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Love In The L Word – Chapter 1
as Bette drives up in front of the hospital, in which her and tinas baby girl, Angelica, was just born in, she looks out her car window while stopping the car, and sees the nurse wheeling tina and their baby outside in a wheelchair. bette gets out of the car, and walks over to tina and bends down in front of her to look in2 tinas eyes…
bette ( smiling with tears building up in her eyes ): u dont know how proud i am of u. u were so brave during labor. i was so happy to be there every step of the way, not to just be there for the birth of our baby girl ( smiling at their baby girl and kisses her on her forehead..then looks back up at tina ) but so that i could be there 4 u also, 2 hold ur hand, and 2 try 2 make things easier. when i seen how much pain u were in, the only thing i wanted 2 do was 2 be there with u and for u. u and our baby girl r the 2 most beautiful and important people in my life, and i am so happy that i have both of u, i am the luckiest women in the world. i love you both so very much. ( leans in for a kiss from tina )
tina ( smiling with tears falling down her cheek ): baby..i am so happy that u were there with me every step of the way during labor. i dont know what i wouldve done if u werent there with me. im so happy that we have a baby now, me and u are going to be great parents. bette…u and our baby are also the 2 most important and beautiful people in my life, and i am so happy that i have u both. i love you both so very much. ( kisses bette on the lips and then kisses their baby girl ).
bette takes their baby girl out of tinas arms and holds their baby girl while opening the car door and helping tina in2 the car…
tina ( smiles ): thank you baby..
bette ( smiles back ): anything for u baby..
( they both lean in for a kiss, while bettes still holding their baby girl )
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(51 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
Nice story. I don’t usually comment but I think this would read better if you wrote out the words instead of using numbers and “u” instead of you. I just found myself getting distracted by it.
Sweet story. I like it.
I agree with greens. This was sweet, but I really found myself not able to concentrate on the story, because I was distracted by all your shortcuts, and no capital letters. I felt like I was reading a text message, not a story. I hope you do continue though, because it was sweet.
great chapter..please continue
great start…please post soon
I like this story and would love to see it develops.
I agree about the slang and shortcuts — distracting!
nice and sweet