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    Destiny in a Mechanics Shop (Pt 21) Pop in for a visit

    Story written on March 8, 2005 by Imlovinit.
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    Number of Comments: 17
    Words: 784
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=52487
    Author Notes:

    Just a little visit before work.

    KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK!

    Tina jumped as she was so caught up in Bette’s presents. “Hang on a tick.” Tina screamed as she hurriedly got the corset off and her t-shirt back on. Sliding over the floorboards, Tina stopped inches away from the door, trying to unlock the locks as quickly as possible. Finally opening the door a looking little flustered.

    Tina’s jaw dropped and her eyes bulged, Bette looked amazing. Wearing her brown steel-gaps, dirty old jeans, a white wife beater and a black biker leather jacket. Her hair was left natural.

    Bette giggled. “And a good morning to you to.” Tina ushered Bette in with her hand, for her vocabulary was unresponsive.

    Bette looked down at the coffee table to see the box sprawled open. Bette smiled “I see you got my delivery” Bette stated as she looked back to Tina who was still holding the door open and olgering at Bette. Bette couldn’t help it, she turned and walked back to Tina, releasing her grasp on the door, to which she closed and then directed Tina over to the couch to sit.

    “It would be nice if you actually said something.” Bette stated as she sat Tina down on the couch, to which she sat next to her.

    ‘I know what will do it.’ Bette thought as she brought her lips closer to Tina’s. “So how has your morning been?”

    Tina replied with a light whimper before Bette lighted touched lips with Tina’s, then looking back into Tina’s eyes. “Miss me?”

    Meanwhile Tina’s eyes were still closed, yet she heard every word that Bette had said. After a few moments Tinas replied. “Like you wouldn’t believe.”

    “Ahh finally, she lives.” Bette giggled.

    “I thought you couldn’t see me until Saturday?” Tina smiled smugly as if she had just won a debate. Opening her eyes slowly, just in case the whole scenario was just a dream.

    “All right if you want me to leave.” Said Bette. As she started to get up, but was pulled down abruptly.

    “Youre not going anywhere.” Tina said sultry. “You expect me not to get aroused when you give me a present like this?” Tina held the thong up on one finger.

    Bette swallowed hard, trying to control her arousal in the best possible way. “Remember T, no pressure…Is it getting hot in here?” Tina repositioned herself so she was sitting on Bette’s lap. Staring intently into Bette’s eyes, trying to figure out if Bette was feeling what she was feeling. Tina’s eyebrows crinkled for a moment, to which Bette became a little self-conscious. “What?”

    “Nothing at all.” Tina replied just before pressing her lips onto Bette’s, passionately letting her tongue lick Bette’s top lip. Bette couldn’t help herself; she slid her hands under Tina’s shirt, lovingly rubbing her partners warm and tender skin. As soon as Bette started her light rubbing, Tina retreated from the kiss. Bette pouted a little. “I’m sorry Tina.”

    Tina swept back one of Bette’s stray hairs. “No its okay baby…Anyway I thought you didn’t have time to see me?”

    Bette leaned back into the couch. “That’s preposterous, I always want to see my girl. I had a few extra minutes to come over before I had to go to work.” Bette lightly kissed Tina on the lips.

    “Well I’m glad you visited.” Tina gave Bette a more passionate kiss.

    Bette pulled away. “Well I should come over more often…” Bette kissed Tina again.

    “Yes you should.” Tina pulled back and smirked. Bette looked at her watch. “Sorry, but I guess this visit has to end otherwise Mickies gonna be on my *****.” Tina slipped off Bette’s lap and back onto the other side of the couch. “So when will I see you again?” Tina pouted like a 3 year old kid.

    “Tomorrow and I promise I wont be a minute late!” Bette pecked Tina on the lips, and then strode sexily over to Tinas front door; she turned and admired Tina’s position. Her hair messy, one leg resting over the armrest of the couch and the other comfortably placed on the floor. “Beautiful.” Bette purred as she twisted to doorknob to let herself out.

    As the door closed Tina whispered to herself. “I love you Babe.”

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    1. i have not read this yet, but want you to know that personally i have wondered where you were i have loved this story and please continue it is so good and i have missed it(did a double take when i saw the title…lol)

    3. this story is one of the stories where as soon as i see you have posted i can’t wait to read it, please continue with it, you do an amazing job of bringing us along for the ride….

    5. Yes, please continue with this story or any other one. I really enjoy your writing style! Your story is always fun and entertaining. I hope you plan to continue. 5 Bright Stars!

    10. what you mean you gonna stop writing!?! omg, i’ve read this since the beginning! i’m still reading, now get to writing! and don’t make us wait so long, it’s been like two months or something! write, write, write!

    12. i totally think you need to keep writing this. its a fun story and very different. plus we need to keep bette and tina happy together even if it is only in fanfics.

    13. I hope that you continue writing…whether it is this story (which I happen to like), or a different one…keep writing. And, don’t compare yourself to anyone else. Write what and how you want. That’s the advise people give me when I am struggling and feeling unworthy…so I am passing that right on to you. I like your style and your story. Thanks!

    14. There are some really good writers on this site and you know what? You’re one of them. This story is great as is your writing. I was glad to see you post again!

    15. I also hope you continue with this story I have enjoyed it from the beginging..You have talen don’t let the lack of comments disturb you some of us just can’t comment all the time but we do read and your good…Thanks

    16. You really should keep on writing this. I’ve been reading the story from the start and missed it when you stopped posting for a while – I’ve only just realised that three chapters had appeared since I last looked and I was thrilled. Please keep it coming cos B&T are meant to be together and that tiny flame you have may just turn into a huge flame at some point rather than being extinguished.

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