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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Twelve
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Senator Grisham came on strong and Bette liked it. For the sake of the game, Bette felt compelled to mention Barbara’s husband, but she knew that it didn’t matter. She only smiled when Grisham explained that her software husband and she had an arrangement and Bette’s smile grew when Barbara pleaded with Bette to come to bed with her.
Their lips, even closer, sharing the same air; the kiss that wasn’t felt like more of a kiss than Bette had ever experienced. She knew they weren’t kissing, but she could feel Barbara’s warm tongue against hers and experienced the sensations of being swallowed up by Grisham’s mouth. Bette’s chest heaved and her breasts ached with need. Tina would never know. It had been a long while since someone showed her this kind of desire. She and Tina had made love once that one afternoon just a few weeks before her delivery and even then, Tina had made it clear that she would continue to see Helena. Bette could look at this as a stress reducer. It meant nothing other than sex and Tina wouldn’t know. Bette moved another breath closer to Barbara and Barbara knew that Bette Porter was finally going to take the step.
“I can’t,” Bette whispered.
“That does not sound like a Bette Porter statement.”
“Tina and I don’t have an arrangement. Excuse me, just for a minute.” She jumped up and strode off to the powder room near the front door. In the bathroom, she flipped her phone open and called Tina.
Tina was at Shane’s opening night party for her new salon. The party was loud and fun and she loved getting away. She had yelled at Bette for leaving to go to Washington and having to have Angus watch the baby for three days in a row, but here she was on the day four at Shane’s party. She couldn’t miss opening night, though and Angelica seemed to like Angus. Despite the decibel level of the party, Tina heard her phone ring and she found a quiet place to talk to Bette.
It was shocking to hear Bette inform her that Barbara Grisham, the powerhouse Senator from Massachusetts was seated in her living room, probably naked, waiting for Bette to return and make love to her. That Bette would call her to tell her this was incomprehensible. What was her point? “I’m sorry Bette, why are you telling me this right now?” Tina sat on the toilet in the vacated bathroom listening to her lover? Former lover? Would be/could be lover?
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I love this story!!! I hope Bettte can get to Tina and make her understand that she’s the one Bette loves and wants to be with. Stephanie is a cunt!!!
Holy cow 28 pages lol. That shows absolute dedication on your part,excellence. Everyone get their share of loving even B&T, but of course had to be from a dream or an altered state of mind. It was so sad to read about Tina and her fight to regain control of her mind. Bette’s loneliness is also heartbreaking and she is in a fight of her life for her family. Glad Helena is there to help. I need to read it again to be sure I did not missed anything :)
28 pages! You are amazing!! Hope we’d always get that long. =P Bette needs to calm down. What she needs least at the moment is an against mother. Hope Bette go back to Tina soon and take her into her arms. Poor Tee.
Loved ever word took me a long time and a few breaks. but it was so darn good. thanks
Portia….what can a person say….bliss, you spoil us readers!!! Your dedication to detail, you own this story totally. I can feel it though, it’s comming the high drama, hanging by a thread…will you continue with your own version of S4?? You make this story seem real, shane and the chillies…too funny, painful, but funny. Pls don’t quit I’ll wait patiently for more chapters…now I’m off to reread again, and again!!!! Thankyou so much
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bring it on kennards versus Peabody and Porter!!!!!!!!
A person like Stephanie makes me remember that although nuture plays a big role in how a child will turn out nature also has its imperfections. There must be more to the Stephanie, Theresa and Christina dynamic. Could it be that the youngest daughter is envious of her sister? There has to be some motive for the amount of hate in her towards the people that she supposedly loves. Or her mother must have dropped her on her head as a kid. Anyways I think you captured how Bette would act perfectly but I would really like, and I have no idea what your plans are, for her to confront this issue head on not put her sister in a position where she has to do what she should do whether or not Theresa had anything to do with that injunction she has been giving Bette the support that she needed since this entire debacle began so Bette should at least confront her with this supposed betrayal. You have indeed made this story your own but amazingly enough you stay really true to the characters and yet you have managed to let them evolve. I especially like what your doing with Shane something I think IC should have tackled as a writer but alas IC is into fluff and some of us are into substance. Thanks
wow….the sharmen scenes were pretty awesome!!! Very intense! Brilliant job!
