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Pretty Women, episode 1 (don’t forget to read the pilot)
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Yeah, its cute Tina, I barely recognized you!
Tina’s face changes from shocked to relieved and she leanned agaist the pillar Shane had just been standing against, sighing deeply. She had always thought the walk of fame was something special, and as a kid she had asked her parents over and over to go and see it. But now only the sight of the stars in the pavement made her sick.
Hows the rugrat doing?
Shane asked, offering Tina a sigaret which she refused. She winced and shrugged at the thought of Jamey, although her son was the reason she was doing this job, thinking about him while doing so was something she rather avoided. Shane saw Tina’s inner struggle and placed a hand on her friends arm
I’m sorry.
Thats ok Shane, don’t worry about it…
The shrieking sound of gearmechanism being abused, caught Shane’s and Tina’s attention, and they both looked in awe at the sportscar that approached them… Hollywood boulevard was not really a place were rich men came looking for a date, but this car surely looked expensive
A Lotus Esprit…
Tina mumbled and she felt her eyes widen with surprise as the car stopped, a couple of feet away from her…
This is your chance Tina, you’re looking good tonight! Don’t go for less that a hundredbucks an hour!
Shane reassured her friend who was now taking of her jacket and hugged Shane before she made her way to the darkwindowed car, her hips swinging seductively
She glanced back at Shane one last time before reaching the car and selfconciously bent over to the open window
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This drive was the worse Bette had ever experienced in her life… Her head was throbbing with pain and she couldn’t get herself to efficiently use that stickshift thing…
At least I can throw that on the fact that I am a lesbian…
She mumbled to herself. She had asked for directions twice and both times they had sent her in the wrong one. Her headache was now accompinied by pain in muscles she didn’t even know existed and she sighed deeply as the car decided to play her a trick once again
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Cool poster you have there… LOL… it’s sooo cute. Longer story… can’t have enough of it ;) Yea, so u know a 7 kid wouldn’t really understand that movie right? hehe ;)
Ooh, Bette better watch out. ;) I love this story already. I can’t wait to see what comes next…seeing as I have no clue what’s supposed to happen…ya big line thief. Haha. Kidding, kidding. Excellent update though. Please, continue soon.
it’s just like watching the movie only it’s better because Tina and Bette in it…julia roberts who?
one more thing: congratulations on the fantasy challenge win, your story was awesome ;)
I love it every much. LOL… I can see you have put a lot of efforts in this story, I like the poster idea! LMAO when I saw it. Give me a shout if you need more help in that department. POST SOON, can’t wait for more! And don’t forget the other stories of yours.
More please
Hi…read the pilot…Can´t believe I missed the first post…hm…I lovvr it…it´s great, can´t wait to see were your are taking us…and the cover..really nice touch… :)
Love it..and where your are taking us… yez my spelling sucks…
too short…i love it! post soon pls
Ok, alright…I like it!! Now, will you stop teasing us with these short chapters??? LOL
JLBT you such a tease and this chater is to short but like it. They are cute and funny, cant wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
well well well, Bette, I can do it for u free…hahaha….anyway…please continue and SOON…thank u…
Hé, this is really something different, and i like it mmmmmmmm.
Fucking hilarious….loved the picture :o))
Frist to comment I hope…Loved it B+T keep up the good work =)
Her head was throbbing with pain and she couldn’t get herself to efficiently use that stickshift thing… ‘At least I can throw that on the fact that I am a lesbian…’ LMAO!!!!! Man this is already smokin’ hot! Still loving Tina with red hair. *dies*
so glad you posted this i loved the idea from the pilot. more please ASAP.
I’m loving this story. keep it cumming
its darn hard to multitask between ffs thread bettilicous and readin your chapp i am gonna read this firstthen go and post there and then move my ass to workhehehe
now tht was a good readtina as a red headwow
hehehe im loving this take on b&t Fantastic – looking forward to the next installment – loved the pic made me giggle
I love it…but to short…
Dear B+T… you’re teasing right??? it’s too short… LOL! maybe the next time a couple of lines more… maybe during the weekend??? ;)
OMG where can I find a Tina. I am sure that Tina was really thrown after Bette took her hair down. Man, my imagination is running wild just picturing Bette and then Tina. You made my day. I can not wait for the next scene.
I loved Pretty Woman and this is going to be a lot of fun with Tina dn Bette as the principal characters. Keep the chapters coming our way.
I’m so loving this story! But please, longer posts! :) Post as soon as you can!
Read the title but didn’t pay attention to the author, what’s wrong with me??? for $20 I can show you, man, I almost faint! what a tease!
I love it! But it’s too short! You must post it at least on a daily base. Please~~~ *wink*
Love it, love it, love it. My only complaint is too short. This version is better than the original.
This is so cute!!!! Waiting for the next chapter.
Oh prety woman another wonderful story, look forward to more from you
mmmm M&M’s are ok i can buy something for you i like it too!. the beginnig of the chapter is so good and the picture excellente you get an A for it! don’t you thing $20 is a low price? Tina is priceless! the next please!