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I never meant to hurt you part III
As Shane woke up the next morning, she felt like shit. she had a bad headache and she felt weak. She was thinking about the dream she had about Carmen. In her dream she went to Carmen’ house and proclaimed her love to Carmen. The dream seemed very realistic to her. As she got up to make her coffee she looked at the window and her car wasn’t there. As she was trying to remember what she did with her car, the phone rang.
“Hey whos this”. Shane said with a low tone.
“Ohh its me Carmen, I was just wondering when you were going to come get your car. Carmen said with excitement in her voice to hear shane.
“Ohh shit. Im so sorry. Fuck im such an idiot..Ill be there in a little while I just need to take a shower.” Shane realized it wasn’t a dream. She really did go to Carmens house
” Its okay dont worry about it. Alright so Ill see you later. Bye.
As shane got out of the shower, she took her time to get ready. She put on the perfume that she knew Carmen loved so much. She made sure her hair looked perfect. She wanted to look good when Carmen saw her.
As Carmen got out of the shower she also took her time to get ready. She always wanted to look good for Shane. She wanted Shane to see her at her best. As she was putting the final touches of makeup on, Shane was outside. She observed Shane through the window and thought ” Shanes so beautiful”. When Shane knocked at the door, Carmen answered.
“Hey your looking a lot better this morning, hold on let me get your keys.” Carmen said
” Wait, can I come in, I need to talk to you.” Shane said with an urgency to get inside. They paused for a minute and carmen finally replied.
“Alright, but only for a little while, I have to meet with a producer for lunch.” Shane was surprised that Carmen said yes because if this were a couple of days ago, Carmen would of slammed the door in her face. As Shane went in she sat on the couch. Carmen came over and sat on the other side.
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They just need to take a day and slip off and get married and live happily everafter..
Are you stupid shane??! gosh don´t ask such a question in a situation like this. Brilliant update!!! I love your story and I´m enjoing every single update!!! Awesome job!!
uh oh…that question just spells disaster. she should have just gotten carmen in the car and headed off to the nearest minister. no questions asked. and then hold a private ceremony later on or something for the framily and carmen’s family.
Hey D630, excellent update. Wow!!! I hope Shane didn’t just wreck her opportunity for a reconciliation with Carmen by asking her about marriage…again. She was so close to having what she wanted. Doesn’t she know better than to mess the Latina’s temper? Keep it coming.
WTF! Is Shane nuts? After they just got back to a great place, why the hell did she bring up marriage? Carmen might end things again. Luv ya Shain, but that was clueless babe. Ecellent update, post soon.
oh Shane,Shane…fix her danielle… if u can lol more please!