WOW…OMG… i read this at work last night… Well portia… all i can say is that it was brilliant… i have one concern… i don’t think theresa would do what that paper says… i do think its all steph… and i do hope bette lets theresa say her peace…i hope kit can get them to talk… and they all work together and bring down that bitch… her boyfriend should also know that she is fucking around with the doctor… love this story… but you don’t have tp post a book all of the time… we would love any update you want to share… thanks… please continue
Portia, as always, it was fucking brilliant. I really loved the part where Carmen accidentally fucked Shane with chile residue on her hands–that was hilarious! Wow–one of the best chapters ever!
Well it took me 2 days but I finally caught up with your story and it is fucking excellent. The scene with Melvin was brillant! This is truly a great story!
Another stunning installment of this story. The way you weave the real events of the episodes into the fictional events of your story is remarkable and always believable. Great writing and great reading! Thank you so much!
You’ve done it again. Your version puts the official one to shame. Brava, Portia!
Wow, great update.
Thank you for taking the time to write such a wonderful story. I appreciate your dedication to writing 28 excellent pages. I enjoyed reading each page and appreciate all the detail and effort you put in. I can’t wait to see Bette tackle the Kennard’s. With Helena on her side, the Kennard family won’t know what hit them. Hopefully, Shane will be able to tell Carmen she loves her and I wish Tina would get well enough to tell her family to leave her, Bette & Angelica alone. Please continue…
Oh my god! Words fail me! You are the master! You are the master! I’ll come back later and make detailed comments. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this excellent, excellent story!
You have blown this fanfic site out of the water! Hell, there IS no water! Whatever behooves you to write so well, so long and so in depth, I salute it and you! I bow to the master! Oop, I’m repeating myself. I stayed up well past my bedtime (it’s 3:00 AM here) and the bedroom door may be locked. I’ll probably have to spend the rest of the early morning sleeping in my computer chair with my feet up on the case on the floor. And yes, it was and is worth it!!! I have anticipated this story coming around again. You have outdone all my expectations. Do I gush much? Portia Only. Only Portia!
L Word and Capriati in the same story : JUST PERFECT !!!!! So addict to this story. Great job !!
WOW, but for god sakes let Tina’s mom make Bette understand that it was not her but Stephanie. Let her help fight that bitch to keep Tina safe and with Bette. They do not need any more pain than they are ready have.
i hope bette finds out this all stephanie and not theresa-soon
This story is fucking amazing. It must have taken forever to write this many pages but with excellent detail and interesting dialogue. It was all great. Thank you so much.
I wish nothing but violence on Stephanie – maybe she and the Doc can fall victim to appletini poison or a long hard fall off a very high cliff prehaps? This story really is wonderful – you’ve given these characters so much breath. I felt like voyeur with B/T in the hotel – you painted such a vivid/descriptive picture.
Another terrific installment. Now I see why you were gone so long…28 pages wow. Absolutely loving your story. I have my suspicions that Terese knows about the suit. I’m holding out hope that its just shitty Stephanie. I hope Alice and Dana can figure out how to communicate–love that you’ve kept them together. Thanks for a wonderful update.
Oops! should read: Teresa knows nothing about the suit :)
wonderful chapter yet if full of drama :D The Bette and Barbara love scene was soo amazing :heart: And the B&T love scene is something we needed to see from long time… I simply adore how you pictured Helena, high heels but caring and ready to fight on the right side :D And her dynamics with Bette are wonderful :PKeep it on, I check every two days to see if you published another chapter as I’m eager to read it (knowing it must take long time to write and correct so many pages of work) Really many thanks for your efforts :D You’re appreciated, a lot :nod: