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Sun Salutations: Chapter 27
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“While her heart rate attempted to embrace some form of normalcy, Bette breathlessly stated, “Looks like I’m not the only one guilty of holding my breath.”
“I’ve always told you that you take my breath away Bette. That shouldn’t be a surprise to you. What should be a surprise however, is that I want you to show me again how sorry you are. I just want to make sure I understand.”
TBC
Chapter 27 – The Light of Day
Nothing is worth more than this day. – Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Carmen peered at the large, bold letters on the intimidating sign and sighed. A row of straight, white teeth quickly answered a strict command to clinch an innocent bottom lip. While reading the powerful words “Do Not Disturb”, the mere sight of the pert command hanging from the door made the brunette’s stomach turn. Looking up at the ceiling, she hoped an answer would tumble from the heavens above resolving her dilemma of whether or not to knock. The uncertain lip-biter was supposed to meet her ex for a morning Tai Chi class and breakfast. After dinner last night, Tina had become so quiet and withdrawn that Carmen wondered if she would be alright. Just as Carmen raised her hand to knock, Tina came bustling out smiling brighter than the sun.
“Hey Carm!” the bubbly blonde chirped as she jogged in place. It was obvious that a cheerful Tina was about to go running and had somehow forgotten about her previous plans with Ms. de la Pica Morales.
“Are we still on for this morning Tina?” Carmen asked evenly. She had suddenly become aware of the need to apply her newly attained Anger Management skills.
Tina’s legs ceased moving. “*****.Carm, I totally forgot. I’m sorry. Why don’t I go change quickly and then we can go.”
Carmen couldn’t bear Tina’s unending smile and overwhelming happiness. It was too much pleasantry for the earliness of the hour. “Nah, why don’t you go run, we can” At that very moment, Carmen realized why Tina was so happy and had resumed her normal routine as if all was well. Dark eyes immediately became cold and venomous, reminiscent of the way they were after her breakup with the woman standing before her.
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I just mentioned you in my comment to seahurst…and there you appeared. Now I will go read..before albeez. be back
“Thank you for coming for me” LOVE IT!! God..I miss you when you are gone. Thank you for the post and I will sit and wait for the next one. I am drinking my green tea tonight. albeez…foofy girl..are you behind me? come out and play
no – thankyou for coming to me …i still love you :)
Your writing is just amazing. I just love the cadence of the dialogue between Bette and Tina. The richness and complexity of their words, feelings , ideas. They are so real and authentic to me. You post, I’ll read.
Beautiful as always. I really like the imagery of your words. Please post again soon.
Greentea, I can’t let my guard down with you. I must say that I enjoyed this chapter. I think that they turned their communication up a notch. This will come in handy as they move forward. Carmen turned up an impotent greeen rock in her search for the krypto, We’ll see what Helena has turned up in her kryptonite search. All in all I hope they keep talking. I guess I will continue to read (I know you have something in the works that will cause me to curse). I’ll have to drop money in the cursing jar, I know its coming. You can’t fool me anymore, as such friends? NO WAY (smile).
so you don’t like me coming back more than once to read the stor and then commenting? this is really unsettling, because i like to read you story…forget the tree, you right it needs therapy now for sure, i’ll just get a tattoo or something myself…even though you said you don’t know that B&T will stay together, i would have to say: i will trust you as bette has to trust tina…they way you wirte about them leaves little doubt in my mind that they are BELONG TOGETHER…and this my friend is the TRUTH *smile the size of the Sea of Cortez appeared on my face too* i absolutely love this story and since you disabled the rating i’ll give 10 stars…actually there were more stars when i saw that you posted and jumped so unexpectedly that i heat my head on the table and i think i saw at least 15 stars, so i give them all to you, babe….maybe Carmen and Helena can get together and bond over the lost of the women the love…once again i trust you, greenie…and here’s lemon green tea for you…it’s delightful and makes the dreary cold night looking like the brightest day, add a wonderful story by a wonderful writer and what will you get? a paradise…thanks, greenie, you’re rock (i almost said my world, but i think my tea is too strong, so don’t pay attention LOL)…i might be back for more ;)
No thank YOU green You truly make my day with yor posts. I love the fact that these 2 are learning to really communicate w/o getting all pissed off. so I just can’t anticipate the source of the impending ‘drama’…..hmmm. I’m sure you will think of something. You always do, don’t you miss smarty pants! until next time sweetie.
