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Something so right – Chapter 104
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“That I was becoming a spiteful and nasty person” Tina paused “Bette – am I ?”
“Of course you’re not – you are a pain in the ass but that’s different “
Tina managed a smile and snuggled closer to Bette
“Honestly Bette – please tell me what you think “
“What did you say to your dad to get him angry – there is every chance that you were upset and angry and you said things that you really shouldn’t have. Everyone in your family is upset and on edge – finding out about Gemma and Adam has been very hard for all of you. Feelings are bound to be running high. Its understandable that people say things that they regret – what did you say ?”
“He said that for the first time in ages he was happy – that he had got out of a horrible relationship and that Gemma made him happy. He really wants me and all of us to accept that he’s moved on. he said I should accept it or just walk away from him “
Tina was very emotional and tears started to roll down her cheeks. Bette kissed them away and stroked her hair
“Everyone is saying things that they might regret – he didn’t mean it”
“And he said that I should look at myself before I lost you “
“Why on earth would you lose me ?”
“Because I am nasty “
“You are not nasty sweetheart “ Bette kissed her “I think you are one of the most loving people I know and I am so lucky to be with you. “
Tina cried for a few minutes before drying her eyes
“I said some horrible things to him “ Tina said “I called her a gold digger and asked him what he would do if she gets bored with him”
Bette sighed – she had expected this – she could have predicted that this was what would happen when Tina spoke alone to her father.
“Babe – what the hell did you say all that for ?”
“Because he’s being naïve if he thinks some hot, wealthy babe is going to stay with him – he’s 50 for Gods sake “
“And he is kind and loving and he’s charming and handsome – why wouldn’t he be a catch for a woman who is bored with the local farm boys ?”
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.