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    Immortal Soul – Short Story

    Story written on February 9, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Number of Comments: 16
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74991
    Author Notes:

    Two women of another time … no sex, just love.

    My hand found its place against her cheek, and my eyes closed at how that felt. I could feel tears trace little paths down both of my cheeks, but I just opened my eyes again. Nothing would hold meaning for me any longer if she could not be at my side, undermining me at every turn. I let out a full breath at that thought, wishing myself to laugh, but all that came out was a loud sob. I ran my other hand over my own face to calm the raw emotions there.

    With a moment to relax, I slowly moved my fingers down her chin, watching the beautiful, golden hair that had pressed gently to her soft skin. With barely even a touch, I gathered the strands of blond and tucked them behind her ear. Then, shifting slightly to lean over her, I slid one hand under her head and neck. She seemed so fragile in my hands, I couldn’t stand it.

    Trying my best to ignore my own unfamiliar show of emotion, I brought her head off the bed only slightly. It so easily fell to either side left unsupported, and I steadied my hand quickly. I let out a breath when I watched her lips part, ever so slowly. I was driven by instinct, and did what I knew. I had no choice, and I never did. She was always meant to save me, and I her.

    After feeling the cold of the evening air on her skin, I dipped in and lowered my lips to hers.

    A beautiful calm fell over us both as I took my time in relishing the moment. I had never kissed her like this before, with so much caution. It was both loud and quiet at once, my lips only moving over her own in the softest embrace. I wasn’t even sure of what I wished to accomplish, but I knew it was of certain importance. I swept from my mind the option of a kiss goodbye. She wouldn’t leave me. Not now, I wouldn’t allow it. I felt I had such power, holding her in my arms, and also a terrible weakness. I could command an army, and yet with her it was always different. She had me wrapped around her finger, and no matter what I ordered, I couldn’t wish a dead woman to live again. I trembled at that silent confession to myself, finding a new effort in my kiss to her, because that’s what it was. I knew she needed to fully understand how truthfully I felt for her in return. I hoped she had always known.

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    2. WWWWOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!1, hardly says it all. Please say there is more and that this is not a one-off. I want to know more about the child she was protecting, etc, etc, etc. Thanks for posting.

    5. WOW, again. I couldn’t think to write a decent comment yesterday. The depth of emotion and the deep love expressed and the sorrow of not admitting that love between them was so heartbreaking. And very probably so heartfelt by everyone that read the chapter. Hope you can give us more background or explanation that tells us more about the time in which they lived and a bit more history. Loved that first chapter.

    12. I think Byron himself could envy this story of yours! =) ( and with this sentence I didn’t mean to hurt some patriotic British feelings) the most impressing thing is that you were able to use some elements of this typical style which was used by Byron & co. too.deep emotions, mystery (you didn’t give us details), pain, tale-like circumstances (location of her room).so I have to say: do not pay attention to narrow-minded people who want to put you in a certain box. ;)

    14. WOW! I’m totally speechless. I’ve been totally mesmerized by your writing.I really love how you wrote this fic, it’s full of emotions, full of literary beauty.I really hope that there’ll be more.

    16. It was fantastic. just took my breath away!
      It was painful and sad, but it was there in the background through the beautiful love that covered the two women.
      I loved it!

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