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    Fire and Ice Chapter 12

    Story written on April 29, 2008 by firestarter.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=69402
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    just one look….and i fell so hard, hard, hard…

    April 1999   Los Angeles, California

    Bette slowly paced the length of the gallery as artists and guests began filling the main room.   The ever increasing buzz of conversation was of little distraction to her plight. 

    She intently searched each face that entered through the glass enveloped entrance, each time relaxing her frame when it was clear that the person she was waiting for had yet to darken the doors. 

    She rested against one of the pillars jutting up intermitently throughout the gallery, trying her best to look collected and most of all, inconspicuous. 

    It was still early, she really needed to placate herself and prepare mentally for the business of the evening.  She was just finding it increasingly difficult to walk around and play the part without stumbling over herself in anticipation of the blonde’s arrival. 

    "So…where’s the lady of the hour?" Alice breezed up to Bette’s side and playfully poked her elbow. 

    Bette willed her eyes away from the entrance long enough to raise her eyebrows at the quirky lady at her side.

    Alice had delivered on Bette’s request for "killer" attire and shown up almost on time.

    "Your late…and would you keep your voice down, Alice?"  Bette hushed.

    Alice placed a hand defensively on her hip. 

    "Oh, come on Bette.  Are you serious?  You really need to loosen up…" Alice was astonished by how this blonde woman had turned Bette into a bundle of nerves.

    Bette’s gazed remained on the entrance.

    "Okay…I know what you need…you need to get on that whiskey train, girl…’cause it’s gonna be a long night with you wound up like an eight day clock." Alice clicked her tongue for emphasis and disappeared in the direction of the open bar.

    Bette stood watching the door, inhaling deep each time a crowd of people entered and likewise exhaling when the blonde was no where to be found.  She barely noticed Alice extending a drink her way.

    Bette crossed her arms and smiled.

    "Are you suggesting that I get drunk, Alice?" Bette’s tone more relaxed, feigning mild shock.

    "Hey, do whatcha gotta do…all I’m saying is this "pine-ing" thing you got goin’ on here, well it’s not working for you, sweets."  Alice thrust the highball glass full of carmel colored liquid towards Bette. 

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    2. Holy cow Fire, that was breathtaking just reading how Bette felt! I love how you’re writing tis story…so explicit on what each one was feeling and thinking at the time. Can’t wait for your next update!

    5. What’s with this slow burn you taking Bette and Tina through??? It’s good, but I’m really about to come out of my seat in anticipation of each chapter. PPS

    6. Bette is surely “pining” as Alice stated so eloquently. :) I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina interact after such heat on Tina’s arrival. :)

    18. please, please, please post soon. ive been lost, like bette without tina, without your updates. haha. glad your sickness is gone… hope youre all bette soon. this chapter was great.

    19. m_s_gypsy took the words right out of my mouth…OH MAN! You did not just stop it there, you didn’t!! Not even a brieft description of Tina’s hotness before going to bed? Not right!

    21. AWEsome update…..very palpable writing….hope the next one contains Tina’s thoughts; did she happen to notice Bette’s moment of clarity/vulnerability?? I don’t think your writing was compromised at all on the last post…but definitely for the sake of your own peace of mind, hold off until you feel it, that’s what i’m doing ;) Thx for the update & PPS!!

    22. Is “Torture” your middle name, firestarter? Just asking because you’re doing this slooow, slooow burn d@mn well. Thank you for this update and let the Dance of Seduction Part Deux, begin! :>

    23. I could just see JB/Bette sweeping her bangs and looking up to See Tina across the room. Perfect. , “Bette coaxed herself to open her eyes, and when she did, she nearly fell to her knees – such a powerful image, I could fell my own legs get weak. Thanks for the update and 4 pages. PPS

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