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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Four
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Shane stepped between the two of them. “C’mon guys, be cool.”
“Cool,” Mark replied, gesturing with his hands like an umpire would declare someone safe on base. He didn’t want to go on with this because Carmen was hitting way too close to home.
Mark turned away and opened the refrigerator. Carmen wasn’t finished, though. “It is so not cool. First it was the cameras, now you can barely look me in the eye. I’m watchin’ you.”
“Carmen, calm down.”
Carmen turned to Shane, furious that she would say that.
“Fine. But you know it, Shane. You know he follows you.” Carmen was beyond annoyed and all of the morning cuddling and lovemaking were forgotten. “Maybe you like it. I’m sick of it.” She turned on her heels and left the kitchen for the bedroom, leaving Mark and Shane.
Mark looked at Shane and plainly stated, “I’m not stalking you. I want to be your friend.”
“We are. But Carmen is my girlfriend.”
Mark laughed. He placed his hands on his thighs and bent over to laugh harder, then he looked up at her. “Do you have any idea how ridiculous that sounds? I mean, really, Shane. No one woman is ever going to be enough for you. You and Carmen might last out the month, but…”
“Stop it, Mark.”
He didn’t like Carmen. Shane would be better off without that controlling bitch. “You act like her pussy’s golden.”
This time it was Shane who got in his face. “You’re really close to crossing that line. Watch it, man.”
* * * * *
Helena was seated next to Tina’s bed when Alice walked in. Alice stood at the door, not wanting to intrude, but Helena looked up.
“Come in, Alice. I was just saying goodbye.”
“How’s she doing?” Alice sauntered in and stood at the foot of the bed looking up at Tina.
“I spoke with the specialists assigned to her case. They had nothing to tell me until I gave them a sizeable donation. They’ve become quite cooperative. Anyway, her blood pressure has been mostly under control, but it’s peaked a few times, not much, but enough for them to worry about additional brain swelling.”
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Amen for Carmen lashing out at Mark. Just gotta love her :). She was right about not trusting him, good thing Shane kicked him out. He deserved it. Poor Shane.
its time for tina to start to wake up… she has to hear whats going on… and in her mind she will pull it all together… and then wake up… bette and angie need her… please continue
I’m finally caught up darlin’ and as always P, you ROCK! I knew this would be good, simply ’cause it’s coming from you. I do love the way you dig deep and uncover the mess – unafraid to take on the task of doing the dirty work, which we all know TPTB can’t seem to do. I much prefer your version then the junk that hit the airwaves, which btw did nothing more then churn up my stomach acid – LOL! Thank you for keeping the characters true.Looking forward to more – especially Carmen and Shane *whistling innocently*
ina is hearing,she will be able to put the all together when she wakes up’ Stupid S/W needs to get layed. Calling Tina a vegetable. and Bette her room mate. Hell I like pillow friend better. thanks
Good! Mark’s crazy ass is out the house. All he’s done is take advantage of Shane. SeeYa Mark.
Great update!Mark is such a f*cking bastard. It´s good that Shane throw him out.I´m looking forward for your next update!!
Exceptional….really your sharmen are hot!!! Oh, and mark…don’t let the door hit your ass on the way out!!!! bu bye!!!This whole tina in a coma is tearing out my heart, she sounds like the one we know and love from long ago…pls be gentle with us!!!