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one consenting adult :part 4 ( sequel to parenting)
“Hello,” she said.
“Please remove your hand,” I said stepping out of her grasp.
This couldn’t happen again. I had to gain control of the situation and her.
“Evan, whatever you trying to do… stop.”
“I haven’t done anything,” she said holding her hands up.
“But you want to.”
“And you don’t?”
She couldn’t know that she was having an effect on me. Even when I was sober.
“It doesn’t matter if I do or don’t. You’re only seventeen and I’m… I’m older than you. Anything between us would be criminal.”
“My birthday is next week. I’ll be eighteen…”she said grabbing my wrist.
“Evan,” I took a step back, “it can’t happen.”
I walked away.
“Furniture… I’m here to get furniture,”I said to myself.
*****
I sat at my new kitchen table. An old school kitchen table. Four metal legs and a green and white swirl Formica top. Two matching chairs instead of the standard four. I really wasn’t one to have people over for dinner. I scanned the paper for any interesting events happening this weekend. The phone rang.
I groped the table for the phone not taking my eyes off the paper.
“Hello.”
“Hey Serena, how’s the west coast treating you?”
“Why do you care?” I snipped back.
“Come on… don’t act like that.”
“How am I suppose to act? Should I give a damn about someone who let me leave without so much as a I’ll miss you. Don’t go.” I said closing the paper and staring off into space.
“That’s not fair,” the person said.
The person… was my ex-girlfriend. Reyna Sharpton.
“Like it was fair when you cheated on me?” I scoffed.
“You know what? I called to see how your first weeks in California been treating you. Not to rehash what went wrong with us.”
“Then you shouldn’t have called,” I said slamming the phone done.
*****
My backyard looked like *****. Overgrown weeds, overgrown grass and sprinkles of dry patches throughout. I was down on my hands and knees covered in sweat and dirt as I struggled with pulling out the roots. The sun was beating down on me, wearing me out.
“C’mon, you *****,” I spoke out loud.
I got lower with my elbows touching the ground and gave the last root one last tug.
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(40 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
This is kinda sad.
great story!!!i can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!!
unless this story really jumps to several years in the future, mskinh Evan legal aged, I don’t see anything but heartache and pain for both parties involved. It’s a shame, because it is a cute story!
Great chapter…How old is Serena?thanks for a great story..post soon
love this story runawaytee. love the flirting. post soon
They will probably end up getting together but i hope they don’t, but that’s probably just because my ex girlfriend is with someone 6 years older than her and i still love my ex.
hahah, oh man, i can just imagine them getting caught by bette in a compromising position, i can’t wait, what a good story!
evan is very mature at fifth-teen ,shes into older women like bette is into younger women. i see evan getting her heart broken and when that happens serena bet watch her ass .bette will be looking for her in the daylight with a flashlight.
Great Read – I can see a fantastic birthday present uhh coming up for Evan lol – I wouldn’t want to mess with Bette though – post more soon please
I sense that pretty soon there will be some “splaining to do” & maybe Bette might commit murder LOL.
Great update!! I hope you update soon!!!
Man, I cant wait to see how things turn out with this. Bette would kill her. LOL. I cant wait.
i´m with Neq;;i cant wait..Evan is sooo cute and Serena dont be afraid..Bette is only going to kick your ass..lol..great chapter post soon
Don’t watch Law & Order but guess Serena being a lawyer means she is a tiny bit older then 15. Bette and Tina will both kill her%( Can’t wait LOL
“I needed to talk to someone.”
How about Olivia Benson from SVU? Sex offenses are her specialty.
‘Lolita’ was fiction, baby. Evan is jailbait…