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Prodigal – Chapter 4
Bette was lying on the living room floor with Angelica while Tina was in the kitchen making dinner. Tina was surprisingly comfortable with the idea of her brother and sister coming to dinner. Caroline had put her at ease that morning. She had always hoped that one day her family would come around. It seemed now, that had happened. She was more than willing to give them another chance. They were family.
There was a knock at the door. Ill get it, Bette said, standing up, making sure that Angie would be ok for a second. Bette opened the door and there was Caroline with a tall and nervous looking man. Hi, Carrie, Bette said brightly.
Bette, she said leaning in and kissing Bettes cheek, good to see you again.
Welcome, were glad youre here, she answered, leading them inside.
This is my brother, Danny, Carrie said gesturing to the sandy haired mute.
Hi, Danny, Bette said, offering her hand.
Hi, its nice to meet you, he answered, shaking her hand. He looked down at his sister. You werent kidding, huh? he muttered. Carrie knew he was referring to the way Bette looked.
Carrie smiled. Youre such a guy.
Bette let the exchange go without comment. She bent over and picked Angelica up. Dannys eyes followed the baby. Bette saw it. She saw the regret in his eyes.
Tina came out of the kitchen and all movement in the room stopped. All eyes were on Tina. Danny took a step forward, closer to Tina. Caroline held her breath. Tina, Danny said and his voice broke. Caroline had never seen her brother cry, until right then.
Hi, Danny, she said simply.
Hi, he answered. He held it together for a full thirty seconds, but then he tried to apologize. Im so sorry, Danny said, breaking down. Carolines eyes widened as she looked from her brother, to her sister, to Bette and back again.
Ok, Tina said, crossing the room and taking him into her arms. Ok, ok, she said over and over as he cried on her shoulder, clutching her to him. Bette and Caroline slipped out of the room with the baby. Bette escorted her out to the backyard, to the pool.
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(13 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
Excellent, nicely written, beautiful job. Anxiously waiting your next post. Hopefully it’ll be soon.
I like your story, but I feel it’s slightly unrealistic that Tina and her brother started joking almost immediately… I wouldve expected some awkwardness. Unleeeeeeees.. you’ve got some plot twist coming up where their secretly evil intentions are revealed? :o
mercury – next chapter will flesh it out more – all is not yet necessarily forgiven. thank you :)
That went easy. Will the angst and drama arrive soon? Maybe with their parents.
Yep, another nice chapter. All seems to be going well..a little too well! Are you gonna give us an angst free story?
Good update.The joking seemed too soon. I think Bette and Tina need to reconnect in evey way.
niceee… hope the next chapter is comin soon!
I usually avoid spoiler-fic, but I’m quite enjoying this. Well done.
(And I was wondering if the idea of who was the birth mother would ever come up.)
Good chapter. This is nice and happy but this way will be forever. Post soon, thanks!
love this story… and now they are back together… so let aunt carol babysit and give bette and tine some alone time…
This was a wonderful chapter. Well done.