I missed you, don’t stay away so long next time…..pls
Excellent as always Greentea! Loved the suttle (not) hilarity at the end of this chapter. I am so very settled now that YOU have stilled B&T’s waters! Yes, I do have a great memory. Bette & Tina do too – they remember their love for one another since the early beginnings of your story. And I know that they, as well as I, hope to soak in the stillness of their waters for a long time.
Hey Green!! Another wonderful chapter you made my thursday night. Hopefully things will stay relativly calm for our girls for a couple of chapters but i’m sure you have more in store for us yet!! Oh well you write it and i will be waiting to read and re-read it. Thanks for such a wonderful story and sharing your talent with us all!!!
How do you do what you do? You capture so many private moments in a relationship. Your stories are like photographs of real life. I think that’s why I love them so much. Thanks beautiful, have a wonderful week…
Wow more than 800 people have viewed your story already. Damn where have I been? And as to your question you have totally ruined me I don’t quite function the same anymore *sigh*. (For the love of everything sacred woman you have me writing ode’s like some 18th century poet)*smirk*. And yeah I have a thing about “squeezing and last drops” call them it one of my many quirks. Now moving on to you story. Bette and Tina are forces of nature capable of wreaking havoc on anything they touch; poor Carmen & Helena. I can’t write a thing that hasn’t been written already about your talents in relation to this story. I can’t comment on other talents you might have. You know what greentea send me a list of all the compliments you should receive for this story and I’ll just put my signature as proof that I concur with each and every one of them, cause your Sun Salutations is that awesome.
GT….simply wonderful! I so enjoy your writing.
Found your comments at the start amuseing…ok funny then.lol.so i take it that youd appreciate comments more often instead of my usual once in a blue moon!!!lol and youd be right…because this story really does deserves a comment every time, as always loved this intense one…every bit as much as thoses very hot NC17s Babe!..lol oh and thanks!
Greetings…the new comment formatting does not lend itself to my poetic style, so you’ll have to check your pm for that. However, I wanted to mention, nothing pleases me quite so much as a well placed double entendre! Wicked good you are my dear…
Whew Green, you still got my tongue. no words bebe. These two sooo belong together as long as they say what they mean to each other and not try to phrase it so the other’s feelings aren’t hurt. But damn these two are smoking together. and can i say b/c i didn’t get to comment on the last chapter: I have never read a chapter in any story so slowly and completely before. TOO HOTTT!!!! ;)
What can I say… I don’t normally comment and finally had left one last chapter, to find that it got erased before it made it to the board..Damn! I’ll try to start over and hofefully remember hwat I wrote..LOL. irst I’d like to say congrats on your award. It was well desaerved. I read all 26 chapters of your story over a 4 hour period. Please remind me to never do that again..I wasn’t prepared.You took me on a rollercoaster ride that I wasn’t prepared for..so many emotions, from happy to sad to hot and bothered to pissed to …. You left me a bit “unsettled” to just damn hot, but oh what a ride it has been. I had to go and take a drink after that. You story should come with some type of label (Read at your own risk, may be dangerous to your health):) Only great writers can do that, take their readers through so many emotions and I tip my hat off to you.
:D quality chapter :) .. loving how the comments on your story are almost as fun to read as the story.. did i say almost.. hmm thats a bit of an over-estimation.. but they are fun.. hehehe no as fun as the chapter thou whew.. :D glad my reaction to ur last chapter made u chuckle :) good to give something back heheh as for albeez’s plan.. I’ll bring amazing drinking skillz?? if thats any good ?? hehe.. does that mean im invited? hehe
.. oh .. and my hot accent? .. i can bring that too hehe :D
It’s never easy for these two is it? Thank goodness for the “springy nipples and hot skin” Well done GT
Speaking for Succulent and myself………GT, you touched on a feeling that she and I have both been experiencing….“I love you so much it scares me. It’s almost like the amount of love I have for you is beyond my control and spilling over into everything else. And, I just don’t think I could take losing you to Carmen or anyone else. That’s a very unsettling feeling T.”………………..If this isnt a mirror of our feelings, I dont know what is. This woman settles me more than anything I have ever imagined!! I LOVE U BOO!!
sorry for the late comment, but was out of town last week. loved the story as usual and am looking forward to more.
