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My Captor- Chapter 18
Shane: Hello!
Jenny: No one can hear you.
Shane: Let me go, now.
Jenny: I don’t think I can do that. You know what you did right?
Jenny moved closer to Shane. She could hear Jenny dragging something on the floor. Cold hard metal on the concrete floor.
Shane: What do you want? Where’s Carmen?
Jenny: I’m just keeping you here while Cezar is away. You know what I want.
Shane: Let me go!
Jenny took a whack at Shane and Shane fell over on the floor. Her head throbbed. Her vision blurred. There was only a blurry white light that dangled and Jenny’s black eyes starring into her emerald green ones.
Tina: Bette, I can’t find her. Her cellphone isn’t on.
Bette: Shit Shit Shit.
Tina: What do we do?
Bette: We can’t do anything.
Tina: I’m sending Bobby and the guys.
Bette: That won’t help.
Tina: I don’t want to find Shane in a body bag!
Bette: That’s what she will be in if you send them in! What did you find in his files?
Tina: He’s got nothing but random files about his wife’s death. And he’s been looking at Shane’s bio too.
Bette: Dammit, I shouldn’t have sent her in.
Tina went over and hugged Bette’s shoulders.
Tina: Shane will get out. I know she will.
Shane woke up a day later. The blood had dried up and Shane had been righted again. She licked her lips. Her eyes refocused and she saw Jenny standing in front of her again.
Jenny: Took you long enough.
Shane spit on the ground in front of her.
Shane: What do you want?
Jenny: I want to make you suffer for what you did.
Shane: What does Cezar want?
Jenny: I don’t know. He probably wants to break your neck too.
Shane: Where’s Carmen? I want to talk to her.
Jenny: Stop saying her name!
Shane saw the golf club swing down and hit her in the stomach. She bit down hard to not scream. She didn’t want Jenny to smile from watching her suffer.
Jenny: You’ll never get to see her. And she’ll never want to see you again. So shut it.
Jenny wasn’t happy about Shane’s reaction. She needed to feel her scream. A grunt, something.
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(22 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Wow drama drama drama …the tension between shane and carmen is sooooooooo powerful..but i like it..Lol..Shane just needs to put Jenny’s head in the toilet bowl and flush 10 times..LOL..keep up the good work and im waiting for more~~ Thank you so much
WTF is going on? Would someone please just kill Jenny now??!! Sharmen needs to get their shit together!
can carm toss jenny off the balcony now
shane needs to slap Jen silly that bitch is nothin but trouble! I’ve been following ur fic since the begining and I’m sorry i haven’t commented but i really luv this story and i hope there’s a happy endin in the works for our sharmen…great job my friend!!!!
Romeo and Juliet indeed, but that’s more Shane and Carmen than Carmen and Jenny. By the way, Jenny is a total psycho. She beats Shane with a golf club, then, mere days later, she talks to Shane like it never even happened. WTF? She’s crazy. I wonder how Shane will react to seeing Jenny hugging up on Carmen. Jealous Shane? We already have a jealous Carmen thanks to Cherie Jaffe.
OH please update soon, I love this story.
Great chapter. Jenny is a real cold bloody evil. I would hit Jenny with a golf club. Is Shane jealous or going to give up Carmen? Hope Shane got out of this crazy mention with Carmen soon.