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Once Upon a Time – Chapter 30
Zoe sat up in bed and turned to face Madison. Madison could see fear and sadness in her eyes and that just broke her own heart.
Zoe, just tell me. This waiting is killing me.
Okay. You remember Linda, the woman you dated before me?
Yes?
Well Ive been a friend of hers since law school. We are pretty close and when you broke up with her you really broke her heart. I suggested we set you up, give you a taste of your own medicine.
Anger flared within Madison as she put the pieces together but as quickly as it flared it was replaced by utter sadness and defeat. Madison had finally fallen in love but it was all just a cruel joke. She didnt even try to contain the tears welling up in her eyes.
Zoe reached out to wipe the tears away but Madison pulled away and in a low quiet voice said Dont Zoe.
So this was all part of a grand scheme eh? How perfect that you waited for us to make love and for me to confess my innermost feelings to you. Well done, bravo! Madison reached down and retrieved her shirt from the floor and quickly put it on. Suddenly she was feeling too exposed in front of the woman that minutes ago was the love of her life.
Zoe watched in horror. Madison had forgotten her promise and was taking this in the worse way possible. Damn it! She needed to get through to her somehow.
Madison had gotten out of bed by then and was staring out the window, looking at the night sky wondering if maybe she deserved this. This was payback for all the women that she had bedded and left. Payback for all the short term relationships that she had ended as soon as the other woman got the least bit serious.
Zoe walked up behind Madison and wrapped her arms around her waist. Madison fought to disengage herself but Zoe held tight.
What, do you want from me Zoe? Please just let me be.
No, Im not leaving until Ive said my piece. What did you promise me at the start of this conversation?
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(45 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
I love this story…
i wish we could see this love on the show…please post soon!!
I love this story. It’s sweet.
What a great surprise for today Chase. This chapter is just so completely perfect. Can’t wait for what you’re working on next. :)
And yet again you manage to astound me. Fantastic new chapter. The drama of Maddie and Zoe counterbalance by Bette’s remorse and Tina’s ever faithful luving.
Can’t wait your your next post. Just make it soon, real soon.
This is just a superbly written story chasemenow…..Every chapter leaves me wanting more….I am ‘rooting’ for Maddie and Zoe just as much as if they were B & T…..That is how much effect your writing has…..Thankyou…Can’t wait for the next one:)
Awww….sweet nectar of the gods. That was heavenly.
*thumbs up* (wink).
That was wonderful…painful, but full of love. Thank God we didn’t have to wait two more months!!
Love this story. Please don’t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Love your story and all the passion you bring to it. Hearfelt chapter – Thanks for sharing your time and talent.
Your stories are so good, they whet the appetite. Write more soon.
I”m glad to of read that Zoe held on and that Madison had her heart.
For B&T excellent as always.
I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter.
been missing your updates- this story is so wonderful.
I am truly addicted to fanfic!!! Between you, Shades, Chicki, Amanda, Seahurst…I can’t ever turn my computer off!!!! Keep this story coming. You’re doing a wonderful job!!!
Oh, I so wish that Zoe hadn’t left just yet. Ooh, maybe she’s just parked outside the door, and will wait for Madison to emerge, showing her where she stands. As for the moms, so lovely to see the balance in the relationship. And the intimacy. The romantic in me feels right at home in your story! Your writing is so readable and so enjoyable. It’s a happy time when I see that you’ve posted a chapter. Thank you!
Just as wonderful as always. Thank you for taking the time to write.
Chase this was wonderful both the old and new.
Bette saying when am I going to learn to follow your lead and live from my heart and not my head does speak volumes to both Madison and Bette thanks for the post
I love love love this story Chase! Thank you!
this is such a cool story.
I just love Bette and Tina, after all these years one can still feel their love for one another. I hope Madison and Zoe can get there as well. Great story Chase.
That was great!