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Reflection
Previously:
“I love you too, T. And I know how you feel, being with you is…well it’s…” she was struggling with her words as I had done just a moment ago. “It’s everything I have always wanted without even realizing it. I just hope I give you even half as much pleasure as you give me each day.”
A wicked grin crossed my face and I all I could think about making her gasp and moan like she just had for me.
“Give me second to get the feeling back in my arms and legs and I plan on giving you a little pleasure of your own.”
Tina’s P.O.V.
For all my bravado I was actually quite terrified. I always knew that Bette would be amazing in bed, of course I never could have imagined just how much. It was my own insecurities that had held me back for so long. But in that moment I wanted so much to please her, to make a physical connection and show her just how deep my feelings ran. I just hoped she would be patient with me.
“Roll over babe” I whispered quietly in her ear hoping my voice wasn’t too shaky. She made eye contact and held my gaze intensely. I wanted to look away so badly, the churning in my stomach was getting worse; but I refused to break her stare willing her to let me continue.
“You don’t have to do this baby, not if you aren’t ready T”.
“I am ready Bette, so very ready. But you have to help me, tell me what feels good”. She looked at me with so much affection my heart felt as if it would burst.
“Of course I will”.
“Good, now roll over, I plan on exploring every inch of your ***** body”. I hoped a little levity would calm my nerves and her ***** little giggle did the trick.
“I love a girl whose commanding in bed” she said as she rolled off my body and on to her stomach. The broad expanse of mocha skin covering her back took my breath away. She looked like a painting, the late afternoon light casting shadows across her skin accentuating every curve and dip that my mouth was watering to taste. Four harsh red lines ran the length of her shoulder blade and I squinted to see what they were. Upon close inspection I realized they were there because of me.
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(42 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
So beautiful!
beautiful ayns
so beautiful . just so simply beautiful . your story, their words, the emotion . makes me think of the love in my life and that is a good thing . thanx
Whats left to say!… except you promised us a few short chapters and blew us away with maybe one or two more than we expected,it was so beautifully written so pure and so honest,tho i love so many stories on this site not many take my breath away as this one has so a big thankyou (oh god im getting mushy now lol…)looking forward to more of your other story and if you feel the need to share Bettes POV well that would truly be the iceing on my cake..lol Who doesnt want to have their cake and eat it too…lol ok im rambling again thanks again for this ive loved every minute
i work with a gaggle of lesbians. and ive now got them hooked on ff. you so rock.
love the use of words. keeping em coming.
Whoa! Beautiful as Always great written I Love it Please keep going I’m just really happy to read of this it’s Awesome Please post soon Thanks!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. This is beautiful and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
“That sounds just about perfect to me” ….just like this story. I didn’t fall for it this time…& you know what I’m talking about. I didn’t even attempt to achieve any balance and centeredness before reading. See, after your previous chapters, I knew I would be knocked off my feet which, indeed I was. This time I was prepared though. Excellent chapter. Uh, are you still doing the school thing? Yes? Drop out girlie!! (smile)
Forget the sounds perfect, it felt perfect. Great job.
well it also sounds perfect to me… love this story… i hope to change your mind and continue with it…
Perfect and more than perfect! Thanks– you blew me away once again!
I think that maybe the best chapter I have read and I have read many amazing chapters. I love the chapters that when they talk about sex it is with love, and yours my girl you could touch the love please please continue
OMG!!! I have read this little ‘reflection’ of yours …absolutely beautiful. It brings out every emotion I can fathom. You are extremely talented with your words…
thankyou
this is a very amazing sensual story. it is so reel that you can sense the feelings they have. thanks and i hope you continue.
A M A Z I N G!!!!!
Amazing! Absolutely amazing!! More really,really soon
perrrrfect..!
absolutely beautiful.
THIS IS SOOOO SEXY.
I WOULD SO RATE THIS A TEN**********BUT IT WON’T LET ME CLICK ON THE FIVE TWICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just re-read all your chapters. Can’t get rid of the smile that’s plastered on my face, and wouldn’t want to. What a heck of a job you are doing entertaining us.