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GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 1
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“Fine I’ll drop it for now but tell Mr. Piddles to watch his back.”
“You’re crazy you’re the one with the vendetta against my cat.” Dana muttered underneath her breath garnering an evil stare from Alice.
Alice looked back over at Bette. “So what’s going on you look snazzier then usual.”
“I have to meet with an artist later today…in fact I have to get going I have a pretty busy day today.”
Bette leaned over and hugged her sister bye. “I’ll see you guys later if not I’ll see you tomorrow.”
The girls were looking on as a few heads turned when Bette made her way out of the Planet.
“Kit your sister works too much.”
“Don’t I know it but you try telling that to Bette it just goes in one ear and out the other. No she won’t slow down until she’s good and ready to…or if she finds someone to get her to stop.”
Shane looked at Alice with a weary expression. “Forget it Al last time you tried to fix Bette up it was a disaster and she threatened to end you if you tried again.”
“She was just playing besides that was a long time ago. I’m treating the last time as a learning experience now I know she doesn’t like woman more alpha than her.”
“Honey that girl was a dominatrix you should have known better you’re lucky my baby sis didn’t do more then threaten you.”
“Yeah well it wouldn’t hurt to put a few feelers out there just in case.”
“It’s your funeral Al.” Shane went back to her paper and Kit went back to work shaking her head at Alice’s meddling.
Bette strolled into the CAC wanting to get to work early. The last exhibition had been extremely lucrative for the CAC she was hoping that the board would reward her for her hard work and that Franklin would come through with her raise.
James shot up when he saw Bette walking towards him.
“James do I have any messages?”
James handed Bette her messages. “The first two messages need a response by today the last three don’t need an immediate response.”
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HEY T! YOU HAVE ANOTHER WONDERFULL STORY STARTING AND IT SHOULD BE QUIET INTERESTING TK AN ARTIST.YOU CANT LEAVE US HANGING.you said you had alot things going on butt you have to find the time to come back for updates for both stories..tk a daughterinlaw not for long with bette around!
this is an awesome start – the pacing of this story is so wonderful but it is hard to be left hanging. So glad you wrote this.
Toribio…this was absolutely wonderful. It really evoked images of what your narration describes. I hope you’ll continue it. If you do, it is sure to be one of the seminal pieces. It grabbed me…it’s really quite good. Please continue.
Oh, no you didn’t just leave me hangin like that! Hmph, the nerve! LOL! Come on, you’re killing me here! I have tpo know if it was Tina she turned around and saw. i bet it was…. uess I’ll have to wait and see. Please post soon!
Oh no… daughter in law? wife to Roger? Huh? So many questions that need to be answered… so PPS :D
i think you should continue with that…so tina is a daughter-in-law? and this is her who just came in? i hope bette won’t get involved with helena again
Wow! Absolutely fabulous!! I was immediately hooked! Thanks!
Very good start! i am waiting Bette meet properly the artist Kenard!
I agree with everyone else…you must continue this soon…I hope Tina isn’t married to Helena…
Great first chapter waiting for the next one…(ok impatiently waiting) thank you!!
WOW!!! This story is going to be fun!!!!! Thanks
You BETTER continue this, or I WILL hunt you down… said with love, of course. ;)
Love the sound of this, but please tell me that Tina is Peggy’s ex-daughter-in law and not with Helena.
wow i must been really busy to miss this…great writing as usual…continue.
loving the story. so come on now, don’t leave me hangin’ here. Please continue.
That was wonderful. Tina is an artist and Peggy daughter in law How long will it take Bette to win Tina? thanks for this awesome story
yeah, TK as an artist, what a great idea? wonder how she’s Peggys daughter in law though, is that by Helena or by Peggys son? please post soon!
This story is going to be full of twists and turns. Bette has to meet with Helena 3 times a month and TIna is an artist, who is Peggy’s daughter in law…..interesting. How long before Bette gets Tina to express her “artistic” abilities in a personal setting ? LOL! Please continue….
Yes you should continue this story. I believe that Bette has found her next artist for the upcoming show. I hope that Tina is not with Helena and that the daughter in-law statement was more of a passing issue. It would not be a good situation for Bette to take Tina away from a Peabody.
A T&B beginning,love them. I hope you continue with this one…Tina is PP’s Daughter-in-Law, now is it through Helena, PP has another Daughter or is it the Son. And to top it T is an Artist. Great Start, looking forward to reading more. Thanks.
I’m hooked! I love any story that features Bette and Peggy. But better than that I love the twist you’ve put on things w/ Bette having already had a failed relationship w/ Helena. This should be very interesting…..Is Tina married to Helena or does Peggy have other children? So excited to read where you go with this story. You are off to a great start so please continue.
Damn this is good and interesting start and like it. Hope Tina not married to Helena anymore. Ok post soon please, thanks!
you cant stop there….love the idea of tina as an artist. pps
What a great start..I can’t wait for more.
Wow T this sounds like another great story! Franklin is an ass through and through. And it’s really not cool for Peggy Peabody to force her daughter in Bette’s face – it’s unethical on Peggy’s part to put Bette into that position. Peggy should pay to have her daughter educated elsewhere…you know she could tell that Bette didn’t want to do this part of the “proposition.” I wonder if Peggy has alterior motives. Tina as an artist sounds very inspirational. Can’t wait for more!
Het Tori, A brilliant beginning. Fabulous to have the gang together and having a blast. Bette was overwhelmed by the beauty she saw on the beach and here’s hoping it is the same beauty now asking her if she needs some assistance. Terrific twist to have Tina (I hope) as the artist even if Bette has to put up with teaching Helena about art. Maybe Bette could use Tina’s paintings as an illustration. Getting to know the painter can only help appreciate the art. As always you have crafted a beautiful drama here. Full of promise and excitment. Please continue soon. A Fan.
erm…can we make a decision after a second chapter? :D please? :D