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Give Me A Reason
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Part Seven
The night was dark, stars were visible in the sky, temperature was a little bit warm and the air filled with silence as they drove the Pacific Coast Highway leading to the blonde’s Malibu mansion. Tina was on the driver’s seat of her red Aston Martin convertible and sitting beside her was the gorgeous brunette who was enjoying the feel of the wind in her hair.
The blonde’s eyes were carefully fixed on the road trying her might not to be distracted by the caramel skinned beauty whose words just a moment ago while in the midst of a very sensual dance was still playing in her ears
‘Tina let’s get out of here…’
Those were Bette’s words, short yet the meaning was conveyed very clearly and the way the brunette whispered it to her ear was making her shiver with desire.
While Bette’s eyes were gazing at the view that the car passed by, her heart was racing as she remembered the blonde’s touches and whispers while dancing to the sexy beat of the music. Just like Tina, she had never been with a woman before but she couldn’t believe the effect of the blonde on her. She couldn’t even remember feeling so turned on like this with any man that she had ever been with. The brunette bit her lower lip as the feel of the wetness in between her legs was becoming more prominent as the minutes gone by.
Tina took a secret glance at the brunette; she wanted to know what she was thinking at this very moment. She wanted to ask her but she wouldn’t dare doing that. She was sure she saw lust and desire in those dark brown eyes while they were at the dance floor but was it just a part of their agreement? Was it an act that Bette was playing for her pleasure or was the emotion real? Tina was now feeling vulnerable and it may be a wishful thinking on her part but she hoped that what she saw in Bette’s eyes was true… she hoped that Bette wanted her too.
The brunette shifted on her seat when she felt Tina’s eyes on her and she thought about the things that would and might happen once they reached the blonde’s villa, which only added to the anxiety, anticipation, and excitement that she was feeling at the moment.
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WOW! Pretty rough night for both of them. They are both in a bad place right now. I’m sure thru your awesome story telling you can fix it. I can’t wait to see where this is going. :) PPS!
I’m so sorry for both of them. Tina is reliving the nightmare of what veronica did to her and Bette doesn’t know that, of course, so she doesn’t understand how Tina could be so rough with her since this is her first time and she feels obligated. They need to talk to each other before Bette leaves there and they end everything before it really gets started. I hope they can get all their emotional baggage out of the way. I know you can fix this. Thanks for the update.
Tina unfortunately an abusive manner she already had been with a woman. Because the delicate touch of Tina became rough, will that was it a reflection of what happened in your childhood? – Reaction after Tina feel lágrinas was what I expected, I’m sure she do all better.
Tina unfortunately an abusive manner she had been with a woman. Because the delicate touch of Tina became rough, was it a reflection of what happened in your childhood? – Tina’s reaction after feeling the tears was what I expected, I’m sure she’ll do better.
I felt sorry for both of them….thanks phacey great chapter.
Hope they work it out. Great update
God to see you post again. It’s been too long. Poor Bette! I know that she feels obligated to Tina for saving her and Dylan but what a humilating way to do that. Tina is trying to right a wrong done to her. She has become her nightmare, an abuser too. This dubious plan of hers is so wrong in many ways. I hope she comes to reveal this is not the way to make herself whole. Poor Bette has sold her soul and has so must to do to forgive herself. They both need forgiveness for and to each other. PPS
Wow.. that was totally unexpected. I hope they are able to talk before someone leaves head over heels. I feel sorry for Bette for having such a rough first time with a woman and for thinking about selling her body meanwhile. And I feel sorry for Tina, too. She didn’t want to hurt her or make her cry. Thank you for updating :)
I had to read all the story again, can’t wait to another chapter.
Tough chapter, can’t wait to see what happens next. Please post soon.
Great chapter Phacey.
WOW from me too… well looks like tine is about to spill her past to bette… and i think that will be a good thing… another great chapter… bring on the next
Cant wait for next chptr pps lovfe this story
I have to agree with cvu you feel sorry for both of them. Very well written phacey..PPS
Great update. I have missed this story. Thank you
Missed this story.Hard times for our girls.Thank you.PPS
Tina needs a good psychologist and years of therapy, not buying another woman’s body. As for Bette, I don’t even know, what’s done is done and she will have to just deal with the fact that she once decided to sell herself for money. They should slow down, admit they are attracted to each other, talk about their past, cry together, date, I don’t know, lol. I just hope it won’t be one of those “few years later they met” stories.
