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Masked Feelings CH 35 Who to trust?
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Roxy – Oh Alice…. there is something here for you.
Alice comes around the corner to see the dozen roses in Roxy’s hands. She knew who they were from…. her face lit up. The same color as the last time…. peach. Roxy hands them to her and leaves her alone to read the card.
I love you, Alice….. I’ll never make you doubt that again. Please forgive me.
It was short and to the point, but it said everything Alice needed to hear. Alice wasn’t the only one who knew what to say to the one she loved. The only difference was Dana was better at showing what she felt then saying it. Alice couldn’t wait to get on the phone to call her. When Dana answered, she sounded groggy.
Dana – Hello?
Alice – Hi, sweetie. Did I wake you?
Dana – Yes…. but I’m so happy you did.
Alice – I got your roses. They are beautiful…. but not as beautiful as the words that came on the card.
Dana – I meant every word. I’m so sorry, Al. You deserve so much better then me…… but no one will love you more then I do.
Alice – Oh Dana….. I love you too. I never got the chance to ask you. When are you coming home?
Dana – The day after tomorrow.
Alice – Good… I can’t wait to see you. Tomorrow is going to be so busy. I probably won’t be able to see you.
Dana – I understand. I wish I could be there with you. The thought of you going through it alone, really scares me. I’m so scared of losing you, Al. Please be careful.
Alice – You won’t lose me, Dana.
Dana – I better not. There is no sense in going home, if you’re not going to be there.
Alice – Oh, I’ll be there. You won’t be able to drag me from your bed.
Dana – Why would I want to do that? I only wish I didn’t have to wait two more weeks. It’s going to be hard to behave myself til then.
Alice – Two weeks?
Dana – Yes…. then I can do whatever I want.
Alice – I wish I got this cast off in two weeks, but it will be longer for me.
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Another awsome chapter, Roxy’s really lose’n the control over her feelings for Alice I hope nothing happens between them again. And of course Dana and Alice are always perfect together regardless of whats happened on the show. Really lookin forward to your next chapter!!
AWESOME baby! You impress me. Seriously, I used to really like Roxy but now she’s a homewrecking hussie. What is that?! You just love creating chaos dont you? I loved this update. Sorry I couldn’t comment in time for the last chapter. But I have been keeping up to date on your masterpiece. It’s so sad after seeing the show, I wish this story could be the show. It’s a lot more interesting and beautiful. But no, we settle for what we get. It’s better than nothing I suppose. I hope Roxy keeps herself in check..and that Dana doesn’t find out. Seriously, let them be happy! :) Happy is good sometimes..most times..eh? Brilliant update sweetie, can’t wait for the next. Until next time..
there is going to be a lot of heat between all of them and with roxy losing control of her feelings will not help one bit i love it please post soon can’t wait to see what you have in store for all of them
Ok…I posted my comment on this story on the wrong story (*feels a little bit embarassed*). (Note to myself, never open two stories at the same time.)Roxy ruined it for herself (*doing a little dance of joy*), she came on much too strong. I think it’s realy hard for Dana to be in the hospital while Alice is attending the funeral. I have this funny feeling that Lara will show up again, or is that just me? :S You really keep suprising me, I can’t predict what your next storyline will be. You’ve got me hooked on this story! I have one advice for you, don’t kill off one of the main characters. :P (Seriously, don’t!)
Great update as usual! Thank you for having Alice stop the grope-fest…it makes me cringe the thought of Alice and Roxy together. Thank you for continuing our Danish fix as long as you write I’ll read it! The funeral should be interesting…and I’m looking forward to Dana coming home, maybe she’ll be able to keep Roxy a little more in check! Can’t wait till the update!
loved this chapter. definitely felt the tension rising. tsk tsk roxy. good thing alice was able to stop her. so glad dana stood up to her mom and got thru to her. hope her mom does come around. can’t wait for dana to come home. she’s gotta protect her woman. looking forward to ur next post. ^ – ^
Another great update…11 pages that’s great. I’m so glad that Alice stopped Roxy when she did…I’m starting to really dislike her! Loved the Danish moments and cannot wait for Dana to come home and for those two weeks to come to an end…maybe some steamy scenes next time. Again thanks for the beautiful story and for keeping our girls alive.