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    My Dana My ALice My Love Ch 5

    Story written on April 21, 2005 by WriteNSurf916.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53371
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    Dana and Alice are in for a soothing surprise, and Yoda comes into play

    Tonya: Surprise!

    Dana: baby, whats this, I thought we were going to go shopping for the wedding?

    Tonya: no, I said I needed to shop, I had a surprise planned for you since you been working so darn hard, and then you said Alice was stressed about something so I though this would be a nice way to get on Alices good side, I mean she is youre best friend.

    Alice and Dana looked at each other and smiled nervously.

    Alice: oh Tonya, you didnt have to, tell ya what, why dont you take my place and just give me a shopping list, Ill get everything you need!

    Tonya: no can do! I have you guys settled for two days and a night.

    Alice and Dana: WHAT!?!
    Tonya grabbed Dana and kissed her cheek.

    Tonya: sorry baby, cant stay, I still have an hours drive! I love you so much! Bye Alice, enjoy! Oh what the *****, I love you too Alice!

    Dana and Alice just stood there with there jaws on the floor, speechless as Tonya drove away.

    The concierge: right this way, ladies.

    Alice grabbed Dana: what are we going to do? We cant spend a night together?!?!

    Dana: Al, I am sure we got separate rooms, we are here as friends, ok, we can do this.

    Dana and Alice have relaxed a bit and walked to the room service representative.

    Manager: hello, Ms. Fairbanks and Ms. Piescecki.

    Dana and Alice: hello.

    Manager: ok well, from what I see here, you two have room 333, one of the best rooms here.

    Alice: sorry, just one room.

    Manager: yes, thats what ms. Tonya has set up.

    Dana: Ill handle this Al. (to the manager) hi, yes, ok, so is there anyway I can rent another room for the night.

    Manager: I am sorry Maam but we only take reservations made 2 days prior to the visit, and also right now we are fully accommodated. Is there anything wrong?

    Dana: no, no, everything is fine. Thank you.

    They both start to walk away and follow the bell boy into the elevator. They both stand there side by side with nervous looks on their faces.

    Then the elevator closes.

    ———–

    Dana and Alice are in their hotel room, they tip the bell boy and lock the door.

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    1. “Dana tries to hide the phone but covers the wrong end.”

      Hee hee. So, in other words, Shane and Tina can hear them. Ahh, poor Dana and Alice.

      Too cute!

    3. “Nothing could have been better, except for the fact that Dana was engaged and Alice well, now she was in the middle, in the middle of the bed and Dana that is” haha, love black humor, post soon :)

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