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Stained – Chapter 6
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Chapter 6
An hour later they were all sitting on Alice‘s couch and floor with Chinese take out boxes all around them. Dana had joined them after finishing her tennis training and was brought up to speed by Alice.
"Bette was about to share with us the amazing tale of how she choose to spend her first day off in weeks. Now that we’ve all been patiently waiting – they all looked incredulously at Alice – alright, alright, let me rephrase. Now that you’ve all been patiently and I’ve been impatiently waiting for an hour… Better?" The others nodded at her in approval. "I think it’s high time that Miss Diva here tells us all about her afternoon… and we want all the gory details!" She exclaimed excitedly.
"No we don’t!" Dana and Shane yelled.
"Oh, shut up, Dane & Shane. I demand the gory details."
"Well, alright." Bette started. "I was walking to my car when this little boy spilled ice cream all over my white jacket."
"Oh my god!" Dana yelled in a panicky voice, "Is he alright?"
"Dana!" Bette shouted indignantly "I’m not that bad with kids!"
Alice and Shane were in fits of laughter. "Yes, you are." Alice managed to say, tears of laughter streaming down her face.
Bette gave Shane a hopeful look, but Shane decided her usual, Swiss way of dealing with things would once again be the best approach: "Sorry Bette, but I’m sooo gonna keep quiet on this one."
"Thanks for you’re confidence in me, you guys! You have once again proven yourselves to be everything anyone could ever wish for in a friend! For your information, the boy is fine. I bought him a new ice cream."
The laughter abruptly ended.
"Say what?" Alice didn’t think she’d heard Bette correctly. "Did you say you made him into an ice cream?"
"Yes Alice, that’s exactly what happened. I used my powerful ice-ray stare to turn the boy into a popsicle and then Batman and I put him in the trunk of the Bat Mobil." Bette rolled her eyes.
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Just let Bette go and see David say hi to Tina and meet Eric.She will keep her word to David,that is the important thing right now. Tina will fall in love with Bette and send Eric on his way. before Bette will show any feeling for Tina. I think that Bette better start running,because Tina will be after her. thanks
well that is ti Shane is rigth! she talk a little but every word have a lot of power! and Alice well alice is a peculiar person but i wish one like her like a friend :D. i think Tina need to kick Erik out and try to find some time with Bette i like when Tina take the first steps! continue this is good
Damn Alice is so crazy and we have Yoda in the house!
Yeah, I think Tina is very serious about her love relationships. But when you meet someone meant to you, I guess you just lose the battle quickly.
Yes, you Dutch have been taking over just a little bit lately, so thanks for reducing the nederlands. I like to read other people’s comments and appreciate it when they are in English ;) And yes, whe definitely need some drama coming up. Otherwise Bette could just go to the centre, meet Tina, tell her she loves her, they kiss and your story is finished. How about making Eric fall for someone else and thus making himself obsolete? This guy is always so boring and obsessed with Tina. Send him on a business trip to The Hague, where he goes to koninginnenach, smokes too much pot and goes off with a sexy rock star. Then leave the girls to themselves. I’ll think about that twisted plot you wanted for our two favourite ladies. Thanks for writing.
why does Tina have to dump Eric, why can’t Eric dump her and that way when Bette comes to visit David(Really Tina) she can be there for her. Your Story and I love it…I am not a writer, I just love to read anything on B&T.
I think you should just go with what you think is right for your story. Nice podcast reference too. LMAO I don’t really remember that particular podcast though. Maybe I’ll listen to it later when I get home. I can’t speak for everyone, but I’d rather have a short chapter each day than have to wait days on end for a longer chapter. It’s just like eating. You wouldn’t go four days without food then eat like crazy, would you? You’d end up sick! Not saying that your writing would make us sick. Ehh, uhhhh, I’ll just go over here to my quiet corner before I really put my foot in my mouth and end up looking like an ass. *quietly creeps away*
YODA is in da house… LOL
the sooner you get eric out of the history…the better. Then let the drama be between B and T.
love yoda… go on pls… i love what u doing… good…go girl
Hmmm . . tough questions. . .on one hand it’s great seeing B&T get together fast but on the other hand, your story would have more drama if they waited. . .BUT I think Eric should hit the high road! Maybe Tina needs to be single for awhile. . .while dating. . .hmmm. . .sorry that was NO HELP whatsoever. . .whatever you decide please post again soon!
i think eric is too boring to stay, let him go and make the story for B&T…there’s enough drama to find just between them two..great dialog, funny
I am for a slow burn with Bette and Tina. Let them get to know each other better while the tension builds. I like asia’s comment about Eric dumping Tina. That way Tina will be free to talk to Bette. Bette can be the shoulder that Tina leans on. That is my vote.