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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 63
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“Or what, babe?”
Bette swallowed the lump in her throat and turned, placing her lips to Tina’s ear, “or the only thing being eaten at this barbeque will be you, and I don’t think you want the Queen’s audience viewing that, do you?”
“Smart *****. Okay, baby, the Queen may return to her duties.”
Tina walked away with a smile from ear to earyou may be Queen, baby, but, you know I’ve got the power
* * *
Susan had made her way over to Shane and Carmen. They were sitting next to Angelica, who was happily in her swing in the shade, just watching over her domain.
“They’re really a terrific couple,” Susan said.
“No one else like them – never was, never will be again.” Shane replied.
“That’s an understatement,” said Carmen.
Susan was just beginning to know these people. It was really just a surface scratching at this point, but just the tone in Shane’s statement made it perfectly clear, from way below the surface of her exterior shell, that Bette & Tina were under the protection of McCutcheon Security.
Search long enough, look in all the right places, and one will find every security system has a flaw or an override switch. No flaws in McCutcheon – that’s evident. But the override switch is her trust. If she knows that Tina or Bette trust someone, then FLIP SWITCHoverride engaged.
“
“Huh? Oh, yeah, sorry, Kit. Listen, how is Susan working out, okay?”
“Yeah, she’s great. Reliable and a good worker. I’m glad she showed up. Why?”
“Dunno. It just seems she dropped out of nowhere.”
“We all did at one time or another, girlfriend. Her time was just a little later than ours, that’s all.”
“Yeah, okay.”
Not okay is what
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HellNo is definitely gonna get it!!arghh…
Great chapter, Iloved the interaction between B&T at the grill. I hope that Alice can put her nose to GOOD use and sniff out Susan. I would love to see Nancy contimue to be pat of this story, maybe as a match with Alice. I am not a fan of Kit and Ivan as a match, and I don’t think that Kit needs the additional drama. Lets give Kit some hetero. lovin.
K
Excellent chapter just love it.
So hella got susan and candyass, but is Ivan in her pocket too???
That’s right send alice out like scooby doo on susan ass.
Wonder what Helena has up her evil sleeve this time and just does Susan think she can do to come between B&T……aaaah the suspense.
RC..love that way the story is going. Loved the manner in which Bette handled Helena at the CAC…having Nancy listen in was great. Tina’s way of handling the Queen of the Grill was fun & sexy. Like to see that playful side of them. Shane is and will always be the protector of Bette & Tina. She loves them and won’t let anything or anyone harm them. Alice is following her instinct;she knows something isn’t right with Susan. The phrase “too good to be true” is apparent with Susan. I’m glad Alice is going to investigate Susan. RC…I’m really enjoying the story. Thanks for posting, and please continue.
I’m with Therese_BelivetI dont need to take up space when its been said. thanks
this is good… i have a feeling this susan is not going to stick to the plans the bitch gave her… she just might like the relationship bette and tina have… or alice to the rescue… she may just crack the case… please continue
You’re such a regal to read !
There’s a powerful sense of humour and happy turns of phrases in the way you write this wonderful story and I truly love that. You really have a gift to perfectly resume characters with few words or even one happy formula like this “McCutcheon Security” of yours, for example ! Yes, your humour is a reader’s delight…
This scene in Bette’s office was a masterpiece : I loved the venomous exchange, Bette’s control, her silent interraction with the wonderful James and this great finale with Nancy (…at least I think ?) on the phone.
And then this barbecue scene, mastered as a great piece of calm-before-the-tempest scene pointing everybody’s future parts in the coming Peabody-esque drama : Susan the spy, Shane the protector, the so marvelously intuitive Alice (what a flair, here !), and of course our lovely favorite couple and their unique relationship.
Everything’s ready for the next drama wave, how great ! I’m also ready to savour it step by step until the so wanted Nancy-Helena confrontation on Court ! What a menu… thanks !! ^_^
love the barbecue scenen. shane is so sweet
Bette and the HellBitch was fabulous..Susan is freaking me out..I hope Alice finds some good dirt on Susan,before things get bad..Great job as always..THANKS…
I love how Tina keeps Bette on her toes. She’s the true power dyke of the two! It’s just that no one knows it. :) I hope Alice is able to check out Susan’s history. I’m still iffy about her. Thanks, RC!!
great post is sue working for the QUEEN OF MEAN
My reply here mirrors Therese_Belivet; so I am not going to rewrite what she wrote.
I really do hope that was Nancy on the phone.
this was great. loved how bette played hellno. i really dont like her. cant wait for her to get hers. al is on the job, fantastic. shane is just shane. love how shes so protective. the grill queen scene. oh shit her knees buckling, had me laughing. thanks.
Lord my poor brain! There’re so many sub plots withing the main story! Me thinks there’s some DRAMA on the way!