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Letting Go – Chapter 13
Chapter 13:
When Bette had entered the restroom, Tina’s sudden fears and doubts were washed away. The love and worry she saw in Bette’s eyes answered all her questions and pushed her uncertainties behind her. Tina was never the type to be so aggressive, but thoughts of Cecilia with her arms around Bette led Tina to make a decision within a split second. This, Bette, was what and who Tina wanted, and never in her life was she so sure about herself, about what she wanted, who she loved. Perhaps it was that unique scent of Bette’s that drove Tina over the edge and provided her with the courage she needed to execute her plan.
Bette Porter belonged to Tina Kennard and Tina Kennard only. If Bette didn’t know that, Tina was going to show it to her. As Tina approached Bette, her left hand trapped Bette in a corner and there would be no where to run. Tina had her prey exactly where she wanted, and now she was going to have her feast. There were two possibilities, one, Bette would fight the predator and struggle for release; two, Bette knew it was a lost cause and would let Tina have her way with her. Within seconds, Bette had become weak, she had no strength to fight off Tina, and to be honest, she didn’t want to. When Bette just stood there like a deer in headlights, Tina’s right arm pulled Bette into a tight embrace and she began to devour Bette starting at the neck.
‘Oh God, she smells so good…’ was all Tina’s mind could think as she began kissing away at Bette’s neck claiming what was hers.
Tina made sure to lay her lips on every inch of Bette, and she did; she could feel the rising goose bumps on Bette’s neck. She kissed every single one of them to assure Bette that she would be safe in her arms; to trust her, to let go, to let Tina fulfill her every desire. No one would be able to love Bette like Tina, and she was going to prove that to her.
Bette granted Tina’s wish, she tilted her head back and let out a soft whimper, Tina was now going crazy herself. Never in her life did she know that someone’s body, someone’s voice, and just their mere presence could turn her on so much where she could no longer control her own actions and make rational decisions.
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(46 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
I agree great chapter – a different flavor with the interior focus but absolutely wonderful – having competition right in front of you can really crystalize your desires.
HOLY CRUD MAN!!!! Y R U DOING THIS!!!!!!! IT’S NOT FAIR!!!!!! LOL!!!! I find this and your last chapter 2 be hott, cause I’ve had a very similar experience… & IT WAS SOOOOO WORTH IT!!!!!! (hmmmm memories). Now do they get caught or do they go home and finish this….. I HOPE IT’S THE LATTER!!!!!
Aaaaaaagggggggghhhhhh! This ended too soon. Smile, you’re killing me slowly and softly.
smile you are freaking mean. how long do we have to wait to see if these 2 get caught? pls don’t leave us hanging too long…
oooooOOOOOOooooo, I love this story. PLEEEAAASE post again soon. Wow, there is a lot of public restroom. . .uhhhh “intimacy” in FF. . .am I missing out? Hahaha.
Yoweeee!! B&T aren’t the only ones who’re sweating! Smile, I know the NC-17’s make you blush, heck I would blush too if I wrote them. Don’t worry though, you write with such brilliance and passion, I’ll take any rating I can get!
OMG! WHOA! Hey that was so Wonderful WHOA! I Love it but it’s to short LOL! Yes I just get back to Arlington VA. I just visit my MOM anyway WHOA! this is getting HOT soon LOL! Please continue I can’t wait to the next chapter Thanks.
theres being a teast and just plain frustrating. and now girl, im frustrated. tinas willing to change, with one stipulaton. what might that be. hmmm. bettes a complete puddle now. this was great. but you best be posting soon. thanks.
very great chapter, i am really glad i started to read it (did i say that already?) c’mon u cant leave us hanging. u no u dont want to ;) LOL please post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter smile i still love love love the story… I am looking forward to your next post;-)
Shi*t smile you are soo mean…leaving us like this…..how the hell can you do this to us…we sooo want more we crave more…please post soon
the neck is certainly a great place to start… when u start your sense of smell takes over LOL
Jeez, everytime I start to get down in a bathroom someone always walks in by this point….*eyebrow raised* Love the unbridled lust here smile…keep it coming.
K
Wonderful chapter, I can’t believe you stopped there! Can’t wait for more.
Love tjkis Who wants who the most. Take it home and enjoy it more.. Oh by the way you are a tease. THANKS
great followup….but again, way too short, another teaser!! They are going a bit far in the bathroom without anyone coming in yet?? And being that this is Tina’s first w/Bette, boy she sure doesn’t have any internal hold button…where to go from here…hmmmm….the BEDROOM…
Damn still so hot and sexy. Man you so mean, you can’t leave us like this, please post soon, thanks!
Arrrrr…..you’re really driving me up the wall!!!!! *fingers in my hair*
Hahahahahhaha… oh gosh, I cannot believe you did this to me… to us readers…
You’re soooooo heating this up…. But… but…. But… I thought you said… ok, will carry this conversation through email :P gosh, I can’t even type properly…
Hahahaha… Yes, the house is sooooo need to be built after this chappy… I’m soooo ready to decorate your house if I get to read it first hand… YEY!!!! But hahaha… don’t expect me to do this during work :P as you know our time difference… and the time you usually write…
I know I know, I admit that I’m sooooooo addicted to FF :D and willing to neglect anything else in real life.
Stop playing!!!!!!!!!!!