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If it is meant to be…Revisited…Chapter 4
Previously….
At the same time Bette was pulling the book off the self, two of Dani’s friends from school were walking by, and recognized her. They were going to say something, but saw that she was absorbed in the book she had just chosen, so decided not to bother her, and started walking again. Just then, Tina, who thought that Bette was where she had left her, walked around the corner, with her head down, and started talking without looking up.
“Baby, this is perfect, listen to this….Early Embraces: True Life Stories of Women Describing Their First ***** Experience…….Ouch!” Tina slammed right into Jamie, one of Dani’s friends. “Uh…oh…uh, Jamie…hi.” Tina stuttered the words out, as she turned bright red and struggled to gain her balance. “Uh…I’m sorry, I thought you were Bette.”
Jamie looked down, and shuffled his feet, totally embarrassed upon hearing the title of the book his friend’s mother had in her hands.
“No…no, it’s cool Ms. Kennard.” He looked over at his friend Mike, and then back to Tina. “It’s cool…uh…see you later.” With that the two young men took off in the opposite direction, while a mortified Tina desperately looked around for her missing partner.
As Jamie and Mike walked away, Jamie whispered, “I thought Dani’s mom was a *****?” Mike whispers back, “she is.”
Jamie looked at him confused. “And she’s just now learning how to have ***** with a woman?” Shaking his head, he says, “that’s sad man…that’s just plain sad. I mean, what’s the point of being with a hot Mrs. Robinson like her other mother, if you don’t ever have *****? ***** man…what a waste THAT is!”
It’s Mike’s turn to look confused. “Mrs. Robinson?
I thought Dani’s step-mom’s last name is Porter?”
Jamie looks over at his buddy with exasperation written all over his face. “Are you telling me that you have never watched that oldies flick, The Graduate?!”
“No, never heard of it,” Mike responded.
Shaking his head, Jamie’s eyes followed Tina, as she met up with Bette in the middle of the store. “Man, you have got to go rent that movie…cause I’m telling you right now, older women are ***** HOT!”
Chapter 4
Tina approached Bette, feeling both relief at the sight of her partner, as well as a slight touch of annoyance. “Here you are!”
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!…..well it’s about time Ms Sea!…..but so worth waiting for!… I cannot tell you how pleased I was to see this chapter. Hmmm….so old dogs and new tricks huh?!…..Looks like Bette doesn’t need to much help on that score! So this is really the end?……. In which case thank you for the amazing journey, this story has touched me in ways I never thought possible! Thank you for sharing.
THANKS so much to an ending to a perfect story. Old dog can learn new tricks. thanks again
if every old dog were like Bette i want one right night..lol..that was a perfect end..love it now bring it on other one..that was great thanks :o)
I was really happy to see this story back… and is it the end?! Hope you wwrite a sequel.
i am not an avid commentor because everyone usually has already stated what i would have, but i am an avid reader of your work, and an even bigger fan, just know that although some of us do not comment on each story/chapter, doesn’t mean we don’t luv what u do!!!!!thanks for sharing your talents with us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
first of all , loved this chapter and was happy with an update.
Second, A few weeks ago I spent a couple of days reading this story and it is absolutely one of the most romantic stories on this site. I loved it from beginning to end. I went through all of the emotions of the characters, which just attests to your suberb writing. I hope you continue to write more fantastic stories. You are just one of the few authors who have me addicted to this site!!! Thanks again for taking the time to entertain us fan fic fans, especially,
Bette and Tina groupies..lol!!
P.S- What was the position???
Have so loved your writing…the site does need the elders, you know! Love it when you make me smile and you so often do. Thank you for this and each or your brilliant pieces.
” I don’t own Bette and Tina, but the rest of the characters, and the story are mine. “
Dear Seahurst,
* I vote that we inveigle IC&co into giving you Bette and Tina too… they are obviously much happier (and much safer!) in your capable hands.
Peace & happiness to you too! Nanc
It always so good to read yours stories and all I can say it’s thank a lot to take the time to write them.
Thank you for this chapter and all the others from every story….I LOVE reading whatever you write, everytime I see a seahurst story I do a little happy dance…So pls don’t ever feel as if you’ve run out of things…pls just write whatever…man I’d read your grocery list!!! Pls more, always more
Seahurst!!! I was so pleased to see you had posted again after what seems like ages (i used to lurk around your stories quietly before :-)). Thank you for taking us along on this journey. And i hope to “read” you again very soon!! Peace.
Seahurst! You’re back! Kool! Thanks for the chapter and the story. As alays, I love your stuff. You’ve got a loyal fan here. I’ll just keep a look out for anything new from you. (((Seahurst)))
Well, I thought I had landed on the wrong page when I opened this site this afternoon. I had just recently been re-reading selected parts of this story! I have loved this one in particular from the beginng and have really liked the humorous side of Bette and Tina that you have been revealing. This is something definitely missing is S2 of TLW. I hope that you have found the career path that you have been searching for but selfishly I hope it leaves time for you to write more stories. For me I would love it if you continued on with this one but I am willing to be drawn into any story you wish to create for these characters. You have the ability to tmake an avowed hardass like me go reaching for the tissues.
