Previously…
“No, Alice, its not a key to my car!” replied Bette, cross at having her brilliant gift’s thunder stolen by Alice. She quickly turned to Helena “But of course Sweetheart, should you desire a key to my car, you shall have it. But this… is a key to my place”
Helena was now looking, very happily indeed, at the little card on the key ring
Curiosity Pinched The Estelle
“Come” smiled Helena.
“Come?” echoed Dana.
“Come” explained Tina.
“Come!” exclaimed Alice
“Come!!” groaned Estelle
“Come!!!” laughed Peggy
“Mm hmm. Come” whispered Bette seductively. “As many times as they said. Every. Night.”
Chapter 15
“Al?”
“Yeah?”
“Umm…” hesitated Dana
Alice glanced towards the passenger seat where Dana sat. She was giving Dana a lift home after Tina had been hurriedly called back home by a frantic babysitter and a wailing Angelica. Bette had rushed to her place and Alice had a sneaking suspicion that she had gone to check the cleanliness of her abode, lest Helena took up on the offer to visit. The Peabody’s had retreated to their estate after a grumbling Helena had been packed into their car at her mother’s… request.
Alice wondered briefly why they were spending this considerable amount of story-time discussing transport arrangements of the dinner guests, but then decided that the author was probably trying to make up for the mess she made of the seating arrangement.
“Well? Spit it out Dana! Don’t tell me you’ve just noticed something, like you noticed Bette and Helena getting together ten days too late!”
“Funny” Dana scowled before her expression hesitant again “But yeah, I did notice something weird…”
“Yes, Dana, they are twins” interrupted Alice sarcastically.
“I knew that!” Dana fidgeted in her seat, just itching to throttle the smirking Alice. She changed tactics “You know what? I’m just not going to tell you what I noticed.”
“Oh come on! Tell me, tell me! I’ll be nice”
“Nuh huh. And it was a good one too, I bet it didn’t even occur to you…”
“Please please please ple…” begged Alice before she too, changed tactics “Or else, I’ll put that stupid posh accent back on!”
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Fan’bloody’tastic V! Aaaaaah i love it!!! You are just too funny and yeah like Pands said, crazy too! Don’t know why you didn’t like this chapter, because it really is very well written and definitly upto standard, can’t wait for the next one! Thanks!
funny as always cant wait for another chapter! PPS
Absolutely crazy!!! I loved it. Who is it? I have no idea..but I do hope the artist formerly known as V knows, clearly distinguishes here from there and makes sure not to get caught in any darkened alleys by Bette….hehehe
ooooo, i don’t know, but it’s about to get funky….please post…like straight away….love this fic.
This is absolutely hilarious- your best so far I think! It was effortless and I empathise with your characters for a number of reasons which I daren’t say here. Brilliant! I see you’ve poste again so I’m off to read that. Thanks.
You!! I love the playful wordiness! I also had coffee not too long ago, which is known to activate a certain bodily function, and laughing does NOT help. Yet, I was only on page one and I refuse to leave until I get to the end…oh, the internal damage you have caused! :scrams:
Good chapter. B&H is sweet and Bette is cute, anyway let see whats next, thanks!
Vvitchy you are too funny…and suddenly i’m worried about WHO Estelle’s companion is!! It better not be anyone I KNOW!! ANywho… You’re crazy just thought i’d let you know that and this is another great chapter thanks!
Master V, I love it !! … And what’s with the comment about moodswings ?? Don’t care because you write so well and life is NOT always funny. Keep up you fantastic job aaaand… PPS
Well this chapter was quite different from the previous ones, liked the humour however and I have no clue who Estelle’s companion is….so please post soon.
Well, I do like this silly side of Bette too !! I have two words for you, Master V : Frigging hilarious ! And did I mention you definitely have a way with words ?… Because some of those girls’ lines sounded like poetry to me. Loved this chapter. Off to read the latest ones…