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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT14
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They broke their kiss, the air between them hot and intense, their eyes fixed into each others, their own form of communication transpiring between the looks, as their bodies sashayed between the lustrous folds, their timing holding the same intensity as their eyes, the passion between them building with every stroke, their arousal neared its peak, they both opened their lips, their breath joined, small moans coming from both mouths, only to become a united sound between them as the thundering power ignited in them, their centers gyrating ferociously, Tina began pulling on the ribbons, the muscles in her arms tensing as she felt the endorphins detonate throughout her body, the explosion simultaneously blasting her partner into their awaiting, shared universe, their bodies jerking violently as each wave of orgasm catapulted them that little bit further, allowing them to float concurrently in their very own parallel universe.
Bette’s head dropped onto Tina’s shoulder, her breathing hard and deep, her body feeling the aftershocks as the waves slowly subsided, Tina unhooked her ankles and dropped her feet onto the platform.
Bette lifted her head to look into the sultry eyes of her love, as they met; they both shimmered with unshed tears, “my god, that was so goddamn, fucking amazing”
“Jesus Bette, you can say that again”
“My god, that was so goddamn, fucking amazing” Bette laughed as she repeated the sentiment. “I think you can let go of the ribbons now baby!”
“I’m not sure if I want to actually, I feel quite attached to them” Tina was now laughing at their antics.
As they made their way out of the gallery, Bette set the alarms and locked up, they walked hand in hand towards Bette’s car, sharing kisses, sharing looks, the unsaid words of love transpiring between them, knowing that in the last twenty fours hours they had not only turned a corner in their relationship, but they had found a deeper, trusting and loving union between them that neither could of ever dared to hope for.
“Well that’s two fantasies we’ve conquered today,” Bette said lightheartedly.
“Two?” Tina said quizzically.
“Yep! Yours with me, on the desk. And mine; to make love to the most beautiful woman in the world, in the middle of a gallery, full of the most beautiful art in the world.” Bette said with a twinkle in her eye.
“You’ve never told me that was one of your fantasies before!” Tina chastised.
“I can’t tell you ALL of my fantasies Tina; they wouldn’t be a surprise if I did!”
As they walked into the underground parking lot, Tina’s curiosity got the better of her, “So do you have any others that we can work on?”
Bette looked around her, seeing no-one else about, she pulled Tina close and whispered in her ear, “Maybe I could take you and make love to you on the bonnet of my car that would be another one of my fantasies”
Tina pulled Bette into her and kissed her, in a long slow passionate embrace, as she broke the kiss she looked into Bette’s eyes and tenderly said, “I don’t think anything will ever top what you did to me in that gallery babe, it was one of the most intense, sensual and erotic love making sessions I can ever remember I really, really love you Bette Porter,” their lips once again met in a mellow melting kiss.
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Excellent!
sexy f***ing HOT!!! loving this story! great!! pls post soon
damn I had to pick up my jaw from the floor!!!!! that was FRIGGIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!! LORD HA MERCY!!!!! At one point I was so hoping for some ruff, animalistic sex, then I remembered they’re reconnecting….maybe over there long weekend together. AGAIN DAMN THAT WAS FRIGGIN, FUCKIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!
Jobadge, I read that very slowly as I wanted the imagery to fully realize in my mind and it was well worth it even if I don’t win any speed reading prizes. Just one thing, is Bette the only one with access to the tape from the security cameras? If not, James may not mind working Saturday.
I can see it now: “Curators Gone Wild!”
Van you can say that again,Just kidding that was so Tender and very very sexy. That could blow your mind. thanks
OMG, Jo what are you trying to do to us woman–that was so SENSUAL and HOT!! I think I might need to borrow Ally’s oxygen supply after that chapter. The way you described the art work was brilliant. You are one fantastic writer. Thank you for this beautiful story.
Oh my God…I am most definitely going to go look for a girlfriend who works in an art gallery!! That was absolutely gorgeous to read…thank you.
sexy and very hot
Massive sensory overload. Not even an ice cold shower is going to help. Keep them coming.
f***ing amazing!!!!
w…o…w… WOW!! I totally agree with funnyone… your words totally slow me down in reading and transpiring the image into my mind a slowly… love the way you write :D
Jo == staggeringly hot sex and research …wow . that was one of the most sensual things i have read in a very long time. Thank you SO much for that and how sensitively you portray bette and tina
ok….now you definitely have our attention!!! That was amazing…truely amazing…bravo!!
***GULP*** my throat dried up from my jaw being on the floor!!! i’m lucky to still be breathing. i really don’t know what to say except um…. WOW! SHIT! GODDAMN! MUTHFUKA!! that chap was so incredibly sweet, loving, erotic, sensual, and most of all beautiful. thank you once again for making my day. good night kiddies. please post soon. PEACE.
“Intense,Sensual,and Erotic”…Your own words…and i cant think of any better to describe what ive just read…It litterally takes me my breath away! Thanks for putting yet another Smile on my face,
Oh my God, the intensity and the sensual eroticism was quite mind-blowing. I read it slowly and it magnified the intoxication of the experience. I agree with funnyone, I hope Bette is the only one with access to the security camera tapes, otherwise, James is going to enjoy working Saturday.
What a fine way to depict the intricate relationship between voyeurism and exhibitionism; add a little light SM to this and you get HOT DAMN that was sexy!!!
Wonderful Jo. What am i saying – it was the hotest thing i’ve read in ages!(and its not because i have a museum fetish – though maybe i wasted my time when i did work in one!)
Umm, yes Jobadge. I need to sign up for that gallery tour immediately! Also, I want to take that tour as many times as it’s being offered…uh, because I love art! It’s one of the coldest nights in Canada and I am actually sweating. Kuddos to you. Damn!
Damn that was fucking hot and sexy, love it!
Uhhh….wow! Love this story.
What an awesome job. Yes that plateform works nicely now we need to put it on the road. I want it in my backyard as well as yours. I love how intense the feelings come through the way you have them communicating with all five of their senses. Awesome. Thanks Jo
This was indeed very intense and very erotic – one off the best chapters ever!!!! The way you can create a scene between these two are amazing, I get totally spellbound (does is make sence in english?)…..They are gonna rock the dancefloor at Milk, better call the firedep. already LOL….Please post soon and take care
Read it four times now, still can’t come up with words it was that moving.