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Meet Me In Montauk; #10
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I watched her walk into her room, slowly closing the door behind her.
“Bette,” I called out.
She turned to look at me, “Yea?” she replied.
“Would you sleep with me tonight?”
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Bette
I frowned, looking at her with uncertainty. Did she just ask me to sleep with her?
She was looking at her feet, as if she was nervous about asking me that question. What exactly did she mean?
“I just…I just want to feel you next to me,” she said finally.
She looked up at me expectantly as I opened the door to my room, silently inviting her inside. She walked in gingerly, and took at seat at the edge of the bed.
The room was dimly lit by the two bedside lamps. I walked around to the other side, slipping underneath the covers. She came over and crawled in beside me. We lay down, facing each other, close enough to feel the heat radiate from each other’s skin but yet, not touching. We stayed, gazing at each other for a long time, blanketed by a serene silence.
She smiled at me, that gentle smile that made my heart ache, her eyes glistening with words unspoken, “Bette,” she whispered, “You have no idea how much I want you.”
I looked back into her eyes, lost in the infinite echoes of her words, “I want you,” I replied, my voice hushed.
I reached out a hand to touch her face.
“Don’t,” she said, pulling away slightly, “Bette, we can’t, not like this.”
I put my hand back down, feeling this desperate ache crawling through my veins. I wanted to touch her and feel her close to me. But she was right; this was just not the way.
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Helena
She looked back at me, her pained expression tugged at my heart strings.
How torturous was this; to be so close, yet so very far away.
The nearness of her intoxicated me, every inch of my skin called out for her touch. But I knew deep in my heart that I could not take this step forward, I could not bear to subject myself, or Tash, or Bette, or Tina to this chaotic mess.
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Oh Cuzzie Cuz… that was perfect and heartbreaking… and so very powerful… yes these women have so much to think through… so much to consider… I know that Cheating is never a thing to take lightly… even if it is emotional… but I think when one starts to stay there are things within their lives that seem out of place… maybe their passions and desires are miss-focused… maybe it is their souls telling them to move on and seek the soul in which they truly desire… you never know who your soul is destined to meet and fall in love with… nor do you know how long this might last… I think that Helena will feel the sting of guilt because she has taken Tasha for granted to an extent… and still in her mind and maybe in reality Tasha hasn’t really kept up her end of the equal partnership… as for Tina well suspecting someone is cheating and breaching their privacy are pretty much the same thing so if Tina has Bette’s email… or her CC Statement or anything this is no definitely no better then what Bette might have done and she has just as much to answer for… I fear for Bette… with her own sense of responsibility and then the sting of betrayal she might feel from Tina’s actions I fear she might do something… and get hurt more seriously in the end… I still believe that the love and desire that Helena and Bette have for one another isn’t superficial… I think it is real and the fact that they have been responsible enough to take a step back and see where their hearts truly stand is a testament to this ‘love’ you my beautiful Dragonfly are completely inspiring… you have set my heart and soul afire on this day where I could have easily been consumed within my own sadness… love you and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and your ever loving Cuzzie)
Regardless of what Bette and Helena has done I don’t think they are truly in love with their partner just care deeply for them. When you’re in love you don’t struggle with cheating. Yeah I know relationships has it problems but the situation that Bette and Helena are in proves that it is more serious then they will admit. IMHO it doesn’t matter how nice or good someone is to you if they’re not right for you it won’t work out. There’s more to come with this story so I’m guessing we don’t know the whole story behind both relationships.
I love the way you are articulating the emotion…particularly for Helena. Bette..hmmm…I don’t know. It really is as though she has already emotionally withdrawn from her relationship. And while Bette seems ready to dive in head first, Helena is quite torn. TK definitely brings up some excellent points…I had forgotten that Bette made those statements….Ok, I was right that one of the rooms would be neglected…but I had nooo idea that you would decide to postpone my torture for another “month”!! lol! Btw, thank you for resurrecting Helena’s infamous line: “What starts in chaos, ends in chaos”. That is the absolute truth! PPS!
