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Music to my Ears (chap 6)
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“Oh it was nothing” Tina blushed, “I’m glad you guys could make it. I swear you made Meghan’s week.”
“Yeah, and I’m pretty sure you made Shane’s year” Bette joked.
“Um…about earlier” Tina began looking down at the dish she was drying.
“There’s nothing to say Tina” Bette said turning to look at Tina.
“No seriously, I wanted to apologize…it’s just that…”
“Tina” Bette said reaching out to lightly touch Tina’s hand with her wet one.
Tina turned to look shyly up at Bette.
“It’s ok Tina, we all have reasons for things we do” Bette said softly.
“Yeah but…”
“Tina it’s ok”
“No, but…I…”
“Oh you are one stubborn girl” Bette laughed as she gingerly reached back into the sink and gently gathered a handful of bubbles.
“What are you doing Bette?” Tina asked suspiciously as she watch Bette raise a whole hand of suds.
“Oh nothing” Bette smiled.
“Don’t you dare” Tina warned with a slight giggle in her voice.
“I wouldn’t even imagine trying” Bette smiled as she slowly turned to look at Tina.
“Bette…” Tina said holding her hands up a little.
“It’s ok, I won’t do anything” Bette smiled again.
“I don’t trust you Porter” Tina smiled back.
“Oh now I’m hurt” Bette said mockingly. Just then she started to tilt her head back, indicating a sneeze coming on.
“Oh Bette…” Tina laughed taking a step back.
Bette continued her little dramatization as she took a step closer to Tina and…. “ACHOOO”. Bette pretended to let out a big sneeze blowing the handful of bubbles up into the air causing them to cover both herself and Tina.
“UGH, I can’t believe you just did that” Tina laughed brushing some of the bubbles off of her face as both women broke out into laughter.
“Well…” was all Bette could reply as she slowly lifted her hand to brush some of the bubbles from Tina’s hair.
Tina could only stand there, looking up at the brunette who was slowly ran her fingers down Tina’s hair, very softly touching her cheek. Neither woman could deny the electricity that ran through them at the slightest touch.
But before Tina could say or do anything, the telephone began ringing. “Oh excuse me for a minute” Tina said blushing slightly as she walked over to the phone.
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Dana was probably too busy staring at Bette’s feet earlier and walked into something which knocked out a filling. I must say that London really works as the setting here since this reminds me of a British comedy.
Ha Ha Ha Dana is wierd enough without having a foot fetish. Poor Alice she always thinks the world revolves around her. Hopefully Bette and Tina will get to see each other without the gang soon. PPS.
ROFLMAOOOO!!!!! This was hysterical. You really capture the humor K. Thanks for the PM. Ness said she not only would pay for the dinner, but also a few canoli’s at one of the best in Boston’s North End! Whatever you do….post soon.
So cute…loving the foot fetish! Oh, to be ‘stalker worthy’… Alice is too funny. How can you state that your story is nothing impressive?? It’s always a wonderful read. And by the way, you should have earned that supper chapters ago. Thanks for the fun post!
This is so funny and love it, and now the whole gang are here and let the fun began. Please post soon, thanks!
Thanks for the PM! It’s a pleasure to read a well written story, and I think you’ve succeeded in giving us a surprising twist at the conclusion of this post. I’m looking forward to hearing more of Dana’s explanation. Thanks for writing!
wtf Dana u’u like her feet’????? too rare…and so Danaerish…. really enjoyed their dinner…big smile…pps
You’re a nut, ya know that K!! LOL! I’m assuming the feet business is another part of the bet. You shoul at least tell us who put you up to this madness so that we can thank them!! I hope you’ll start another story if this one is ending, love your writing!
Oh man that was funny. Liked her feet, I really did not see that one coming. Does Tina and Megan get to go to the concert on Friday? I would really like to take you to dinner but I can’t swim that far yet. Maybe in another 200 years I will have mastered that distance.
i had a feeling it was dana… god i miss her… so what about her feet… can’t wait till the next chapter
i really miss this story, do you plan on finishing it. this was one of my favorites pps.
Now that is too strange. I’m glad to see Dana, but she is funny weird. Alice is a hoot. Of course, she’s stalker worthy.
LMFAO….I like her feet…too funny. Wonderful story btw. PPS.
RFLMFAO……I LIKE HER FEET…..THATS ORIGINAL TO SAY THE LEAST……IM STILL LMAO……
Whose feet does she like? This is too funny
LMAO…How can you not comment after a statement like that? That was freaking funny as hell. Is Dana some kind of foot doctor or just a freak?Love the banter between all the girls. Alice is freaking funny.
( wiping away the tears of laughing )… Sorry for being so late to comment but LMAO indeed !! I looooved the ending of the chapter. And what about this line : ” I just don’t understand why I’m not stalker worthy ” ?? This was just hysterical, K. HYSTERICAL I’m telling you ! In fact, can I quote Miss Peabody here ? ” You brought tears to my eyes ” Kanaf… I swear you did. Man, this is one hell of a ride !! I have a feeling Dana is going one funny lady too !! LOL ! So let’s see… What else did I love about this chapter ?… : well, the witty banter between all the girls is always VERY enjoyable when written by you, but I guess this goes without saying…Oh, and by the way, I’m sorry that you got called a nutcase because of me ( and it’s OK if you want to turn me in ! LOL !!! ), but you gotta look at the bright side of this : you got countless dinner invitations ( not to mention an offer for delightful cannoli ) AND your story and writing style got compared to British comedy !!! I mean, what else could you possibly want ? … This was great stuff, K. Thank you so much !
Yeah…. who the hell put you up to this madness??? … Turn them in!!! Hysterical chapter K! Love this, but please don’t end this anytime soon… They DO have computers and Wifi ‘there’ too you know!… Thanks mate, and talk soon!
You have a wonderful imagination and sense of humour K. I would say by the comments that have been made that it was claricestarling that put you up to this. I am so glad she did because this is just great. I think you can just about be guaranteed to get a dinner from any of your readers. More Please!