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    Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Four

     

    Alice looked at Tina.  “He was kind of cute, huh?  In a stoner kind of way.”

     

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    Shane walked through her kitchen, glanced out of the side window and saw her Jeep parked in the driveway.  She was looking for Carmen and thought she had gone to the store or MacDonalds.  The car was there.  She opened the back door and stepped onto the deck. 

     

    “Carmen?  Carmen?”  Shane shouted.  She noticed the converted shed door was open and saw Carmen standing inside. 

     

    At the door to Mark’s studio, Shane looked at Carmen in disbelief.  Her lover was holding a stack of papers in her hand, reading intently, flipping from one page to the next.  Shane looked at her, concern already etched on her face that Carmen had invaded Mark’s space.

     

    “What are you doing?  Carmen, this is as bad as him having cameras.  You shouldn’t be in here going through his stuff.”

     

    Carmen looked up at her and an equal amount of concern showed on her face.  Quietly, she slid some of the papers on the table across the surface of it. 

     

    “Take a look.  There’s plenty more.  It’s unbelievable, Shane.”

     

    Shane looked down at the paper.  Her eyes widened.  “What the fuck?”

     

    Those had been Carmen’s words ten minutes earlier.  She knew she had no business snooping, but those brown envelopes had her intuition on high alert.  Something was going on and she was determined to get to the bottom of it. 

     

    Carmen turned to her and shook her head.  “He’s crazy.  I want him out of here.  This shit scares me.”

     

    Shane nodded, not really listening to Carmen.  She moved the top sheet away and glanced at the next piece of paper.  She was unnerved by what she saw.  “This doesn’t make sense.  Why would he do this?”

     

    “Cause he’s a fucking fucked-up mother fucker.  That’s why.”

     

    Carmen dropped the pages she held onto Mark’s desk next to the computer and walked over to Shane.  She caressed her arm and could feel shame and Shane’s sense of betrayal pouring from her.

     

    “I-I don’t understand.”

     

    Carmen continued to rub her arm.  “None of this matters to me, unless it matters to you.”  Shane seemed distant and was unresponsive.  Carmen watched her intently, wondering what was going on in her lover’s head.  Finally, Carmen added, “You need to put him out today, though.  You can’t let this slide.”

    Comments

    1. Amen for Carmen lashing out at Mark. Just gotta love her :). She was right about not trusting him, good thing Shane kicked him out. He deserved it. Poor Shane.

    2. its time for tina to start to wake up… she has to hear whats going on… and in her mind she will pull it all together… and then wake up… bette and angie need her… please continue

    3. I’m finally caught up darlin’ and as always P, you ROCK! I knew this would be good, simply ’cause it’s coming from you. I do love the way you dig deep and uncover the mess – unafraid to take on the task of doing the dirty work, which we all know TPTB can’t seem to do. I much prefer your version then the junk that hit the airwaves, which btw did nothing more then churn up my stomach acid – LOL! Thank you for keeping the characters true.Looking forward to more – especially Carmen and Shane *whistling innocently*

    4. ina is hearing,she will be able to put the all together when she wakes up’ Stupid S/W needs to get layed. Calling Tina a vegetable. and Bette her room mate. Hell I like pillow friend better. thanks

    5. Exceptional….really your sharmen are hot!!! Oh, and mark…don’t let the door hit your ass on the way out!!!! bu bye!!!This whole tina in a coma is tearing out my heart, she sounds like the one we know and love from long ago…pls be gentle with us!!!

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