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Snippets of Bliss Chapter one of one
“Babe,” Tina whispered.
“Yeah,” Bette replied.
“You know how…” there was a pause in her wording. “When we last had time to ourselves…” Tina composed herself. “It was very romantic and loving and beautiful?”
“I remember,” Bette smiled.
“This time I’m going to fuck you until you’re so weak you can’t do anything but sleep,” Tina’s voice became strong as she delivered the words.
Bette’s eyes rolled back almost imperceptibly with Tina’s statement.
“Oh God,”
“That’s not the last time you’ll be saying that today,” Tina said confidently. She worked Bette’s underwear down to the floor and then licked her way back up her inner thigh before sneaking her tongue between Bette’s legs. “You taste so fucking good.”
Tina stood and finished undressing Bette before having the favour returned. The mid-day sun shone in their bedroom window, allowing each to have a clear view of the emotions playing across the face of the other.
Bette sat back onto the bed and pulled Tina between her legs to stand in front of her. Her face was level with Tina’s breasts as she began to kiss between them.
“No,” Tina said. “Lean back.”
Bette, uncharacteristically, did as she was told, and scooted up the bed to rest back on the pillows. Tina moved up between Bette’s legs, but only moved as high as her navel, resting quietly.
Her tongue moved over Bette’s stomach, flicking lightly against soft skin as she teased lower.
“Where do you want to feel my tongue?” Tina asked.
“Wherever you want,” Bette managed to reply.
“Oh really?”
Silence.
Bette wasn’t sure to make of the mischievous tone in Tina’s voice.
Tina laughed at Bette’s reticence to respond to her request for clarification. She soon found herself on her back, underneath Bette’s deft hand.
“Fuck,” Tina whispered into Bette’s mouth.
“Is that a request?” Bette’s fingers aroused more moisture from Tina’s intimate self.
Tina silently moved her hips in concert with Bette’s hand as she felt herself progress towards climax.
Bette withdrew her hand and brought Tina’s taste to her mouth. Tina took her wrist with some urgency and encouraged it down again.
“No,” Bette replied. “I want to taste you as you come.”
Bette moved down to rest between Tina’s legs, licking back and forth before seeking out an intimate taste. She felt Tina’s fingers tangle in her hair as she sucked the tender skin between her lips, flicking her tongue repeatedly. It was only moments before she heard Tina’s breathing catch above her and an intense shudder work its way through Tina’s body.
Tina pulled Bette up and almost immediately reached between her legs, her intent clear through her actions. Hands wandered in both directions, neither one the least bit concerned with how much noise they made.
“Lean back,” Tina stopped kissing Bette to make the request. “I can’t wait to taste you.”
Tina’s hand again reached to encourage more desire from her lover. Her fingers moved effortlessly over the aroused flesh before she moved down to taste for herself.
She kissed Bette one last time before beginning her descent.
Tina didn’t hesitate at all, having been fighting the temptation long enough. She reached out the tip of her tongue to run over swollen ready flesh, already slick with desire. Tina couldn’t keep the moan from escaping as she tasted Bette and heard her response. She directed her tongue to Bette’s clit, while Bette reached to either side and attempted in vain to grip at the mattress. Her toes curled against the sheet as Tina’s talented tongue teased at her. She was pushed over the edge when Tina slipped her fingers inside, continuing to attend to Bette with her tongue. She fell into oblivion, the pleasure radiating from the point of Tina’s contact and beyond, engulfing her body in pure bliss.
Bette lay back exhausted while Tina moved up to rest beside her. She leaned in to kiss Bette’s shoulder as her breathing returned to normal.
“One hour down, seven to go,” Tina smiled. “Come here…”
(the end)
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Yeah! Now that’s how S3 should be. Take time, do what you have to, but please come back, with more of your S3.
Glad to see you back, JKS, and looking forward to more. That sucks that someone is trying to masquarade as you. Really low. I don’t know if the other story is any good, but just the fact that they posted under that name guarantees that I won’t check it out. Give me the real deal.
