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My Skin is Painfully New – Chapter 6
Tina giggled shyly and added, but what about Bette? Im not really sure how shed feel about it.
You know what Tina? asked Alice rhetorically, I dont think Bette gets to vote on this one. She kind of fucked that up a few months ago, as I recall. You cant hide from each other forever you know.
I know, I just dont want her to be uncomfortable seeing Helena, continued Tina.
I dont remember Bette having this much concern about you seeing her with Candace, countered Alice, quickly realizing that shed gone too far. Look you know I love Bette, but she needs a reality check and a dope slap, and I think tonight is a great opportunity to do that.
You know what Alice, I dont think Im going to go. I dont want to turn tonight into anything but a great event for Kit. I dont feel the need to give Bette anything, including a reality check, said Tina.
Okay, I get it, said Alice. I still wish youd come. I do miss you Tina.
I miss you too, Al.
***
Bette looked at herself in the mirror and absentmindedly applied a second coat of mascara to her already extraordinarily long eye lashes. As she watched herself go through the motions, she noticed her lower lip begin to tremble. Before she even had a chance to acknowledge it, a fresh wave of pain hit her in the pit of her abdomen, causing her to double over and grab the edge of the pedestal sink for support. I miss her so much that I feel the pain as a physical ache, not just an emotional one, Bette had explained to Marie on the phone earlier that evening. I dont know that I can live without her. I dont know if I want to live without her.
Bette had surprised herself by opening up to Marie again after all of the years that had gone by. She hadnt seen Marie since she finished graduate school and moved to California, although she spoke with her many times during the first few years, gradually increasing the length of time between tune-ups. Marie had held Bettes sobbing body during the eighteen months it took for her mother to die from the breast cancer that had metastasized to her brain before it was diagnosed. She had watched Bette triumphantly graduate from high school, move on to college and graduate school and then set out on her own to make her mark in the world.
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(36 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
I am SO loving this story. It is the one I look for 10 times a day. Thanks so much. It is very well written. Good for you for writing after so many years.
Ok… let’s see what happens… great update
I normally don’t make suggestions about where the story should go as I think that is the discretion of the writer. However, this once, I am going to make an exception to my rule. Please, let Bette go into the washroom and bitch slap Helena for all she’s worth (All Bette is worth, that is, not Helena as she is pretty worthless to me).
awesome chapter. i like the story line and your writing style. more please.
Really great – ready for more.
*doing a happy dance* new chapter! new chapter! this story is so great, it just feels right, so spot on with Bette’s characteristics, you’re doing a great job capturing the complexity of this situation between Tina and Bette. I’m loving it!
as always- very nice. thanks for the update and will be looking for more!
I’ve just caught up with all your chapters and had such fun reading them. Nicely done. I’m hooked now and longing for the next chapter!
GET HER BETTE
oh uh… Duck Helena, but ALice is right Bette does need a reality check. Great chapter
Wow , I think that this is the best fan fiction ever !! I’m really enjoying this story. I can’t wait for the next installment … YOU ROCK !!!
i love this story…and i’m impatiently waiting for the next chapter…please post soon!
Very damm good again – Thank you. I love the way you give Tina her individuality – its not captured by many so beautifully. Writting and bicycle ridding are one and the same obviouslly ! lol x
I realy love this story. Bette is sure falling into a deep black hole. Great update by the way. Post soon and don´t leave us hanging here. We are dying for more. Please
I like this please post soon
Great……..more really,really soon
thats really great story..please..post as soon as you can
So glad that I finally caught up on this story! Just read it all in one sitting and now I want to settle in and read some more! Thanks so much-this is wonderful.
I just read your chapters, I really like this story. Very well done.
so basically i am reliving season 2 all over again… that damn Helena. Bette snap out of it, i know it hurts but you need to move on…suicidal thoughts are not the answer. Get rid of Helena already.