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Jess — Plan B; pt. 31
I followed Jake into the house.
On the way in I saw a bunch of people I knew, and a bunch of people I’ve seen at school but don’t know, as well as a bunch of people I just don’t know. There’s people all over this house, but it’s a big house.
Not cozy, like my house. Just big.
Whatever.
Although I don’t know why I’m thinking about the house. I mean, here I am, Jake’s holding my hand. The people who know me are looking at me because they know he’s a senior and I’m just a sophomore.
It’s pretty cool.
We went over to this couch in the family room. There wasn’t really anyone else around.
I was all scared and nervous and wondering if I should be or shouldn’t be, or what I should do. Jake sat on one end of the couch and I sat on the other.
Pretty quickly he scooted down so we were basically right next to each other.
And then, I’m not exactly sure what I was feeling. I mean, kind of nervous and anxious and dizzy and kind of, well, I’m not really sure.
Then he leaned forward.
He kissed me.
That’s right. A senior kissed me.
It was weird. He used his tongue and stuff. Not like I’d never done that with Luis, but Luis is a boy. He’s my age. This is Jake kissing me, and I think he knew what he was doing.
And it was all kind of cool, but I still felt stuff that was weird.
He put his hand on my shoulder, and I kind of froze. I wasn’t really sure what to do, or what to do with my hands, or whatever.
Our knees were kind of touching, but that was kind of safe, right. They’re just knees.
But then Jake’s hand was on my breast.
Wow.
And I mean that in a good way, as well as a bad way.
I mean, wow. That, and the kissing, and the dizzy feeling. I like it, but I couldn’t really think beyond that.
We sort of kept kissing for a few minutes, and I felt his hand move down, and he started trying to work it under my shirt.
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K
Great chapter, I hope Bette kicks his ass.
Bette get out there!!
Thanks for the update P.
This could be a good way to get Bette back in Jess good books eh!
I love how you capture the thoughts of a teenager. it is remarkable!
don’t worry …bette to the rescue
oh sweet lord… watch out for porter!!! get em!
Oh yes! Waiting for Bette to kick some ass!
I am just in awe of your ability to capture the essence of teenage thoughts and actions. The conflicting emotions and desires…WOW!
Looking forward to more!
It’s only fiction, it’s only fiction…otherwise, I am pretty pissed off he is judging Tina and making assumptions about Jess. It’s only fiction, it’s only fiction….
Well, now we know Jess was brought up right! Oh, I felt sorry for Jake! Hell hath no fury like a mother’s fear?!
Great story! More????
Thanks!
Whoa! Jess needs to take a deep breath and get her thoughts straight so she can tell this moron to get lost with conviction. Oh wait, Bette is inside, I’m sure she’ll rescue Jess from this closed minded nymph.
Obviously I’m press for fan fic that’s why I’m up at this hour to see if my fave authors post. So thanks for being their when a fan can’t sleep.
You are so good at painting a realistic picture. I felt myself walking through the party and that high that comes with people thinking you’re cool. Great job of capturing Jess’ mixed emotions about her attraction to Jake and her feeling that she might have contributed to his unwanted advances. Such a confusing time for teenagers. I hope that Jess talks to Tina or Bette about her feelings, she needs to know that even though she kissed him, no still means no when she say it.
I pity Jake. It won’t be pretty if Tina or Bette find out he didn’t listen.
Thanks for Jess’ point of view, I forgot what it was like to be that young and unsure. Can’t wait for the next installment.
Super Bette ! To the rescue !!! Love this story is very sweet, and addictive. Thank you …. the crowd screem for more …. : P
I have a lot more to say than this, but… good chapter.
I can’t get enough of this story. Bette is going to wup that boy’s ass!
ok so my question is when is she going to throw up on him??? She has never drank before and keeps saying she is dizzy, I think it’s the beer not Jake. Hum, I wonder what size shoe Bette is wearing??? LOL, I think Bette will cover for Jess, maybe they will talk more one on one with out Tina around and express there real feelings.
Megga- Uhoh, well she is in the driveway. . Bette to the rescue! I hope Jess doesn’t hate her for it though. . .Please post again soon, this story is great.
Jake’s about to get his randy little butt handed to him on a plate if he doesn’t watch it. Ooooh, if Bette knew what he was doing, he’d be history! Great chapter, can’t wait for the next one!
Bette Porter is gonna make him a new a**h***!
I feel sorry for the young man. Heh.
so i sette going to come out of the house and kick his ass or what
OMG somebody is fixin’ to get the butt jerked out of that car. Love this so much. please post soon.
Oh damn this is bad and hope Tina there to save Jess!