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FIX IT CHALLENGE #4: Infidelity?
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Infidelity?
Getting to the computer and online hadn’t been easy for Tina Kennard… She’d felt her heart pound heavily and her fingers trembled immensly as she entered the nickname ‘Lindsay76′… As she waited for the computer to connect her with the chatbox she almost chickened out… Hiding her face in her hands she peered through her fingers at the screen and saw someone called ‘daddyof2′ was already speaking to her
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Daddyof2: Hello Lindsey, how are you?
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Oh god… What had gotten into her, doing this? She shook her head and ran her fingers through her long blond locks…
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Daddyof2: Why are you here?
Lindsey76: I am not sure…
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She wasn’t sure… She didn’t feel sure of anything lately… She shivered and just kept on staring at the screen, waiting for an answer
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Daddyof2: Are you looking for a friend?
Lindsey76: Yes…
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Yes…. That was what she needed… She and Bette had not been friendly to eachother… Alright, to be perfectly honost, she had not been real friendly to Bette… Thinking about her gorgeous brown-haired partner, Tina sighed…
The lines of communication between them had been weary ever since Angelica had been born… Tina was so incredibly scared that even now she was clinging onto her chest, as if holding her heart in place… She was afraid that in the eyes of Bette, she had failed… Failed by not giving birth in the natural way, failed by not being the perfect mother for their little Angel and the perfect partner for Bette… Often she was so extremely tired that she spoke to Bette in anirritated and nasty tone she had fastly become accustomed to… And Bette had felt in no position to talk back or stand up for herself, because she wanted Tina to stay… The blond woman behind the screen caught a glimps of all she had done wrong, and a glimpse of her true compassionate self was hurting, stingingly, for what she had done to Bette… And she felt guilty, undesirable, tired and perhaps most of all unworthy and insecure… How could Bette love her if she didn’t even like herself?
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Daddyof2: Let me be your friend… Maybe I can help you?
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Yes, you fixed it! There is no conundrum yet created by Chaiken that cannot be converted to a connubial confection by our fearless fanfic fashioners! Another awkward agitprop averted! Bravo!
LOL when I read Bette saying that she loves Tina I was like WHAT? SHE’s CHEATING YOU!!!!!! then I continue reading and I was RFOLAMO when Bette says: who’s your daddy? LOL… I loved it!!!… excellent as always ;)
awesome! for a second i thought: wait a minute this is about fix! why she continued chatting! but then i can read how clever and fantastic writter you are! this was so so good, if just we can a little of this in the next season for B&T.
Okay, I am sorry but you can not study to be a doctor right at this moment. The show needs you now, Doctor justloveB+T. The show needs you to do several transplants of hearts and brains, ASAP. You are to be on the next plane to B&T land. Okay on a serious note, this was awesome. You took a horrible scene and turned into a very loving reconnection of my two favorite women. Now go study so that you can really fix their hearts. You really are going to make a good doctor someday.
If only, loved this Bette is so cute. thanks
Alright!!! You got this story right as it should have been. It’s so amazing how so many women here see Bette and Tina, wanting them together, happy in love. Thanks for this wonderful rendition of how the scene should have played out.
LMAO!!!!!!! I figured that was what you had done. I’m like, “Wait a minute. She’s probably a bigger TiBetter than me. No way in HELL will this go down the crapper!” Alright I need to wake up. It’s too damn early. =/
Oh F*ck that was good…I loved that story a lot B+T =)
Hehe, Mama T and Mama B are no longer making cookies. I love how you tied it to the sex therapist, very clever!
Oh JLB&T you’re so goood to our B&T, thank you.
i knew it!!!!! perfect…if only…this was perfect. TiBette forever!!! LOL
LMAO when I read daddyof2 saying that he loves Lindsey I was like WHAT? and when she said I love you, I need you. IN return I screamed HEY WHAT THE FUCK? But phew, than god I decided to finish from there.. Loved it..
Genius!
Okay now that I’m actually awake I read this again. LOL And I actually have a more intelligent comment this time. Way back when I was in my late teens I was engaged to a guy (Shut up! lol) that I had originally met online. Anyway, there were times it was tough for me to speak to him as Heather and Glenn, so every once in a blue moon we’d log onto different usernames and chat as we had when we first met (long-distance relationship for a long time, hence the chatting online) before things got serious. It actually did help, and this stand-alone took me back to that time in my life. So yeah just in case anyone might think doing that is a bunch of crap, don’t knock it till ya try it. ;)
Damn this is good and you are awesome JL B&T and this is the way for B&T that we all wanted. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Well, what can i say, writing these feelings down, i know for sure that you have had cybersex yourself in the past. I sure recognized them luv. Great writing. Bedankt liefje, mijn dag kan niet meer stuk nu.
Very nice – keep it up. We all wish this would have taken place in season 3 :o). Post soon
This story originally threw me for a loop when I read it last week (playing catch-up with all the challenge submissions), and I was so pleased to see how you truly did fix it! “Hey, baby, who’s your daddy?” ROTFLMAO! Great job! You tricked most of us, it seems!