I can’t wait to read the entire story again….thanks over and over!
Paula, from Kentucky
Sorry to see that this is the last chapter in this story. You write with a maturity that is sometimes lacking on other stories – this is not a put-down in any way for the others but you put something in that personally appeals to me. I have enjoyed it so much, it has given me the B&T I have wished for through some tough times on the TV! I only hope that you come back with more of the same in S3 if required!
Thank you for many many wonderful chapters I read them all an loved each new one more than the last one. Please give us something new and soon
TBSAVER – glad you could post. but get your little fingers to the keyboard and post a chappy for us.
SEAHURST – say it aint so, please. this was one of the greatest love stories ever on this site. youve just pierced my heart thinking i wont hear about this bette and tina anymore. * weeping and wailing and gnashing of teeth*.
thank you sweetie. its been an honor and pleasure to read you. cant wait for more.
What a pleasant, unexpected surprise!
Seahurst, been waiting for the continuation of this story and may I say that it was well worth waiting for and I hate to see it end. YOu have taught so much with the writing of this story and it will not be forgotten. Thanks. Will continue to read whatever you write.
Well I certainly have missed these two. And your writing. Loved this chapter and it’s charming, warmth and humor between my fave fictional couple.
Your talent and sincerity always shine through. I will look forward to whatever and whenever you can contribute to the site. Meanwhile, best wishes and happiness to you.
Michelle/Seahurst, thank you, thank you, thank you very much. I hooped it up, when I saw your post, and immensely enjoyed this last post. Sad that it’s the end, but all good things do have to come to an end. Oh, and what an ending, so very fitting, as usual. Your writings are truly amazing. I think about this story all the time, when I’m bored, it gives me something to smile about. Thank you so much, for sharing this with us. I’d like to write to Jennifer Beals, and tell her that if she wants to be a part of a good story, she should somehow get this story into the hands of some producers/directors, and I’d be the first in line, for it’s premiere.
Seahurst be well, and please continue to share your stories with us, here. Until then, all the best to you.
You posted!! *Does little happy dance* I’m glad Tina found the perfect book for Dani. Jamie and Mike must think they’re one strange family! LOL I LOVE the shift of power you have going on between Bette and Tina. As it should be. :)
We’re sticking with you to the ends of the earth Sea, no worries! Thank YOU for continuously brightening up our days and entertaining us for hours on end. You’re truly a legend on this site. As long as you keep writing, we’ll keep reading. ;)
This was a great ending to this story. (Too bad it’s the ending) I had to wait so long for this that I started tinkering with my own story which starts with a similar premise but goes in a different direction. MANY THANKS FOR ALL THE PLEASURE from all the stories.!!! Hope to hear from you again.
Michelle, Seahurst, you never fail to entertain with your writing. No pressure, but if you are ever so inclined, we could learn more about Milaine and how the young ones in the story turned out and I always thought there might be a story with Leslie in it. Maybe a book instead of fanfic. Thanks so much and keep us posted on how you are doing.
Seahurst, you have surely taken us on an incredible journey. To say ‘thank you’ falls so short of what I would truly like to convey.
It has been humorus, touching, heart wrenching, sweet, painful and endearing beyond words.
You masterfully wove together two families, multiple hearts and desires into a cohesive and beguiling story.
I have enjoyed this one in ways I can’t even begin to describe, and look forward to your other stories as well.
Might you consider a sequel to this one? I mean, really…….how about all of them five years from now. Does Dani have a woman parter? Is Milanie the talk of the art world? Have the boys become young gentlemen? What about Tina’s ex-husband and their baby? Have Bette and Tina finally gone through all of the pages of their new book? Inquiring minds want to know!
Bravo for all you have done with this story!
Hey! Congratulations!
This is an amazing history, that I know I´ll be reading a lot, It´s been a pleasure reading it.
I hope we hear from you soon and, again read some of your histories.
“Bow Dow”. Clap, Clap, Clap, Clap, Clap.
What a great ending to a fantastic story, now if only IC would get a clue. You had me cracking up. The guys, with isn’t she’s a lesbian and she’s just now learning how to have sex with a woman. Thats sad, too funny. Then Bette hiding the book. But as always B&T merge as one in the end, as it should be, and you can teach an old dog new tricks. Awesome, hoping you’ll come back with another story.
Wonderful as always Sea. But don’t end this please. If you do, don’t be gone long and start something new. We need your quaility work on this site. I am a fan and will read whatever you write. thank you for sharing always.
Ohhhh, NOOOOO!!!! It’s over again. Damn you must start another store…..like maybe the dance one……
once again..albeez says it. Please come back soon. We miss you when you are not here.
Seahurst, I have just discovered your stories not so long ago. Actually, I’ve just discovered fan fiction not so long ago. I have read up on all your stories a little while ago and loved every single one of them. This one in particular is one of my favourites and it’s sad to see it end. Loved the way you’ve let us experience B&T’s journey through life along with all the emotions we seem to be feeling right along with them. I just want to say that whatever you write, I’ll be happy as long as you keep posting.
