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I’ll keep you my Dirty Little Secret! part 1 and 2
‘What do you mean Oliver’ she said?
‘I mean you should take a holiday. God knows you deserve it love.’
Bette looked bewildered at the thought of this. She hadn’t taken a holiday for at least a year.
‘ What about the Archer contracts? It’s got to be done by next Tuesday, that’s less then a week away.’
‘ Don’t you worry about that Bette, I’ll get that new lad Steven to do it. He sounds eager enough to get his claws into some real work. Go on what do you say Bette?’
‘Well Tina would certainly be pleased. She’s hardly seen me these past couple of days’ she said enthusiastically.
‘Well that’s its settled. Get your self home to that gorgeous girl and daughter of yours.’ Said Oliver.
‘OK I will. Thanks Oliver’ .
‘ No problem love.’ Bette put the phone down and lent over to pick up her brief case. She stood up and left the office.
The building was quite deserted as she left it. Out in the car park there were few cars. Her car was parked over to the left near the barbed wire. She opened the door to her convertible car and bent inside. As she sat down and shut the door an immense amount of heat came over her. She put her brief case down in the passenger’s seat and pulled the keys out of her pocket. She turned on the engine and put down the hood of the car to let in some fresh air. She put on the shades that were hung over the mirror, to block out the bright morning sun. She raced out of the car park and into the busy morning traffic.
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It didn’t take that long to get home. She pulled into Kirkstone Court, a quiet cull-d-sac and up to the drive. She stopped the car and looked at her watch. It was 10 past 9. Bette took off her sunglasses and put them into the glove compartment. She picked up her brief case and got out the car. She looked up at her and Tina’s house. It was a good looking house and had a lot of space. It had 5 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, an indoor swimming pool and all the other usual rooms. She walked up the drive and opened the door. She stepped in, and was about to shut the door when she heard
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(31 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
MMMMMMMMMMMMMM INTRIGUING…WHO DOES BETTE WORK FOR??? AND HOW COME HE JUST MADE HIS MIND UP SO QUICKLY TO GIVE HER A HOLIDAY? Is he in on the weekend holiday? I feel sorry that Angie’s not going. PPS
Maybe it’s Bette’s boss Oliver who has planned the getaway and thats why he told her to take a holiday.
Well, Bette works for a totally different company now. Its still art related but she’s more of a designer now. The reason he gave her a holiday so quick is because she works soooo hard, as we all know. The lassy deserved a nice holiday ;)
kel, great start for ur 1st story! like i said to u b4 ur good for description ;) looking forward for the rest! keep it comin….
Since Jenny didn’t get an invititation, is this some weird new plot for her new book? PPS
Hey mate! Cool story bring it on, you know I am curious, doncha? ;)
I’m so intrigued by your story. I’m glad that Bette has not lost sight of her priorities. Who does she work for? What’s with the mysterious holiday? PPS
Verrrrrrrry interesting, and somewhat dark. It seems like we shouldn’t feel bad that Angie isn’t going, but rather we should feel bad that everyone else is going! PPS!
Well you got me guessing…Great start, looking forward to the next chapter.
well lady you did a awsome job, i we are waiting for more to come… loving the way bette listening to tina,and im intrigue wanting more…p.p.s.
Hey Kelloggs…love the writing…this seems kinda creepy…I was reading this waiting for the other shoe to drop. I felt creeped out when Angelica was playing in the sandbox…I thought they would look away and then she would be gone. I was creeped out when all their friends were invited to go…I was creeped out (and excited) when they were in the shower and Angelica was sleeping. Something dosen’t add up…please keep posting.
This is intersting and B&T are hot!
So spicey and intriquing. What is in store for B&T and friends? Can’t wait for the next installment of this story.