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    Go Ahead, I Don’t Need You _ Chapter Eight

    Story written on June 4, 2005 by Soseover.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=54421
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    Lets do it.

    Go Ahead, I Don’t Need You _ Chapter Eight

    (Previously)

    The two women continue talking for hours, about their careers, about their hobbies. There was not a moment of awkwardness between them. They talked, like theyve known each other forever.

    Tina : (turn to look at Bette) Bette?

    Bette : (still staring at the ceiling) Yes?

    Tina : (inhale a deep breath) Will you marry me?

    Bette : (whip her head so fast, you could hear it cracking, to look at Tina) What?!

    Tina : What? (she smiles)

    Bette : (chuckling nervously) Um, you… (unable to articulate, what she wants to say)

    Tina : (smiled, as she sees Bette speechless for the first time) Yes, I asked you to marry me.

    Bette : (plopped of the bed) Okay, do you hear yourself? (nervously, walking back and forth, at the foot of the bed) Weve just met, a couple of hours ago. And youre asking me to marry you? Are you insane? Whatever happen to, I dont know, first date, maybe?

    Tina sighed; Shes disappointed, not at Bette, but at herself, afraid that she may have scared Bette off…. Tina got off the bed, and grabbed a robe to cover herself. She then, made her way to the balcony, breathing in the sweet fragrance of the midnight ocean. She turned back to look at the troublesome Bette, still pacing, back and forth.

    Tina : (softly) Bette, could you come out here, please?

    Bette hears the sweet callings of Tinas, and like a remedy, it suddenly calms her mind, her body, her soul, and the uneasy feelings that she felt a moment ago, evaded. Bette smiled, and made her way to the balcony. The two women, standing side by side, as they listened to the rhythmic splashes of the waves, sometimes, things dont need to be said. They can feel it in their hearts. And a moment later….

    Tina : (sighs) Bette? (still have her eyes on the dark horizon) Do you believe?

    Bette : (turn to look at Tina) Believe? Believe what? In fate, destiny?
    Tina : (chuckles, as she shakes her head) No. Just believe. (turned to look at Bette)

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    3. Love both of your stories…but i don’t have the time to comment..i read them at work and i can’t comment there…but please i had to tell you i am reading both stories …and your doiong a great job with them both…please continue

    9. Ah, no, in Hawaii, we don’t have 24 hour chapels…you might have confused us with Las Vegas!

      But I’m sure you can round up enough people to have a great party!

      This is great drama and it would be great if Bette and Tina sees Laurel and Helena before tying the knot. Knowing you, it would be high drama.

      Also, I’m sorry that you did not feel and lost a weekend in Hawaii.

      Please continue. Thanks….scoobeee.

    10. You already know what i’m gonna say, but I’ll say it anyway… Ilove it, I love it, I love it. This is an excellent story. These broads are crazy. One minute Tina is slapping Bette’s ass around the next their fucking, then getting married. This is crazy shit. But thats how I like it. But I must say I think its waaaay too soon for Bette shes just gettin out this relationship and the next one she meets she marrys. Thats crazy, but I like crazy. So, you say you have much more heavy drama for when they all meet. I can definatley see that happening. It seems Helena and Tina are so in love and so serious when Laurel and Bette are kind of just there. You know I’m all for the mad drama and bullshit, as long as shit turns out ok in the end. I must make 1 request, from this story’s biggest fan, could you PLEASE post more often. I know your busy so was I, I havent updated my story in like a mounth but graduation was yesterday so I have alot more time on my hands. PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE POST MORE OFTEN. And to answer your question, I will always read this story, it really entertaina me. I’ll be looking forward to your next post.

    12. ……great chapter, I think lots of people believe in love @ 1st sight….. But dont step up & announce those feelings,……so anywayz loving the direction your taking & I can feel the drama building already (loves it).

    14. that was a really great chapter i love it.. sometimes you have to do whatever your heart ask and just do it please post soon i cant wait for more

    16. I just love these lines. “I must be dreaming. No, if this was a dream, it wouldn’t hurt every time, you slapped me.” I has such a good laugh I thought I might fall off my chair? Please continue….I looking forward to reading your updates!

    19. Hello there Soseover and Loyal commenters.
      Well sosoever, I love this story of yours, I’m such a sucker for good drama and I feel you have quite a lot of that stored for us, am I right? Anyway, it may be a little soon for B&T to get married, but hey, we do crazy things when we are in love, right?.
      Well, Thanks for posting this story ( oh, and your other story too, but leaving comments in both was too much effort,jeez, I’m so lazy), post soon.

    20. ok I won’t commemt on how long I have be waiting for this update, OK nevermind I just did LOL, anyways More fighting and more drama, sounds like my favorite type of story. And I for one love tina when she is more alpha. still waiting on how tina knows bette and if bette will think it’s weird. And it going to be good to have the 4 of them in a room together, I think you should call it L word WWF, and sell it on payper view. until next time.

    23. WooW!Two posts on one day! It’s my lucky day! Even though I LOVE this story, my favorite is YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS! And by the way, you are my favorite writer! AND DON’T YOU EVER THINK OTHERWISE! This might come as a suprise…LOL…(yeah right!) *5*

    26. Sose girl..I know life is to short and you should live like there is no tomorrow. But talk about marriage after your first day – hell girl now you have goon to far. Maybe on your second date ok.
      If you want your sweater to be blue I have to knit a new one because the first one is already finished and it is not blue. Post soon

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