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Get The Girl—Chapter 4: Bowling and Serious Talk
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“Yes..Porter”
She chuckles “Touché”
We both laugh until she motions me to stand by her which I do. “Alright. We are going to perform the dance of bowling”
“The what?” I ask incredulously
She chuckles “The dance of bowling” she repeats and I have no fucking idea what she means until she imitates the movement she did earlier without the ball
“You have to get your form right first. So we are going to practice without the ball”
I nod and for the next 30 minutes or so that’s all we are doing. Pretend to hold the ball take your calculated steps and release the ball at the same time. Cross your right leg back and to the left and keep your left foot facing forward and don’t cross the line. No problem….Then I added the bowling ball and let me tell you. It was different. My first couple of balls went into the gutter..Then Bette showed me how to put a little flick in my wrist to spin the ball upon release and slowly but surely after several tries I managed to knock at least three pins down. We keep doing this over and over again. She showed me how to pick up spares and how the score was calculated as we went along..I took it all in…So now I was on my one hundredth throw it seemed like
“You’re stiff when you release” she remarks not realizing how that sounded
“That’s what she said” I reply and she immediately throws her head back and laughs
“I walked right into that one didn’t I”
I nod and grin as she walks over to me and spins me around. She picks up the bowling ball that just came back through the return system and hands it to me..She then guides me to the starting point and adjusts my elbow with her hand..I feel her body pressed into mine and her breath on my neck as she speaks. Ughhhh…Why is she getting to me..
“Ok..Make sure you keep your elbow at this position when you bring the ball back and release. Keep your elbow right at this height…Once you release the ball make sure you follow all the way through with your motion…Just relax now….You got it?” Her breathe hits by the back neck sending shivers down my spine.
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I am enjoying this story…. but oh what a mess. No one has a straight forward relationship with anyone else. Everyone has someone they like but isn’t available. I am sorry that Bette is still having pain from her injuries. I do hope that some of that will heal as time goes on. I understand her fear that her scars might be repugnant to others, but her fear is not keeping her safe or comforted. This is something Bette is going to have to work through or she needs to get some counseling on. Everyone has body issues and some are worse than others. But when someone cares for you or falls in love with you, they accept you for who you are: flaws and all. Bette has a beautiful personality and a lovely charm and a scarred body. She is going to be a very lonely person if she allows her past and these scars to keep her from her from the future possibilities of her life…..
As to Alyssa? A senior in high school forced by her parents to date another girl to assist the merger of two businesses? That’s the sort of thing that royal families did in the middle ages. Arrange marriages and relationships between families to enhance the bank account. Oh well…. got to see where this goes.
Keep it going…. thank you for the chapter.
A truly good story!
This is a mess like Martha already pointed out.
I love what Bette does for Tina despite her own feelings for Tina. And Tina is so in denial about her feelings towards Bette, unfortunately also because she now only has one wish and that is Alyssa, her first crush. But she’s a sweetheart to point out to Alyssa that there’s a reason Bette shuts herself off from everyone. If anyone brings Bette and Alyssa together as friends, it’s Tina.
I feel so bad for Alyssa that she is forced to be with someone because of a corporate business, the merging between her fathers and Holly’s companies. That must be really terrible.
And poor Bette, so insecure because of the severe burns she has suffered and so much pain, even though her nerves may start working again, the scars on her body and mind will never go away. Perhaps with therapy, the trauma of what happened to her will become more bearable, but it will never go away completely.
I’m very curious how this will all go.
Boy, such a tough plot to resolve with Bette’s scars needing time to heal, yet her emotions/hormones being so active when she’s near Tina.
U’ve really taken on a literary challenge. But keep goin’ as we come along with ya!!
Love your story, hope you post soon. I like all the twists and turn… our heart takes us on a ride sometimes with out a clear path and at this age can be extra confusing.
And it has a feel of a mobster world first Bette and her step dad now Alyssa’s dad. Just has that feel but i like. Thank you