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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 42 part 2
Previously
Dana watched Alice scramble towards the ladies room and she knew that as soon as Alice removed the device she’d be in big trouble. Hurriedly taking out her cell from her purse, she sent her girlfriend a text message just as she reached the door to the toilets. Alice scowled at the beeping coming from her purse and picked it out from amongst the crap inside, just as she read it the vibrating halted:
Alice baby, Im sorry about that, but wait in the bathroom 4 a min and I promise Ill make it up 2 u and end ur misery. Luv D xxx
A smile returned to Alice’s face as she read, with a smirk aimed at Dana she pushed open the door and waited in the first vacant stall she could see.
A toilet stall in Lo Mein
Alice was sat on a cold plastic toilet seat waiting for Dana who seemed to be taking her sweet ass time, was it not enough that she’d almost made the blonde come in front of a waiter and then her boss? The writer tapped her feet against the floor in impatience and twiddled her thumbs around, bored with starring at the metallic door.
Dana on the other hand was scanning the restaurant to see if anyone would notice her disappearance, she scrapped the curried lamb around on her plate a few times before deciding no one was paying attention and now was her chance. Quickly, she grabbed her purse and headed towards the ladies’ room.
The blonde had begun a whistled rendition of ‘It’s Raining Men’ and was really getting her groove on when she heard the sound of the bathroom door opening. Clambering onto the toilet seat with skill considering she had three-inch heels on, Alice peeked over the top of the stall to see her girlfriend walk in. Dana almost jumped a foot in the air when she looked around and seen a head wearing a big grin poking out from one of the stalls.
“Jesus Alice,” she hissed as Alice clambered down elegantly, well elegantly for her, and unlocked the stall.
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(28 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
She might not take a sex toy out in public but I bet she will still be getting jiggy in the bathrooms…eh? Ha how embarrassed would you be if you got caught doing it in a resturant loo?? Loved the second part to this chapter…Please keep up the good writing and PPS babe :) Its all good
OMFG…that was hot!! LMAO @ the poor older woman witnessing such hotness. I’m suprised she didn’t die of a heart attack right then and there. I hope Dana doesn’t see this as a bad experience and she will continue to show her nasty side once in a while. :D And for the record, imo you’re not so much innocent until otherwise is proven. :P
damn, woman…hell of a comeback, you know that? Yowza. I have to say that this is perfect inspiration, I have to admit I was a bit writer’s-blocked with the smut for my current chapter. So thanks for that, and I still heart this story immensely. Poor old lady, and I lol’d at Dana and the manager. I can just see that happening.
That was great Alice and Dana got caught by that old lady LOL
You know you make it real hard not to hop a plane to Scotland so I can hug you sometimes. Thanks. PPS.
If you consider charming a good thing then thanks, i do try ;P That was f*cking hilarious about the traumatized old woman LMFAO!!!! Poor Dana cant “keep it in her pants”, i do hope she doesnt get outed as a sexual pervert. But it was funny as hell. Whats wrong with saying yeehaw? I’m a Texan and say it all the time. Oh and i like smooth legs by the way LOL ;D Thanks for the post, PPS :D
ha cool! That was great, im so sorry your highness for spelling her name wrong. Great post tho, and i look forward to reading my favourite authors posts :D
LOL brilliant part! I haven’t posted a comment till now but i have been reading. Thought it was about time i supported a fellow scot! :D
woah girl, that was HOT! And very funny with the poor old lady in the end stall. My guess is that she was just jealous and wanted in…I mean, she must have know that it was lezzy tennis star Dana Fairbanks and Alice Pieszecki of The Chart Pieszecki in there going at it. Whatever, old ladies gotta get their kicks too, right? Awesome update Bradshaw! You’ve been missed :)
Loved it yet again! And I’m all for supporting fellow Scots too!! Nice one!:)
Wow, busted in the bathroom …. again!!. Where can I buy one of those ‘toys’ Hot stuff.