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Meet Me In Montauk; #07
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From: Peabody, Helena
To: Porter, Bette
CC:
Subject: RE: Hello
That’s funny because…
I think I miss you too.
Helena
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Bette
I starred at my screen in disbelief, reading her reply over and over again.
She misses me too?
I couldn’t help the grin that unconsciously spread across my lips. Why was her reply making me so happy? This tingly sensation just rushed through my body. As I sat there, drowning myself in that fleeting moment, I started to imagine the endless possibilities.
Then, my phone rang, waking me from my day-dreaming stupor.
“Hello, Bette speaking,” I said as I picked up the call.
“Hey, it’s me,” I heard Tina’s voice on the other end of the line; that really dropped the reality bomb onto my head.
“Hey,” I replied, surprised that she called, “What’s up?”
“Nothing, I just wanted to apologize for not having some time to spend with you recently. I know stuff has been hectic and I…I’m sorry we haven’t had time with each other since you got back.”
“It’s alright,” I told her, “I understand that you’re swamped with things on your end.”
“Yea, but that’s no excuse. I finish work early today so…shall we have dinner? Maybe you can tell me about your trip.”
“That sounds good,” I replied, “You wanna dine out or…”
“No no,” she interrupted, “I want to eat in tonight, so just be home after your shift alright?”
“Alright, I’ll see you home then.”
“I love you, B.”
Upon hearing those words from her, a wave of guilt crashed over me.
What was I doing?
“I love you too, I’ll see you home.”
I hung up the phone, shaking my head; I felt like I was cheating on her. I wasn’t being fair to her. The last thing I wanted was to do anything irrational to hurt her. Despite the slum that our relationship was in, she didn’t deserve this.
I held my head in my hands, trying to mentally erase this undeniable attraction I had to Helena. I barely knew her and yet, she had gotten me. Hook, line and sinker.
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This is getting sooooooo good. Why do I have this feeling that these two will decide to meet and someone will chicken out. :-) pps.
Oh No….Great update there Euni…Im doing great little sniffle here and there but least life’s a little bit better i think.My gf’s okay though…Hope you and your girl are okay.Im feeling down lately and this brings me happiness.So Bette’s made the first move yet again…Is Helena thinking the same as Bette.Im not sure she is well i think she likes Bette but doesnt think she should really do anythink about it.Great update though…
Hey E! I just got back and of course had to read your stories. This is so good. I am of course hooked, as always! Bette’s last email spelled TROUBLE. Hehe! I hope you have a great week ahead of you! >-(“,)-
YOU DID NOT leave off there!! Didn’t you get the memo..no torturing at Chrismas? When Tina said she wanted to spend time with Bette,and have dinner, I wanted Bette to blow her off and walk in later and say “oh sorry.” Maybe Tina would know how Bette felt then. Bette and Helena gotta meet in Montauk…they gotta meet SOON..pleeeeeeeease……..It’s gonna be so hot when they do.
They both are in so much trouble
Okay this is sounding good. Not that I’m for cheating. But sometimes faith has a way doing things. Great update!
Aww man here it goes..the lies or shall I say not the whole truth. I’m gonna go and start shedding my tears for Tasha right now
This is indeed love!!awesome E…..
Sticking head out of corner, just to say that nothing good comes of others pain, ya I heard that somewhere before, I know it’s famous but don’t know who to credit. Running back to corner looking over sholder winking @ Euni saying “I still love your stories” Thank you, Md
Ohoh those two are in so much trouble and I hope they come clean with their gf’s before they take their relationship to another level. Thanks for posting baby girl :) PPS.
Hello Beautiful Dragonfly… I don’t know if it makes me a horrible person but I truly would love for these two to find unrequited love with one another… they both seem so passive within their relationships with the woman they currently share home with… I don’t know if I missed the boat or something but they are not married either of them… and well I think with Bette and Tina it is sealed with doom… Tina is so passive on anything… if she had any real attachment to Bette she should realize that Bette is drifting, Bette isn’t’ good at hiding these kinds of things… she acts openly like she is trying to get caught… whereas Helena can hide just about anything and that is why Tasha has a harder time seeing through her… when I see the interaction and the emotions you stir when you write these two woman separated by mountains and oceans I can feel completely their longing for one another… you have an uncanny ability to make me feel each and every emotion that is consuming these ladies… so yes I think they should take the plunge… they should risk their hearts and find if the other truly has what they need to be complete cause I don’t think the people they are with can truly complete them… “There is a special bond between twin soul mates–unconditional love, respect for each other, bringing out the best in each other, and highly compatible.” – Mettrie L, much love and hugs my beautiful Cuzzie, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and Ever Proud to have a Cuzzie like you… you inspire me)
wuh-oh..E you know I am B and H for life, but they gotta sort out their current situations first because further emotional intimacy is going to make this even more complicated…maybe they can talk to each other about why they are lonely or unhappy…but in the end you know I want B and H together LOL…anyway loved the story PPS
Sheeeesh…! That’s it? I waited allllllllll this time…for those 3 little tiny measly pages!?!?! *Ahem* Sorry, eunibaby, you know I’m kidding…and that your writing makes me swoon! Just can’t get enough~!~No matter how many pages it is! And I, for one, don’t care how much trouble this attraction causes between the parties in your story as long as I get to see Bette and Helena together in the end…’cause they’re made for one another…and and and and *All is fair in love and fanfic!* Oh! And you can be ungrounded when you finish this marvelous story! No go to your chair while the rain sends down to you lovely thoughts and phrases to share with us, your devoted readers! Looking forward to more uh…SOON! Merci beaucoup, ma belle…*sighs, walking off shaking head, thinking: damn, these emails are sexy*…
Eunicky,Chicky, Wicky, sweetie. I’m with Md and kena, Chocolatechild and others on this one. They need to halt before this goes further. They are heading down a perilous slope on this one that can only lead to pain for ALL involved. That said, this is a very important and very real story that affects so many who look to the internet for companionship instead of the live body next to them. Please continue it. I look forward to where you go with this. I have to say you have my stomach tied up in knots. I love your style.
Soooo much trouble… and then you add drama adding to the connection…the support…the chemistry…the need to protect….the tingles….Sooo bad! Where the L is Keith? lol! Whelp, I suppose you can guess which part of this fanfic luvin’ “mob” I’m in! lol! They are absolutely drawn to each other…out of longing, loneliness, relational apathy, attraction…true compatibility..hmm? maybe. But no matter how you slice it…while, indeed they aren’t married, clearly they are in committed relationships and are already feeling a sense of betrayl within themselves. As good as it feels now, their personal decisions are gonna hurt a lot of people…and most truthfully, it does hurt you….I think as hard as it is…a person always feels better after having been honest rather than knowingly continuing to cross the line…to the point that they feel completely emotionally tied to another person. I would love to see them meet in Montauk…but once they are free and clear. And that Bette….She really can’t help herself! Did she not learn anything from the Candy debacle? lol! Still luvin’ it….PPS!
Am I a horrible person for wanting B and H to get together? I am not into cheating at all but I see Tina being all into her job, and not at all into Bette, and I see Tash saying she loves Helena, but talking and actually being a responsible, mature partner are two different things. I don’t see either of them feeling happy and fulfilled and at peace with Tina and Tash, and they belong together!! I want them to find that peace and fulfilllment with each other. I like how they just care about how the other one is doing and feeling, which is more than the partners are doing. Just wanted to make clear that it’s not just the hotness that is driving this, though there is that too.