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    Letting Go – Chapter four

    Story written on August 10, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55967
    Author Notes:

    What did Bette see on Tina, and what’s Bette’s relation to Eric?

    Chapter four:

     

    What Bette saw was the thin chain of Tina’s silver necklace getting tangled in with the top of Tina’s turtleneck collar.  Naturally, Tina pulled out her necklace.

     

    ‘That’s…that’s my key…‘ Bette thought to herself as she moved her head forward and squinted her eyes hoping to get a closer look.  Now she definitely wasn’t able to remove her eyes off of Tina.  Bette’s memory traveled back to those previous three weeks when those mysterious feelings first began.  ‘Eric…‘

     

    Alice knew something was wrong with Bette and she could feel the students starting to stare so she naturally walked over to Bette, patted her on the shoulders, and quietly whispered into her ears.

     

    “Bette, you need to stop staring at her you’re freaking her out…and wipe up your drool…”

     

    Twenty minutes of introduction to their possible unit with objectives and goals stated later, Alice and Tina left Bette’s classroom and headed back to room 0119.  Tina went over the nights reading assignment, and before she knew it, the bell rang, and she survived first period.

     

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    Tina and Eric were sitting at the bar waiting for their table.

     

    “Eric, I think our table should be ready soon, I’m going to use the restroom.”

     

    “Okay,” as he watched Tina get off the bar stool.

     

    “Eric, party of two,” the hostess near the front door said as she turned around to face the bar.

     

    “Your table is ready, follow me please,” she said as Eric walked towards her.

     

    “My girlfriend is in the restroom, can you give us a couple of minutes?’

     

    “We’re really busy tonight, but I can seat you first and tell her where your table’s at.”

     

    Eric followed the hostess to their table while he spotted a familiar face.

     

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    It had been two days since Bette lost her charm.  There were no calls from the library.  It seemed like a lost cause.

     

    Bette had just gotten out of a long stressful day at school, student mid-terms had to be sent out, there were teacher parent conferences, and a staff meeting; in addition to the fact that her beloved charm was still missing made her mood all the worse.  The whole time during dinner, Bette would just sit there and stare, her food barely touched.

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    3. STOP BEING SHY, YOU ARE TALENTED IF YOU CAN MAKE MORE THEN ONE CHAPTER ,IT’S TBETTER THEN MY RUN ON SENTENCES…………WONDERFUL JOB GIRL..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK……

    5. I have to admit, I spent much of the morning checking to see if you’d posted anything. Since there wasnt a new chaper here; I dismantled my computer room. After setting everything back up, I come here and BAMMMM….a new chapter!!

      Thank you for making me clean up. I am truly loving your story and QQg fwrd to the next chapter.

    8. Im liking this story………. please post soon (as in tonite lol) i say u mix a little bit of drama with romance whatever you choose to do im sure it will be great!!

    12. I love it! They are falling in love with each other without even knowing the connection, this is amazing. Thank you for this, and I have added you to my very short list of fave authors LOL

    13. Oh… you even had me hooked… what are you going to do with Eric, Tina and Bette? :P Just do whatever you feel right with your story :) I’ll sincerely support you all the way. No stopping… keep posting!!

    20. Nice chapter…although I had some problems following it so I had to read it a few times. I guess I just have to get used to your flashback signs…maybe you could write flashback…you know I’m not very smart. LOL! I personally love the sweet and romantic stories the best…but to keep readers really hooked to your story, you could mix little (i.e., small amounts) drama into this. Of course your the master so you do what you want and I will happily continue reading your story….but since you asked, I gave you my opinion. Kiitos!

    22. oooOOOOoooo, I get it. A different charm, I thought that Bette got it back, then when you said charm, I thought Tina was wearing Bette’s charm around her neck. D’oh! HAha, this story is great, and yes I WILL continue reading! Please post again soon!

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