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Part 23: The Rain (Alice & Dana)
Dana couldn’t take it anymore, she has to tell Alice. It was now or never. Dana
turned off the radio.
Dana: Al.
Alice: (smiling) Yeah…
The sky started to darken up.
Dana: Al, I kissed Lara.
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Dana sat there waiting for a reply, she glance at Alice but turned away quickly. She
didn’t know whether she was crying because she had her sunglasses on.
Alice stared into the horizon, shock by what Dana said.
Dana: At the..airport. We..kissed.
A wave of dizziness washed over Alice, her head suddenly feeling like she got hit by
a baseball bat, her chest filled with pain, anger and hatred. But not with Dana, she
could never get angry at her. She was angry at herself, she should’ve not insisted for
Dana to take Lara and Maria. It was all her fault. She brang it to herself. A drop of
rain landed on the windscreen. Dana, her eyes now filled with tears.
Dana: (whispering) Alice…please..say something. I’m sorry.
Dana’s voice trembling as her tears ran down her cheeks. Alice didn’t hear what Dana
said, all she could hear was the blaming voice in her head. She put Dana in a
difficult position, how could she do this to her? She’s hurting Dana and herself.
Dana could hear that Alice’s breath was becoming shaky. The silence was torturing
Dana she couldn’t stand silence specially when she’s with Alice. The rain began
pouring down, there was a flash of lightening.
It has been 10 minutes and Alice just sat there motionless, staring outside.
Dana: Alice…I’m sorry…I’m very sorr-
Alice unbuckled her seatbelt, opened the door and went outside.
Dana: Alice!
Dana hopped out and ran after Alice who was walking a little faster.
Dana: I’m sorry Alice! I’m very sorry!
Alice turned around.
Alice: So I can’t leave you two alone for just..an hour?!
Dana: (crying) I’m sorry.
Alice: Your just had to kiss her, didn’t you!!
Dana remembered Shane telling her that Alice wanted her to go.
Dana: You told me to go!!!
Alice: So it’s my fault now!?!?! It’s just that one thing and you couldn’t do it
without kissing her.
Dana: No, Alice.
Alice: Did you enjoy it?! Did you like it?! Well if you did, you better get a ticket to
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(34 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
I love it and can’t wait to see what happens next with them please post soon
oh the drama… the good new is that you post everyday, waiting for the next, thanks.
Don’t leave hanging for too long! Really good!
hey this is good. I really like it!!! hope you´ll go on soon!!