You dirty girl! I’ve missed you….welcome back.
Great to see you back with more snippets.Your words always seem so natural in your stories. Thanks for writing!
Hi Fins, nice to have you back! Thanks for the post!
JKS, we want more!!!!!!!!
That was a wonderful snippet of a chapter. I kept wondering if you were going to have them fall asleep before they could really enjoy their time together. That would have been my luck. Just hang in there because I always will read a B&T story from you.
This was so hot….and you have to post more cause they aren’t anywhere near finished…
HI SWIMMIE! You’ve been missed. That was way HOT!
What? Where’s the other 7 hours?
damn, just damn
That was very hot and sexy. Welcome back and I hope we get another snippet before too long.
Damn that was hot and Im with Rau!!!!!!!!!!
Swimmie..I dare you to do more! :D
Yehaaaa you’re back, you’ve been missed :o)). This was…..WOW, so fucking hot!!!! With that last line from T, you just have to write 7 more LOL….I’m looking forward to it :o))
Wow that was Wow. I’m at a lost for words here. Great job on the snippet. Look forward to seeing more.
That’s hoooot! Glad to see you decide to finish it. ;)
season 3 sucked… that god for stories like this one… please continue…oh and welcome back
whew! hot stuff. S3? when does it start?
Swimmie, thank for this wonderful post. With 7 more hours to go, you can give us another HOT chapter…..PLEASE
mmmhmmm See you read my mind!, that is how s3 should of kicked off!, I don’t know what Ilene was thinking!, I was definatly thinking along these lines, Post soon!, Im enjoying!
JKS I so love the way your mind thinks if only other thought the same the world would be spinning on the right axis. Thanks this was just the lift I was in desparate need for.
JKS, great as always. If anyone gets a chance check out the JKS story called Keepsakes on the Creative Writing Board. You won’t be disappointed.
where’s the other 7 chapters? one for each hour…thanks, this was great to read before work LOL…season 3 didn’t happen
I think we should get the other 7 hours. Bless Shane’s pee-pickin’ heart. *happy heart*
Hi everyone…Thanks for commenting. Moho just drew my attention to a tidbit of information – the keepsakes story is not in fact mine. It’s written by “jstkeepswimming”. They’ve left out the “u”. Not me. I haven’t posted any stories under any other name. Hope you’re having a good day!
I like your season3 snippets much better… i refuse to acknowledge the other season 3!
Very Sexy !!! Really enjoyed this one very much – So nice to have a friend like Shane – Thanks so very much for writing, swimmie! *smiles*
JKS…how happy was I just to see your name! If only Season 3 didn’t exist. So glad to see you back and I hope you get inspiration to write more.
Great to see you back, jks and thanks for this great chappy! :) Hope 7 more will follow ;-)
I don’t remember this scene in S3, oh, yeah, that was the problem. Could you go help them write S4 cos its got me nervous, any more new people and we won’t know what the hell is going on.
WOW!!!OMFG!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!! Glad your Back Thanks PPS
awesome JKS and i too thought it was you on the creative writing site. loved reading this and hope you can come up with more…
hottttttttttttttttttttttt longer
Great post swimmie! I loved your snippets. You’re right – S3 was a figment of everyone’s imaginations except the (HA) writers, who used no imagination when writing S3! LOL! Thanks for the story!
swimmie…Always a pleasure to read your stories. Some strange punctuation at the end of the story.
Oh my…worth staying up late for, like i can really go to sleep anytime soon after this :) Love your snippets. Thanks JKS!
I was just thinking about dropping you a line to see if you did, indeed, live, but I think it’s clear from this post that YES, indeed you do!
Damn!!! This was good! Not something I should be reading during my lunch hour. I can’t imagine what the next 7 hours will be like. Do we get more?
Yee haw! I don’t know what was better: the story or the “Tina’s talented tongue” alliteration.