HEY GT – How’s it going? Thanks for finally posting – I look for your story everyday – multiple times per day – “Thank You for coming for me” – what can I say but OMFG again!!!! – is Tina going to tell Bette more about the time spent with Carmen I wonder…. Please don’t make us wait too long for the next post – I need it bad.
GT, over this past long weekend, I’ve devoured all your chapters, not wanting to stop. Sadly, I do have to stop now as this is the last chapter you’ve posted. I’m working my way through all the award winners on the site and I must say you really deserve the award and then some. I’m sure you’ve heard this all before but I just have to say it again. Your writing is amazing, beautiful, breathtaking (literally, as I find myself holding my breath when reading this story, just like some of the other readers), intense, heart-warming at times, really tugs at the heart strings at times and lots more other emotions which I’m currently at a loss for. Now, on to the comments. “Carmen realized that she needed to extract and exfoliate Tina Kennard from her being.” – Yes you do, Carmen. Kinda feel sorry for her. Both Tina & Bette have grown through this ordeal as they haven’t flown off the handle and are actually talking and working through their issues. “Thank you for coming” for us. Really appreciate your sharing this wonderful story with us. Happy New Year! Hope to see the next chapter real soon.
Damn this is awesome!
Why is the rating feature disabled GT, tired of those monotonous fives? I could read this story every day as a meditation on becoming free in heart and mind. It’s freeing. It refreshes my outlook on life and love while amusing me greatly. Your writing is a soulful synthesis of mind and body. It’s satisfies in so many ways. Logicize? I CAN be terse: was Tina’s ‘come hither’ gesture done with one finger…or two? Sublime!
anything u post tea satisfies the hunger!! of course got my fix today!! thanks so much today was my last day of finals and seeing ur story b4 bed put a smile on my face!! always a pleasure tea hope more comes soon
You’re pleasing every time you post, greentea. That’s all I ask. ;) Tina really has done a complete 180. Shows what a certain Ms. Bette Porter can do to a person, huh? Great chapter. Bette’s so cute in her insecurity and Tina knows just how to reassure her. We should all have Tina’s patience. I’ll have to remember that the next time I’m feeling a rush of road rage. Hehe
grt!!!!! they need to talk and get things out in the open
Greenie, always a pleasure to read one of your posts. I have a feeling we haven’t seen the last of Helena…but a happy B&T making each other happy for a while, well, you know I won’t object.
This story is so amazing and beautiful and I just love your writing. You have a way with words like “Thank you for coming for me”. Please be gentle on your girls…B&T and I can’t take all that drama :o))
*big smile* NOW it is a good morning here. :-D”Thank you for coming for me”–Fuckin fantastic. *bigger smile* You rock!Ill write more later but just for starters:”Bette blurted while holding Tina’s ankle and rotating her foot slowly counterclockwise.”–do you know that you had me sitting there with furrowed eyebrows, eyes half closed trying to mentally picture how that would look?? And to say that i STILL went with’clock-wise’ at first!*LMAO* Yes, I am a ditz.*cracks up* Dont hate for it..i still luv your story! ;-)
thanks for not trying to kill me but i am sure you will try again lol
mmmm……you’ve just placed a new perspective on the word “settled” for me.I don’t think i can use that word again in everyday dialogue………it may just leave me feeling a little unsettled if i do!!!!!!!!!thank you for the new perspective!
Greeny awesome as always. I get so carried away as the two of them work through their issues. Thanks for finally having them talk and have a meeting of the mind. It makes them seem like two sides of the same coin. Great Chapter
LOVED IT!
…and come again, anytime. Damn I love this story.
So well done GT, I loved that they were able to talk and get everything out. I love that they were able to come together mentally, emotionally as well as physically :o)
So nice, so beautiful. I’ll read as long as you write :)
he-he-he (rubbing hands in excitement), i have a green light so i’m back…just a question: will bette and tina address the issues of carmen and helena more? or they will always interrupt themselvs with some mind-blowing sex? i like that combination, talk a little, make love, talk some more, more love…it could go on forever you know…once again, thanks from the right corner of the bottom of my heart (where i saved a place for you) for this amazing chapter ;)
I adore your style of writing! You make the connection between T/B so palpable. I would love to see this portrayed on the show but have little faith that it will ever happen. :o(
That was…in a word…Incredible! I’m grinning and basking in the perfection that is this wonderful chapter and story. You never disappoint me with your words and your talent.
