gleamed now lay empty and unexpressive; hidden beneath afflictive lids. The skin that was natively bronzed presently sat icy and blanched. The slender fingers that had so often animated Tina’s desise were now disfigured; leaning awkwardly against the white sheets.
Tina stared through the blur at the broken contours of her ex’s beautiful face. She took in the numerous tubes and the several wires. She gazed in despair at the machines pumping life into the motionless body.
She found herself at Bette’s side, in a chair she’d not noticed. Her heavy lids – weighed down with prognosticating despondency – barely blinked as she looked on, forlorn; begging for a sign from Bette.
With the medical jargon and her own impervious vexation, she remained ignorant to many details.
She became vaguely aware of another presence. Lifting her head, feeling the full downward force of her emotions, she stared blankly in the face of Jodi Lerner. The woman Bette had fought for. The prize that drew Bette from her side in LA..
She prepared for her body’s hateful convulsion. But it never came. Her opponent stood at the open door, her face mimicking the same sentiments Tina currently felt coursing through her veins. She watched as the other contestant in the battle for the Porter heart visibly broke down before her.
She rose from her seat and embraced the scared deaf girl. The two clung to one another’s desperate beings; feeling the fresh light of mutual respect and both simultaneously wishing their love back to them.
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so far so good, shaping up to be an interesting and intriging story, pps
You´re going to kill me…
I am suffering along with Braz, and Tina …at least you didn’t kill Bette, but your audience maybe…please continue. You’ve gotten off to a terrific start, have me totally sucked in….
This is shaping up to be quite the page-turner. Hope you’re feeling better!
Just found this today and it is very interesting. YOu amaze me with your talent, youngster. Keep up the good work. typed it on a cell phone. you’re very good, i’m doing well to talk on mine. PPS
Nope, Bette loves Tina and that is who she should be with. I wonder what the first name that she will say will be?
How did I frickin’ miss this…but regardless, this is awesome. You’re such a great writer. I think it says something for Tina when she can still feel compassion for Jodi, though she’s her competition
Gets better and better. But this was way too short.
hope Bette will be ok!
I like it so far, just let Bette be ok, when ever she´s going to wake up. she does wake up right?! *frowns*Go catch some sleep and than we would like to have another update:)
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Hurry up I want to know what happens next!This is goooodddddd
WOW!!! Very good so far!!! We need more and soon. What happen to Bette? Thanks PPS
So sad and moving. Please let Bette come out of it soon. I wonder who’s name she’ll call out……mmmmmmmmm. PPS!!