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Out of Hatred to Love – 12
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Bette (laughs): oooo im scared now ..good night Al .
As soon as Alice left Bette returned to her bedroom to finally get dressed again but she barely entered her room as she heard the doorbell ring for a second time.
Bette (thinking) : damn Al what’s next can’t you give a girl some peace for a second.
Bette hurried to the frontdoor again knowing Alice would be ringing like a mad girl if she didn’t open any time soon.
Bette : what the hell do you want now ….. Helena?….
Helena : yes and hello to you too darling. Is this your way of welcoming your guests or what?
Bette : no , no of course not I’m sorry come in. I thought it was Alice again, she came storming in here a moment ago lecturing me why I wasn’t at the hospital last night.
Helena : oh was she the cute blonde I just saw speeding away when I arrived?
Bette : yes that must have been her. Has she seen you?
Helena : no I guess not, why? Do I have something to worry about ? Are you girls seeing each other ? Helena asked suddenly feeling very insecure.
Bette : no no it isn’t like that. Alice is my best friend, we have some history together though but that was years ago.
Helena : oh all right.
Bette : I think it’s kind of cute though
Helena : what ?
Bette (giggling) : you’re jealous
Helena : no I am not
Bette : oh yes you are admit it as she gave Helena a playfull push.
Helena : I am so not jealous Mss Porter. She pushed Bette as well
Bette: oh come on not even the slightest?
Bette asked with puppy dog eyes.
Helena: wellllll…..
Bette: I knew it! you were jealous! I know you are not as carefree like you put off
Helena: I was not! you tricked me! Like you wouldnt be jealous if you saw someone leaving my house
Bette: no i wouldnt
Helena: yeah i sooo believe you
Bette: Hey i wouldnt!
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Good job ladies.You are doing well in your writing,for the end was perfect.Are we looking at a cat figth in the making?Or will they just tell Tina what the deal is. Either way I’ll be waiting patiently for your next post.
I love this fic! Indeed! Tina is now getting some of her own medicine! Helena and Bette are two so wonderful alpha women and you’re so good in exploiting their continuos struggle for control in love and in life, it’s so funny! Keep it up :D
Uh Oh! Who ever invented the doorbell must die (LOL) I mean really first it’s Alice (that was cruel by the way b/c I totally thought it would be Hels)and now it’s Tina…..great. Now Tina is really going to go off the deep end now that she has seen Bette strolling down Helena’s stairs. Please post soon. Why is Tina dropping by Helena’s so early? She’s out of the hospital so I’m guessing the baby is okay so what could it be???
The dynamic duo is back. Great update
Hello ladies…I see you are continuing this Bette & Helena story…I guess one could say that this was kinda hot…you know with the sex and all…one could say that if they were a Belena fan…but I am a Tibetter so it was aiight…lol. What will Tina say is the question. Isn’t this the story where they all got it on in the hotel? She shouldn’t be surprised if that is the case.
Phhheeewww!! Just caught up girls and i. am. loving. it!! So bloody HOT!! B&H just smoulder together. Now what the hell does Tina want? Interrupting them like that, the nerve!! That’s a mean cliffhanger girls *shakes head* bad, very bad! Can’t wait for the next one! :D
F*ck, girls what are you doing to me, I’m sitting here with a dry mouth, out of breath and completely turned on. Why not put a warning above the chapter to warn your readers. What an incredible writingstyle, it was as if I was sucked right in the story. Wonder what will happen now, because you’ve put a huge cliffhanger there on the end. I applaud you ladies, again you did a great job here. Thanks at lot. Thanks for posting real soon.
Oh, f.ck, indeed ! This is a great cliffhanger, girls ! Drama, drama, drama ! I really wonder what Tina is up to this time, but one thing is for sure, she was not expecting this ! I like this. Please keep posting, ladies ! Should we prepare for a threesome ?… LOL! Nah, I don’t think so… It could be fun though… LMAO !
whoa, didn’t see that coming! I really went ‘aaargh!’ when Helena saw it was Tina at the door!:D good to see you back girls, hope you have more for us soon! Thanks!
Ahh yeah…wow…phew! Ok..good job really. As for Tina intruppting..damnit!! what the hell??!!OK OK…Get to it another chapter please…
Damn they are so hot and love it. Oh drama coming and let see what Tina gonna do now. OK post soon please, thanks!
BTW! I forgot to mention- that was Fu*king HOT!!!! :)
wow, how did I miss this update! I just love this fic girls, you always write it so well…Now why is Tina there? And more importantly, what’s going to happen now that she is! Mmm…my guess is that your next update is going to be fireworks! PPS. :)