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“IF ONLY”
“Scene opens at The Planet”
“Alice is sitting at a table. Tina walks in and joins her”
“Tina
Hey what’s going on”
“Alice
Hi, where’s my Earth daughter”
“Tina
Nursery school”
“Alice
She’s 2, and you have her in school already”
“Tina
2 1/2, besides with Bette as your other mom; you go to school as soon as you can walk”
“Alice
I guess so”
“Tina
What’s that”
“Alice
Jenny’s revision to her book, you should read this”
“Tina
I have read enough of that crap, besides she just about fired everyone and is directing the whole thing her self”
“Alice
Tina listen to me. I could give a crap about her and this fucking book but read Ch. 9 Trust me”
“Alice opens the script to Ch. 9 and places it in front of Tina as she rolls her eyes, but then looks down and starts to read”
“Tina scans the paper”
“Bev is in her office. Jerome knocks”
“Jerome
I got those books you wanted”
“Bev
I can’t wait to read them to the baby tonight”
“Jerome
Right, you read to the baby”
“Bev
Yes I read to the baby every night. Ok I’m already late for the Dr’s, I have to go”
“Parking and running into the Dr’s office”
“Bev
Hey Nina wait till you see what I got us. (No Nina) Oh is she changing or am I that late”
“Dr.
Please Bev sit down”
“Bev
What’s going on, where’s Nina”
“Dr
Bev in the middle of my exam I didn’t hear a heart beat. I’m sorry Nina miscarried the baby. It was nothing she did or didn’t do”
“Bev didn’t stay around. She took off for the house. Pulling into their driveway. She gripped the steering wheel. (Screaming) WHY GOD, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO TAKE HIM FROM US? She runs into the dark house, to their bedroom, Nina is crying, Bev takes her into her arms”
“Nina cried until she felt that there were no more tears”
“Nina
I keep thinking that I should have done something different, eaten better, taken better care of myself”
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I really like this.Jenny is a sicko. How many times can you get hurt,and try not to slap the sh&t out of someone? thanks
I hope Bette’s statement means she’s realised who she wants.. And it’s not little miss artist. Nice story :)
I really liked this story. You did a great job w/the dialogue. Too bad it didn’t happen like that on the LW.Keep posting. There’s a softness here that was absent in the story (TV).
That was so moving I wish things had gone more like that on the show. I always say communication is the key, if they had talked more they would still be together. Although with IC you never can tell.
You did a good job! That was a great scene to re-write. I always hated how Bette said nothing when Tina confided her feelings to her.
This is awesome. I really am not a fan of ic because she is going to break our hearts. B&T are over in her mind and she could care a less about the fans. It would be nice if someone finally listened to the majority. She sounds like a dictator and not a producer. Oh I forgot they are one in the same.
good luck with that, i really liked it…i posted mine there too :)
oh how i love when you guys rewrite history. good job. You actually made jenny useful in some way. that is some feat! I hope Bette and Tina have a conversation is so long overdue. pps
Absolutely marvelous Amanda. Keep going with this. PPS
MG,i see you brought the baby over her.you did a DAMNFINE job women,too bad we didnt get this way for reals,but we are talking about I.C Dipshit now arent we.thanks for sharing this i did vote on the other site to lady keep me posted MG. GOOOO METS!!!!!!!
Excellent! This is the dialogue that was always missing…would loved to have seen it played out on the show.
Excellent! If only (indeed)
I totally agree AmandaMG…IF ONLY! If only IC had half a brain, right? I love your writing and this story! I have no choice but to wait for your next post, but please hurry! Thank you!
AMG, you know my thoughts as I shared them already. This is an awesome Fic. I hope to see you proceed further along with this, as the weeks pass. You have my support for sure. Thanks for sharing it here as well. **Hugs**
oh yeah..if only..jenny got it right 4 once…i wish jenny would get healthy…i liked her in s1 b4 she went all sicko…
Great writing!!! The way it should have been!!!!Thank you!