You be careful here Euni, this is some trecherous place your going. Buckling up here. Thank you, Md
TKGirl….I applaud your analysis. Bette is being very selfish… She and Helena have nothing. NOTHING…Just some cute emails and a mutual attaction. This is NOTHING…. I do think you can be in love and struggle with cheating. It happens all the time. These two need to get their shit together. Call it off and forget about that meeting in a month….Even without TIna busting Bette, if that is what happens next, I don’t think these two would meet again. Since they didn’t cross those lines this time what the heat had to be high between them, they won’t.The magic is gone. Reality sets in, they move on….Right?!
Eeep! Them meeting in Montauk after a month reminds me of this film called “An Affair To Remember”. I do hope the ending is the same as the film but not the things that happened in between. I wonder what’s in the papers that’s in front of Bette. What Helena and Bette did for me was cheating already. There was no physical intimacy but there were emotional ones. That still counts for me. :) Then again it’s just me. Regardless, I still love this story! >-(“,)-
Bette has been caught The credit card. when you leave a paper trail,you get in trouble. thanks
Aww man, see where lies and deceit gets you. Just like Helena said what starts in chaos ends in chaos. I’m still disappointed in Bette and Helena.
Oh sure, when they are finally where I want them, in bed together, they go and get religion. I am no fan of Tina and she is getting what she deserves..if you neglect your partner and treat them like they don’t matter, you might lose them. I still don’t feel Tasha..I am not seeing her as the strong and capable one on the show, this characterization is different.
Tina wouldn’t be able to see the credit card statement so soon…Bette just got back! Anyway, she told Tina she was going to Montauk..so what’s Tina’s prob? I bet what she has done is read Bette’s emails…and the papers were printouts of the emails…
Ever heard of Milton Berle, little lass? Well, me and MB…we’re gonna kwill u, we’re gonna kwill u ded! heheh…lubsss u…me and sugar lubss u…she said to tell u. heheh…umm…you’re breakin my heart…not that you care…buttus
Oh oh the shit hit the fan in Bette’s case. I wonder what those papers are? can’t be the credit card ones cause normally you got the statements ony a month later. I’m with Vaeleigh I think Tina was somehow suspicious and has been searching in Bette’s computer and came across the emails. Can’t wait to find out how this is going to end. PPS thanks
I have to agree with Caeleigh, and Belena about this one. Plus I can’t wait for your next installment of this wonderful story.
Yikes E, both women are in deep trouble now…LOL….gotta love drama great chapter and so romantic at the sametime .
now that’s a question..but what is the answer…wuh-oh!! Something tells me that only one of these relationships will make it…which one E? I absolutely love this fic…short but definitely a sweet update!!
“Oh what a tangle wed we weave,when once we practice to decieve” I have to come to Tina’s defence on this one(i’m a HUGE fAN of Tina)like I said before when we first met Bette (chapter one)she never gave us (me) the impression that she was being neglected in her relationship with Tina,as a matter of fact in her own words”Tina and I had been together for about five years now and our relationship had never been stronger. I had been in two serious relationships before her, but I have never loved someone so passionately”.Again Bette:”Tina is nothing short of amazing I am so blessed to have her in my life”I can understand Bette meeting the person she believes she was meant to spend the rest of her life(Helena) but don’t go blaming Tina because you find yourself drawn to someone else and you want out of your relationship.That just plain selfish and decietful.Tasha maybe naive but Tina is very smart.Question:why would bette leave her laptop behind,since she is going on such important mission for her company?.In Tina’s defence I don’t think she is the person who will deliberately invade your private space.when Helena ask what was the problem with Bette and Tina relationship this was Bette answer” She’s coordinating this big production at the moment and I hardly see her at all. I guess you could say that I’ve been feeling pretty neglected. Is it selfish of me to think that way?”yes it is,why? because you have a very demanding Job as well and I’m sure that Tina comes home to an empty house sometimes.
Ok tina knows something…She knows about Helena how could she not~??Well i dont like all this lying but i hope now they see whats there in front of them and if they’re willing to leave that behind.Best chapter so far how could Helena forget her own anniversary really i know Bette is on her mind but she says she loves Tasha so how would she forget? I dont like this forgetful side of Helena.As for Bette she’s definetly in trouble now it seems does she know somehings up maybe Bette’s work rang and asked for her.Just an idea, anyways cant wait for more of the trail for me to follow.