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Hold me, Kiss me, Love me..forever..Chapter 2 ***Sequel to Accidental Love***
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Bette was still ravishing Tina’s center in the movie and Tina was starting to enjoy the movie. Bette sure knew how to get down to business. She was a very determined lover and you could tell with each little stroke of her tongue, that she thoroughly enjoyed pleasing her partner.
Bette: Wow you took a long time to *****
Tina: and what are you complaining
Bette: Hmm no I don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing
Bette frowned
Tina: So now your critiquing yourself by the amount of time it takes for me to *****?
Bette: Well yeah I mean if it takes you so long does that mean I’m not doing it right
Tina: Baby you do it more than all right, you are amazingI was just holding on I didn’t want the sensation to end
Bette shook her head, she wasn’t convinced
Bette: Are you sure? Because I can improve
Tina: I thought you were the bestwhat’s their to improve?
Bette: Yeah your rightwhy the ***** would I doubt myselfyou see what you didyour teasing me before has thrown me offyou can’t do that to me ever again
Bette’s face was so serious Tina was afraid to laugh
Tina: OkayI won’t do that again
Bette looked back towards the screen
Bette: wow! you did drown me
Bette laughed, Tina poured the rest of the contents of the popcorn over Bette’s head. Bette laughed harder, Tina was going to get the soda but thought against it She would get Bette back in a different way later.
Bette: I’m only kidding baby
Bette tried to control her laughter but the look on Tina’s face was priceless. Bette had to wipe the tears from her own eyes. She eventually stifled her giggles and was able to proceed with the movie.
Tina: Your not getting any tonight
Bette: I promise I’ll be good
Tina: Nopeyou’ve had your laugh and I’ll have mine all the way home while you lay in bed with no *****
Bette: Fine but I’m keeping the tapeI’ll have ***** that way
Tina: Not if I take the tape
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Very productive indeed. If only Mike knew what you were really doing lol That was so hilarious that I don’t know how you even had composure writing it. Whenever I make popcorn I’m going to think of this chapter, Bette in particular, but then again when do I ever stop thinking of something L related? lol Anyway this was another amazing chapter and don’t doubt your greatness because you totally rock the fanfic world! ttyl
AKA WALKS C ANOTHER POST THIS ONE MANAGED TO GET ME THROUGH MY WORKING DAY THANYOU!! I DON’T THINK MY COLLEAGUES APPRECIATED MY LAUGHING AT MY COMPUTER MOREALESS UNCONTROLABLY IF THEY THOUGHT I WAS NORMAL THEY DON’T NOW POST SOON LOL;)
Fanfuckintastic chapter!!! The sex was hot, the comedy funny….I just could imagine them sitting there with their heads titled to the side….
Angel…I need oxygen!!
so fucking funny..lol..Bette full of popcorn priceless..lol..great chappy post soon love it
I realy like this chapter it was light and funny as hell.
Angel, that was priceless, loved it. please continue.
This chapter turned out great. Told you so :p Keep up the great work. Talk to you later. Wow I actually did a nice comment without threating you thats a first. I think my weekend wore my ass out. Don’t worry I will remember to the good old WW soon.
Too funny. I am so glad you decided to keep going with this, come on there just too cute. Bette may not be able to make popcorn, but hey come one what she lacks in the kitchen she more than makes up for in the bedroom.
hey don’t say that, your writing is great, excellent even! and this chapter was zo hilarious!
that was ssooooo damn funny! I was in tears at one point! Thanks for a great update…please hurry with the next post, I love it!!!
LOL..!! Freakin funny!! you are good.. LMAO!
NYC that was a great chapter.I loved it.I thought it was very funy.Post soon.
Thanks again for another entertaining and excellent update.
Damn that was so fucking funny and they so cute, amazing love it. Post soon please, thanks!
i spewed my drink all over the place angel. i mean honest to god. k. please mute that i cant listen to myself. oh shit. then im so mad and hot right now i dont know what to do with myself. well hell angel i dont know what to do either. and both girls tilt there heads trying to understand who they were just in that position. OMFG. this was just o funny. and hot. please again and real soon. and yes tina has a big day planned if its mothers day tomorrow. thanks.
K
That was priceless. Very funny and hot. LOve it.
Great chapter and so funny. Please post soon.
It’s really sad that Bette can’t even microwave popcorn.lol
YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!
Loved it. I love the bantering back and forth. What a fun couple.
I have a feeling Alice and Dana will break in and find the tape, maybe they won’t break in but I think Alice will get her grubby little hands on it.
lolol roflmfao!!! can i gt a copy of tht tape? :P
Don’t get me wrong, I love Bette, but this one is really full of herself, isn’t she. It was cute, in the beginning, but now, she’s getting to be a little annoying. But, this is a different Bette, it could work. Hope Tina doesn’t have to face being disowned by her mom. Glad Bette was thinking about Tina, so that she wouldn’t have to go thru that on her own. Awaiting your next post.
i was literally laughing my ass off i fell off my chair a few times it was so funny. great update and yea ur right i will makie it a point that u update, i was gonna ask u about it yesterday but i changed my mind and decided to give u some time. Im still trying to figure out what advice i gave u cos i cant remember LOL. POST SOON!!! ttyl. byes :)
Took the last few days and read all of your chapters. I had such a great time. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Whoa! I’m really enjoy reading on it and I feel I’m watched the show also LOL! Whoa! Your Amazing I Love it and it’s really funny LOL! OMG! Thank you NYC! Great Your Awesome writer keep it up Please continue Please!!
lmao the banter between B&T watching the tape was hilarious. Bette is so full of herself and Tina is embarassed to watch herself nekkid. cant wait for the tape to fall into the wrong hands. i have a feeling it will be alice that finds it ans shares it with everyone. thanks for posting nyc ttyl
this was soooo friggin funny!!!!!!! First thing to read in the morning….now I’m smiling like an idiot!!!! HURRY UP AND POST ALREADY!!!!!
OMGosh, I agree with everone else that was indeed hilarious! Bette was so full of herself and I guess that is what Tina finds attractive. How could they eat popcorn and watch the video, without losing control and having a go at each other while the video runs at background music? TOO cute!
Well, have mercy (wiping tears from eyes)..that was splendid!!They had to tilt their heads???!!!!Rose and Ilene sooo need to do this scene!
Hilarious! Great banter between those two! I love the fact that they’re eating popcorn whilst watching the video because that’s exactly how I always feel when I’m reading NC-17 fanfic, like I’m sitting back, throwing popcorn down my throat enjoying the show. Oh, and I must admit I cocked my head along with the girls! Simply hilarious. I am also afraid to admit that Bette sounds a little like me…the cockiness, don’t get any ideas…yet. Keep writing, don’t doubt yourself because it’s excellence in action.