Hope you’re settling into your new life in California. I admire your courage in uprooting yourself not just once but twice. Good luck and don’t be away for too long. Thank you!!
My favorite story by far. Will miss it for sure.You should be writing for the The L Word….Will read anything you write so bring it on. We are waiting for you Ms Sea. I wish you love and happiness forever.PEACE.
Thank you Michelle. As always, your stories are phenominal and I truly enjoyed this one. No matter how long it takes you to get back to the others; I remain a happy fan!
SSSSSSEeeeeeaaaaaaa!!!!! I was so happy to see your name up again! I’ve missed this story so much! A day without Sea is like a day without sunshine–your stories always brighten my day and make me feel warm all over! Thanks so much!
thanks for every story and every chaper – you are an awesome writer and your characters are full of love and light – thanks so much.
What a beutiful story and hope you will have a new one coming soon. Thanks!
Fantastic story!! Fantastic storyteller!! I’m stuck to you like glue!
“Ah, yes, and just like that, true order is once again restored.” I’ve enjoyed this story immensely. Such a pleasure to not only read, but also to savor and enjoy. Your writing speaks volumes.
Okay, I love this ….”Are you kidding? Try it again? Baby, that page is going to be carefully cut out, and then beautifully framed…..because, this…” she pointed to the page, “is my new favorite bedtime story, and I don’t think I will be able to sleep without it!! Got it?”
…I need this book!!
Sea – Ok when I saw you posted I did my version of the Saturday Night Fever dance. You are awesome girl but I have told you that many times. I am sorry to see this end but I know that it is not the ending of your writing. It is obvious that you are truly loved and cared for. tap….tap….tap…..tap…..ok trying to wait patiently for you next post. Have a terrific time writing and I will wait for eternity for another story from you. aka…crazy4life. Traci from PHX
I know I’m rather late with this comment but hope you come across it sometime. Thank you for writing Michelle. I hope things turn out all right…given whatever challenges you face. Keep well.
seahurst thank you so much for this story. i hope to meet you again in one of your upcoming stories. love the way you write and how you handle you characters. thanks again.
Seahurt finally you posted this.I only asked about this a month ago.I am just kidding.That last chapter was so funny.I hope to see and read any story from you in the future.
Did the Wizard Dance of Joy when I saw this. I hope at some point u will add another chapter to this story. It was always one of my favs. Please continue with the others, I will wait as long as it takes. Thanks for taking the time. was
Hey Michelle – I don’t think I’ve ever seen so many happy dancers in my fanfic life. Well, I got on the dance floor too when I saw your post, but then a song came on that I didn’t like…it’s over…the end :(
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH – it was a great gift to us. Thanks infinity, Sea!!!
Sea, whatever and whenever you post will be a blessing. I’m with some of the others who suggested more chapters into this story concerning Dani and Milaine. I really enjoy reading your view of Bette and Tina. Thanks ever so much for sharing your awesome talent with us!!!
Much love and aloha!!!
It’s good to see you back Seahurst, even to finish off a fantastic story. Hopefully you will be writing new stories, it would be a pity not to be able to read such wonderful writing.
Thanks for posting Michelle- Seahurst. I have loved your story from the beginning. you captured my heart with your story of B&T and their journey to be together. I for 1 will read anything you post. Thanks for making my life much happiers with your writing. My wish for you Sea is love and happiness to you always.
Thank you for sharing your journey.
Well Done! I’ve been a long time reader but have never posted a comment until now. I wanted to say that you are one of my all-time favorite fanfic writers. I can’t wait until your next posting. Great Job!
juz caught up with this stories
you are utterly amazing..!!!!!!!!!!!! Superb…!! hope you get back to us soon…!!
*********** (5 Stars isn’t enough neither are 10 but…..) Seahurst THANK YOU for this incredible journey you have taken the girls on (along with all of us) we’ll be here to read anything you post. Hope all is going well in LA and you have started to get settled. Take care
HOLY CRAP SEA! IT’S OVER?? IT AIN’T OVER TIL YOU SAY IT’S OVER AND I THINK YOU SAID IT’S OVER! DAMN . . . apologies for the delay in writing a comment but I too have been on a life changing journey of sorts . . . I had to trade a bag donuts and a 6 pack of Dew for library privileges and access to a computer. Am STILL waiting for that frickin woman of mine to cough up the bail money. But after reading these last few chapters of “REVISITED” I understand why your fans will miss you . . . you are MUSH QUEEN who believes in happy endings and your version of BnT reflected that throughout your writing. It was a great story from start to finish . . . one of many reasons I am still such a pathetic L addict; but i suspect that these last chapters were just a ploy . . . a set up for you to try and write some porn-like sex scenes just one more time! But as usual in your Seahurst like style, you are much more of a romantic than a detail girl! Next time you are passing through the Sunshine State ring me up and I will treat you to a Belgian Waffle at the IHOP. GOOD LUCK SEA AND MUCH HAPPINESS.
An absolute Gem – so enjoyed it. Thank you.
Talk about a comeback that’s how you come and put the finish touches on.a already well beautifully written story…love your work Sea