look who’s back LOL…hey, people post in french for you? need me to translate mon amie ;) anyway, i had a thought after i posted, but i forgot…hmm, oh, here it is: what was tina’s purpose to make carmen fall in love with her even more after being so nice to her? is she trying to keep some way out, just in case? i hope not…okay, i’m totally gone now, i won’t bother you amymore (evil grin)
Well hey! Seulement pour te dire que ton histoire est magnifique… I love the dialogue between B&T, I don’t know how you do it or what’s your secret, but your writing is phenomenal and all I can say right now is that you completely deserve this award thingie :o)Oh yeah, I almost forgot…took me about 6 cold showers to get back to my senses after your little rainy stunt in the last chapter *wink* Mesdames, mesdemoiselles, je vous souhaite une bonne nuit et de beaux rêves :o) RSR xxx
Another late night for me and I come across your wonderful story. You get one hundred stars from me. I am so happy to see Bette and Tina actually talking and working through their problems. Keep up these late night post and I think I will become nocturnal.
Jaw is back in place. And you were successful in your attempt to make me smile…of course, simply seeing your updates makes me smile…but i appreciate the extra effort. ;) Oh, the progress these chickies are making makes me happy. Yay.
angel – “thank you for coming for me.” ahem. i think the whole board did just for you at that moment. ah the power you have babe. this was one of the best. love growth as you know. and its just popping out all over. as usual i trust you with my heart and will wait patiently on where you will take us next. gives pause in our days to find some enjoyment by sharing this incredible story with you, thank you for your thoughtfulness and talent. your it honey.btw – do take up blues invitation. fergz can tend a mean bar. and she is so thoughtful. i am good with my hands as well you know and will be the massage therapist. and blue – what to say about blue. she will cook, i will help and she will tell us tales. what tales she has. we all would be having so much fun and laughing ourselves sick. wed never want to leave. angel, thanks again. i loved it.
Okay, for some reason, my comments never post…anyway, great story. And, “Thank you for coming for me”? That’s a double entendre if I ever saw one, lol!
“Thank you for comming for me” OMG – that was amazing…….way to go greenie. Just went on the site since I had time on a sunday :o) and what do I see an update from you, thanks…that really made my day. And tomorrow is another working day and week to come. Glad Chrismas is just around the corner….I really need a holliday to catch up on some reading – plus writing on my own story. Wonderful update greenie and you sure made me smile and you made my dat. Talk to you later. Post soon
albeez, am i invited? i’ll bring borshch and endless amounts of vodka to our little party…..hey again greenie, i forgot to comment on this chapter…oops, i already did, didn’t i? old age, bad memory…anyway, last line of this chapter was PERFECTION
Greentea,I just wanted to thank you for your amazing story (the word “amazing” is such an understatement but it’ll have to do because I can’t possibly find the right words to express the beauty of this story and your writing style). Yesterday I finally started reading your story (now I understand why my GF loved it so much…oooh and why her new favorite fruit suddenly changed from grapes to peaches hehe)and it was absolutaly addictive …I was on such a “high” when I finally finnished ch 26 ….what a great way to spend my lazy sunday afternoon :). I was so happy when I saw you posted another chapter when I logged on during my lunchbreak …oh and a bit reliefed that it wasn’t an NC17, oh don’t get me wrong your NC17’s are simply incredible but they’re kinda “unsettling” LOL. Anyhow thanks again for sharing your wonderful talent with us , looking forward to the next chapters. Greeting from Belgium and Take care !!
Love it. Thank you.
One of the best closing lines I’ve ever read! Ta-da! A bit more pensive here or is it me? I’m never sure when I read you as I find I’m always SO falling into your story that…well, the lines blur between you, me, Bette, Tina………..hey – it’s fun this way! Seriously, excellent as always. Looking forward to albeez mixing up something with the Green Tea Vodka – shall we say San Francisco this time? Come see my city, Tea, we’d love to have you! And ya’ know – people leave their hearts here all the time (that’s why I can never leave).
Hey Greentea, just started your story two days ago and you got me hooked. It’s awesome! Little problem, though: it should be strictly forbidden to have access to it at work… Ufff! ;) Keep up the great writing!