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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 37 part 1
Previously
“I love you Alice, I love you more than anything or anyone else in this world. I need you so much baby, do you know that? Do you know how much I need you in my life?” The blonde reached up and tenderly stroked Dana’s cheek, her eyes tearing with the sentiment.
“I do, I do Dane, I love you too so fucking much”. Bringing their lips together again the couple lay together, moulding as one as they comfortably began showing that love to each other for the second time that morning.
Dana’s Apartment 4 days after Christmas
Dana and Alice were sitting opposite each other at the dinning room table and eating dinner they had prepared together. Because Dana was still on a regulated training diet she was having low fat wholemeal pasta with tofu dish, the smell of it had been enough for Alice to screw her nose up and decide she was having something else, preferably with extra cheese. A comfortable silence set in as the girls munched away, content to spend an evening in together before the New Year party celebrations began. Alice eyed the room whilst she slurped up her spaghetti on her fork.
“You know that painting is so going when I move in,” she stated rather nonchalant then carried on stuffing the rest of her dinner into her mouth. Dana set down her fork and took a sip of water.
“What’s wrong with it?”
“Dana! It’s ugly, it doesn’t go with anything, I have no idea what it’s supposed to be, it looks like you bought it at a yard sale, the list is endless shall I carry on?”
“No that was sufficient thanks,” Dana replied giving Alice a small scowl and resuming her munching.
“I’m just saying there are a few things I want to change, you said you were fine with me stamping my mark on the place.”
“And I am, I just don’t need you to insult what little possessions I already have Al”. Alice let out a small giggle and stopped when she received the same glare she’d received just seconds ago.
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How rude of Howie to interrupt that! Just as it was getting good! Great chapter :D looking forward to part 2
Gud post dude lovin this danish they are so good together, why did howie have to interupt it when it was gettin interesting! Ne way deff a good post keep up the good work and keep posting so i can avoid college wrk!
Yeah damn Howie you pick your times mate!! I actually thought it was Shane too. And can I just say Alice could move in with me if she’d like and put her stamp all over me flat and insult me all she wanted.You guys not getting tired of NC-17 yet? Emmmm are you mad no we are NOT. What a great chapter PPS
They have the best luck. lol I loved what Dana called Howie.
LOL, “weapons of mass distraction!” I heart that line so much I might just have to throw it into my next uppy date. And I don’t write depth, just nonsense…tinged with smut. I have to admit it’s fun. And I’m working on it, possibly tomorrow but more likely Tuesday. Ha, I’m still laughing. The hotness didn’t even effect me, I was laughing too hard. Now I have to reread, dammit. Anyway, I heart you and this story and although chocolate is disgusting, I suppose I can make an exception.
lol howie,that guy is such a perv! more than myself! ha! see? im not alone in this! …and no we’re not tired of it! bring us more NC17!!!
Ok loved this update. You are so freaking hilarious how do you think this stuff up. Howie showing up though was just bad timing. Hey Muted are you nutz chocolate is so not disgusting. Hey hotstuff I will gladly dip you in chocolate and throw you to the lesbians anytime and anywhere. PPS.
Funny! Of course he’s a perv, arent all men? Ok some women are too :D But girls arent his thing so Alice doesnt have to worry. Of course you know that you have to finish what you started in the next chap right? :D Great update and PPS.
Bradshaw, please don’t think I’m complaining about your frequent updates, but I feel bad that I don’t get a chance to comment because I’m always like 2 or 3 chapters behind by the time I get to reading it. Anyway, again, not complaining because I love that you post so frequently, but I don’t get to tell you how much I love reading it after I finally do! So yeah, excellent chapter, love the weapons of mass distraction and the fact that Howie has made an appearance. I obviously miss Dana so much this season, but I also find myself missing Howie too. Oh well, can’t wait to find out what trouble he’s gonna cause in the next installment.
Damn that boy, how dare he interupt our girls when they are getting down to some serious luuuvvv.
For as much as I like Howie, he always knew when to show up at the wrong time, lol. Funny update, can’t wait to see what’ll happen in part 2:)PPS.
damn i really shouldnt have read this in a public place… GOD! my cheeks are f’n burning. and since i am sitting all alone in a hotel lobby, i look like an idiot smiling from ear to ear.. mmm after this BIG tease of a chapter i “ache” to go to my room.. damn i was angry at ma girl, thanks to your update i cant avoid her now can i? lol keep up the good work though. and i can totally see my girl sending flowers to you!! ya know for making me jump on her bones….. gotta run before i explode…
Excellent update… as usual. Really am loving this story. You’re doing such an awesome job with it.
‘Weapons of mass distraction’ what a line – you certainly have a sense of humour – please keep this story coming – as we have New Year to get to yet!!
oooh that little Howie! brilliant! loved the whole thing, especially the footsie and the lap straddling *blushes*. Again, your Alice is perfect.