First I’m sooo happy you updated. And what an update it is! A lot of things are to be considered. Obviously T is really into Bette, problem with roughness is mainly, I think, due not knowing each other well and trusting and due the nature of their relationship – transaction. Nothing is wrong in roughness as it is senceare reflection of passion,but with those problems…and than there’s Bettes feeling of self worth – or lack of it.goo thing T stopped,showed her intentions and cravings run deeper than just having and owimg B,crying just confirms it. Hope B will realise it.There are already soo much admiration,lust and wanting involved…. Yay! Do hope you’re planning on making Tina taking a year offer from Bette. Please update soon!!!
Wow, there are so many things going on here. Not sure if I feel worse for Bette or Tina. Clearly there are some deeply hidden personal issues that both of them are trying to avoid. Even though this isn’t how I wanted their night to end the chapter was very well written.pps!
This is my favourite of all your current stories and I hope you won’t leave it too long to update. My memory is not so good which means I have to go back and read the previous chapter. I love your style of writing and you are such a good story teller which always leaves the reader wanting more.Thanks for answering my question. I agree with some of the comments here. B & T ought to take a break from sex and have a talk. Perhaps finish the night just lying in each other’s arms and savour the closeness. Take it slow from now on. After all, Bette did offer to give herself to Tina for a week, a month or even more. I am hoping forever!! Thanks, Phacey, for updating. Once a month is far too long though.
Wow this is a rough situation they come from such different backgrounds and got alot of stuff they have been through and they don’t really know or understand eachother I’m a little nervous and anxious pps I love this story
Both of these women need to take a step back. They need to reassess their situations and maybe get to know each other a little better before taking the next step. Please don’t wait a whole month for the next chapter to this story. :)
Feel bad for them and hope they and get to know each other and make thin right. Please post more, thanks!
Great to have this story back – I really hope you let them talk it out and get to know and trust eachother.
WOW.Great update.Sad story but I hope you will fix this mess.PPS
I’ll say the same thing WOW! I never thought that their sexy night ended up this bad. I share others’ sentiments, I mean I feel sorry for those two and at same time, I pity them. Both women had gone through different difficulties in life most especially Tina. I don’t want to judge her for what she did, I don’t think it’s right. The fact that she stopped what she was doing the moment she saw Bette crying showed the humanness in her. I’m now curious as to what’s going to happen next, brilliant story and great writing phacey. Talk to you soon sweetie!(-;
Great chapter! Gives something to ponder about. Definitely the girls need to get to know each other and not throught the bed. We all feel they are meant for each other, but they’ll have to work hard. Too much damage is already made. Can’t wait to read the next chapter! Thank you!
Noooo! What happens next? Oh, welcome back great chapter and PPS.
Great chapter. It was sad to read. Thank you. PPS.
Wow, you are gifted in your story telling but these characters are definitely dark. I don’t feel sorry for them, but I do pity them. Tina is no better than the dirty old men from the dance club. She claimed that her proposition would save Bette from the degrading life of selling her body, yet that’s exactly what she’s forced her into doing. How is Tina any better than the club owner that raped Dylan and threatened Bette? Bette reacted like a whore would in this scenario; it was illustrated when she said “I’m okay now Tina, I’m ready now.” That wasn’t lust and attraction, that was I’m going to give you what you paid for. The fact that Tina got a jolt of conscience doesn’t change the fact that Bette wasn’t only crying because of the realization of how low she’d fallen, but also because of the physical pain that Tina caused her. As for Tina she’s a bad seed, and no matter the façade her mental instability is scary. She’s bad news and Bette needs to put her clothes on and get out of her life. She’s kept her part of the bargain, now Tina needs to pay up and leave her alone. If Tina was a man from the club that bought a night with Bette, would anyone want her to stay and cuddle and talk this out?
I think Tina genuinely desires Bette and doesn’t know how to go about getting her in a traditional way, or how to woo her. Her whole world seems to be about acquisitions, it’s how she gets everything. She doesn’t seem to know how to express her feelings, and she certainly doesn’t know how to touch a woman. It makes me wonder, has Tina ever had any kind of healthy relationship, any sexual relationship with anyone in her adult life? I hope you post the next chapter soon. Thanks!