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    Story written on June 19, 2009 by ashtuck.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=73670
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    Finale

    Two Months Later

     

    Bette:

     

    Every day, I run my fingers over the note that Helena so discreetly put under my pillow in the hospital.

     

    “The same way I love you, you’ll always love me too.  This love isn’t good unless it’s me and you.”

     

    I’m still not quite healed, but I can move around on my own.

     

    Though Tina told me she would stay by my side to help me heal, a month after I was back at home, she decided she couldn’t stay.  It was too painful for her to see me and think about what I did.

     

    I was mainly alone.

     

    Kit stopped by every other day to help me around.  Shane and Alice were there at least once a week, but they only came around to tell me what an idiot I was for letting Helena get me into her bullshit and for letting Tina leave.

     

    Today was one of those days.

     

    “Why?”             Alice asks.  Alice was unwrapping a set of bandages the doctors said would keep me bending and moving so much.  After Alice would unwrap them, Shane was right behind her to wrap me again.

     

    “Why what?”  I hold my side, clutching my rib cage as if it would somehow lessen the pain.

     

    “Why would you let Helena do that to you?  She’s a leech and a scumbag and an opportunist…”

     

    “Fuck you, Alice.” I say, “You don’t know our relationship, you don’t know what we’ve been through.”

     

    She pokes my side.  That wouldn’t have hurt two months ago, but today, it’s the most painful experience in my life.

     

    “I’m just saying that you give up this, I don’t know, amazing person who loves and respects you, for someone who would leave you to be beaten to a fucking pulp and possibly killed.  I don’t know, maybe it’s just me who sees that as a ginormous fucking problem.”

     

    Alice tosses my old bandages and hands Shane a brand new roll of bandages.

     

    I can see the shock on Shane’s face when she sees how bruised I am.  Thank God I’m less bruised on my face than I am on my abdomen.

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    1. Oh jeez, ash…I didn’t know you were going to end it now. ***Wiping away tear*** :,( Seriously…I loved this story! I know the angst in this story…I know it! Thank you for writing! This story…this story! **Tears falling down both cheeks**

    3. Ash, I too didnt know that this was the finale to this wonderful chapter. I know that you had to really get into this one because Helena had a major drug problem and she was lucky to have had Bette’s love so that she could make it for herself and her love. Not many survive a drug hell and take the easy way out and not fight. Bette didnt care what her friends had to say about Helena, cause she LOVED her and needed her and knew that she had to have her in her life and would also and did fight for her Helena. What a perfect story and can’t wait for the other stories to come!!

    4. My Beautiful Ash… while I am saddened to see this amazingly rich and emotionally charged story come to an end… it feels right… life goes on… those moments are still there… the memories are as vibrant as “neon” you are an amazing storyteller… you are an amazing woman… you are an amazing friend… Love and Hugs, JC (PS – come on any chance you will pick up the torch and continue “I Take All The Blame” cause I LOVE THAT ONE SOOOOO MUCH… tee hee so demanding)

    7. Hey Ash a little disappointed to see a great tory end but it’s better to end something in beauty than dragging it along forever. I’m glad to see Bette & elena still found their way to each other and I’m sure they will have a happy life.PS I admire Bette for being able to make love with broken ribs cause I had 5 broken ribs once and I was even scared to breathe LOL

    8. Well how’s that for a happy ending (BRAVO)!!! I’mm sad to see the story end but I defer to the writer of this wonderful story to decide where it should end. Can’t wait to read whatever you write next, great job.

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