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    Story written on March 8, 2010 by str8yesterday.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75127
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    Tonight is the night. Tonight, I either get everything I have ever and could ever want, or I walk away with a hole in my chest, because I will leave my heart with her, beating with every breath she breathes, for it will never belong to another

    Tonight is the night. Tonight, I either get everything I have ever and could ever want, or I walk away with a hole in my chest, because I will leave my heart with her, beating with every breath she breathes, for it will never belong to another. I personally do not have any accessories to accommodate a hole in my chest, so I pray that Tina will be merciful.

    I have not spoken with Tina since I received the invitation to her house warming. I just plan on showing up; I mean she is expecting me, hence the invitation. I have done a pretty good job of ignoring her thus far, so I might as well continue. And what I mean by pretty good job is, I am still sane, because frankly I am on the verge of psycho craziness. In fact, I am so close to psycho crazy I can smell it’s stench and feel it’s breath on the back of my neck.

    It has been 6 long weeks since I have laid eyes on Tina. That is the longest I have went without seeing her in over 10 years. She has left me numerous messages. I keep replaying one specific message over and over because it is so Tina, and it cracks me up every time I listen to it. It goes something like this….”Bette, I swear on my uncle Odell’s grave, I don’t understand why you have a cell phone! If you are not going to answer it then it is useless, much like that blue tooth headset, because I have told you time and time again, people just think you are talking to yourself! Now take your stubborn pigheadedness and shove it up your ass! And while you’re up there pull out your phone, wipe off all the shit and call me back!…..oh, and I love you…..and…………. I miss you a little.”  First of all, she doesn’t even have an Uncle Odell.  Secondly, maybe I want people to think I am talking to myself; it saves me the trouble of having to pretend I am listening to whatever they have to say. And thirdly, I most certainly am not pig headed or stubborn. She always says that, and I don’t know where she comes up with this stuff. I mean she is the one that would fight with a brick wall, or any wall for the matter. That is why she is the lawyer! But I do love her, and miss her….a little.

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    3. omg…you are awesome. you are captivating me with this story. the way you take time to pen the littlest details is truly appreciated. I eagerly await the next chap.

    4. wow… now i have to wonder why tina looked like she was crying… i just hope tina didn’t meet someone in the 6 weeks bette has been hiding out… and thats why she was crying… i hope i’m wrong… lets hope tina feels the same way to bette as bette is to her… love this… pps

    8. This is a wonderfully written story but the title changes keep me mixed up. Could the title changes become the chapter subject instead and stick to one story title, less confusing that way. I keep thinking I have not read any of the story until I go backwards and read and see that it is the same story. Hope bette will be the only one there for the first hour or so, maybe they can talk a little. REally, really like this story. Can hardly wait for them to talk and also to hear what Tina is thinking. Loved the part about Uncle Odell, that was hilarious. Just loved it. Thanks for sharing with us. PPS.

    12. This is such a beautifully written story. Bette’s anguish is palpable and painful to read. I can’t wait to see where this story will lead.

    17. Str8, you rocked it out of the park once again. Any chance of posting faster? LOL!!! I know, patience. Okay, so this part (and a bit that followed) had me on the floor, because I’m often given a similar lecture: “Bette, I swear on my uncle Odell’s grave, I don’t understand why you have a cell phone! If you are not going to answer it then it is useless, much like that blue tooth headset, because I have told you time and time again, people just think you are talking to yourself!” LMAO!!! Too funny. Thanks for coming through and posting your first fan fic. ;-)

    20. I didn’t bother to read all the comments through, I wanted to write down this so fast: has ever someone told you that you are talented?I meant this very seriously!…=)

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