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Love && Basketball – Part 20
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Torres Private Hanger (Saturday, 1:00 AM)
As the entire crew walked onto Papi’s father’s private jet they were stunned. The enterior was complete luxury. Leather seats, couches, 70" TV screen, a nice kitchen. 2 beautiful bathrooms, complete with showers and practically anything else.
Mr. Torres waved us goodbye as we took off for Paris, France. The takeoff was completely smooth. And the pilots were expertly skilled, air force award winners.
Jenny and Papi were playing ‘Spit’ the card game on a card table. Alice was in Dana’s lap playing Madden ’09 with her on a couch. And Shane and Carmen were cuddled on a couch on the other side of the room.
Shane was halfway asleep, while Carmen was playing with her hair, half on Shane, half off Shane. Then Carmen whispered in Shane’s ear, "you look so adorable in that shirt."
Shane’s eyes opened up as she kissed Carmen, "thanks baby."
Carmen grabbed Shane’s purple fitted hat off her head and put it on her own head as she kissed her more. Grabbing her face with her hands.
Shane sat up slightly and pulled Carmen on top of her. Carmen set herself comortably on Shane’s body and then went down into a hardcore makeout.
Shane’s hat fell off Carmen’s head as the kissing intensified. Carmen pulled away and pushed Shane in a upright position. Then she grabbed Shane’s hands and placed them on her ass, making Shane grab it. Without protest Shane did, making Carmen grind onto Shane’s body slowly.
Shane couldn’t take it, she went in for a kiss but Carmen pulled away teasingly, as she contiuned to grind on Shane’s body. Carmen then pushed her down forcefully as she contiuned grinding, harder.
Then she finally went down to Shane’s ear, bit it, and said, "I want you so bad, I can’t wait until I get you in that hotel room", she said in a seductive voice.
Shane grabbed her head and kissed her deeply. They contiuned making out until they got the signal that there was 5 minutes until landing.
Carmen got off Shane and helped her up to go and join everyone else, who were now all playing Madden ’09, deeply into the game.
"Hey, 5 minutes assholes, get off that damn game and let’s go now!", Shane declared.
"Alright, alright, grab some snacks in the fridge though, I’m a little hungary, what time is it?"
"It’s 2:30 PM in Paris right now", Dana chimed in.
"Ughh, great, let’s get ready for a long ass weekend", Jenny groaned.
"We are now landing", came the captain.
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how was it? I’m making a request. Can i please get 4 comments? It’ll take 4 comments in order for me to update. So please, tell me how you feel. Thanks guys (:
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really enjoying this story..glad your back and updating.pps
Love that Shane is being so true to Carman. Alice will always be Alice, so watch out Paris I waiting to see what she does.
I thought Shane and Carm were going to join the mile high club for a minute there. Very nicely done can’t wait for more. PS
you have been sorely missed, love this story and so pumped that your back with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow just read threw the whole story..damnn its amazing!! hope you post soon!!
Diablo..Mami!! this was hot!! please, post an update soon!! This Fic is so badass!! nice work babe
Man!! U cant jus leave us hangin like that!! I waz soo in2 this story!! Read it in one whole sittin!! PLz PLz PMS!!! I luv it!!!!
Great story, x Krush x14 =)Iim really enjoying it. I hope you post again real soon. Keep up the good work ;)Dani
Well, you have more than 4 commemts already, but extra ones will get you to update even faster?? :) PPSBTW, that was hot!!
Fantastic!!! I love it!! Come on people…we need comments. I have to have an update!! It can’t stop here.
Jenny and Shane hooked up? Eww, eww, eww! *shakes head* Anyway, the heat between Shane and Carmen during the airplane ride made me think they were going to join the mile-high club. Looks like Shane’s patience with Carmen is going to pay off. Hope you post soon. :)
ugh!!! you are killing me!!! that was Ãœber hot!!!! sizzling hot!!! please, please, please post soon!!!Ãœ i Ãœber loved it!!! hahaha… lAtEr!!! hOtFoRsHaNe!!!Ãœ
how did i miss this update? – scratches head. well it’s not too late, hehe..oh lord, shane and jenny dated in 9th grade? erm, that makes me feel nauseous a little.. but the sex talk that jenny had with carmen was kinda funny but too much details on how shane wld be in bed, and coming from jenny! GASP! :p can’t wait for them to get into the hotel room! haha..
OMG!!! THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! i know i havent commented so far but… OMG! that was amaingly awesome! and i need more! like NOW! please update soon! you were just about to get to the good part and you havent updated! please! update soon!