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The beginning of a friendship, chapter 52
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Tears were filling my eyes again as I felt my heart shatter in my chest, I could barely breath, but this time it wasn’t due to an anxiety-attack. It was just pain… Pain over all those times I hadn’t spoken up, all those times I had allowed others to rule over me, to think for me, to chose for me. I didn’t care anymore what anyone thought, the only person who mattered to me was the one who was sitting opposite of me.
And if you think, I’m going to leave… If you think this… US…. means so little for me… Then I don’t understand why you’d want to be with me… And if you want to blaim me for leading a ‘straight life’ so far? You better start blaiming yourself for not meeting me earlier!
And with those words, I let her go and before I could grasp what I was doing, I was feeling cold, nightair.
Bette:
Blinking I looked at the still open door, out of which she had just dissappeared… Her rant had left me devastated, and I felt like I had lost the ability to either move or speak.
Hot tears were finding its way to my cheeks, and I shivered as I tried to recollect my thoughts. I felt numb, and as in slowmotion, I brought my hand to my face, where her fingertips had been only moments earlier, and suddenly, felt a rush of adrenaline shoot through my body.
*She said she loved you Porter*
As I got out of the car, my eyes found her instantly, even in the dark, and I cautionaly made my way to her. Not sure what to say or do, just certain that I wanted to right the wrong.
She was staring at the house I had once bought, allthough I wasn’t sure if she was actually seeing it.
It had just stopped raining, you could still smell it, the metalic, delightfull scent of water falling from the sky, as I took my place next to her, staring at the same direction.
I’m sorry…
I uttered softly, and I saw a hint of a nervous smile before she turned her head, and repeated, her voice still sharp, and what I realized now, hurt, the words I had said earlier.
For what!?
For not meeting you earlier?
I wanted those hazel fiercy eyes to look at me, as I, with my best impression of puppydogeyes, walked around her. She smiled, a smile she clearly couldn’t suppres, and the wall around her soul became a window again, as I was allowed a glance of love.
T, seriously…
Now that I’d gotten her attention, my intention was to keep it, and as I saw her shiver, I took a step closer to her.
This… US? Its all new to me too… I don’t think you are naiv… I was just… I was just afraid of losing you and…
With a confident smile she minimized the space between us. Her eyes as mesmerizing jewels, glittering before me in the dark.
Porter?
It was something in her voice that made me stop, she had said the word stern and with a hint of something else…
I looked at her expectantly, a little bit afraid of what would come, but not nearly as afraid as I had been before, for she had let me see her soul again, allowed me that glance into her eyes that made my heart jump and my knees buckle.
Her eyes twinkled with a warmth that surrounded me, as she let her hand slide in the curve of my neck, pulling me closer.
Shut up…
She said, a laugh in her voice, right before she placed her lips firmly on mine, doing indeed what she had ordered… Shutting me up…
~*~*~*~*~*~*~TBC~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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1st?
I’m holding you to the promise you made. I mean it! If you break it, you may not receive anymore comments from me. =O xD
brilliant ending to the chapter :) i can’t wait for the next one :)
That was great and love it!!!!!!!!
hey hun,I’m good, suffering from lack of net access tho, lol. Of course I enjoyed this chapter :) Can hardly wait for more!! Happy New Year to you also! Hope u have a good one!!
Maybe this chapter was influenced for all that Tina’s straight life crap that was the end of S3 and all the same maybe not, you always have the last word and I always like it, this is not exception. That little fight proved that they mean what they’ve been saying since chapter number I don’t recall LOL. I must insist on the song for THE moment. Goodluck with the intership pal!
great all my begging worked you heard me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and we cant be close to the end and you love it when i say longer
They just keeping getting beter with each new chapter totally awesome Loe it
They just keeping getting beter with each new chapter totally awesome Love it
I’ve missed this story. I wish you could post more often. It was great and i loved it. PPS
This was A Great Chapter. You are not that mean. I am so loving this story. Can not wait for more. Thank you PPS
Now I can handle this kind of drama. It was not really bad but more of a misunderstanding between them. But I think that it brought them closer to each other. When is Bette going to tell Tina about the house and I am holding to that promise of getting them together.
Okay – this is my first comment ever on any story on this board, mostly because I’m just too lazy. But I really have to comment on this now, my all time favorite story. When I first discovered it there were already like 50 chapters written. I printed everything on paper so that I could read it in peace in my bed before sleeping. ‘Cause this is just the kind of story that it needs to be absolutly quiet for so you can get lost in every word you’re writing and let these two characters and there feelings wash all over you. And afterwards you go to sleep with the most warm and fuzzy feeling like everything is good in the world. I know, I’m a hopeless romantic but I can’t help it and I have to say that this story touches me deeply. The only bad thing now that I caught up with all the chapters is that I can’t just read on and on anymore, but have to wait now for every new chapter. Well, just know that among many, many others I’m waiting patiently for every new post, knowing that it will be absolutely worth it (okay, maybe not always THAT patiently…). Just keep this amazing story coming. Thank you.
can you just skip a few chapters and go straight to 54 or 55? you’ve been teasing us long enough LOL…great chapter, little drama is always good, keeps our girls alive and feeling
You sure always put a smile on my face with this story – amazing and you know it to – I just love it. Post soon
I Love this chapter it was beautiful Mom =) I look forward to next chapter…BIG HUGXoX Dani
Oh ya… I’m gonna be soooo suffered with my lack of net access too (just like aisling too) My broadband broke down… and I have to SNEAK use my siblings’ dial up account… without their permission!! And I can’t download TLW S4 (Sorry… the show will never ever legally shown here… believe me… if it’s showing here, I won’t have to download it :P)!!! Argghhh!!!
Come out come out… wherever you’re… watch out JLBT, Lament is giving out the final warning :P LOL. This is sooooo good and all those emotions churning… wow… love… then anxiety… then tears… then love… then laugh… then fear… what did I miss… hmm… just WOW… and tell me about it… I think stories write on their own too… arent they? ;) Especially drama I must say… it just create themselves when you don’t even planned them… EVER… ;) Hey… but don’t ever suddenly drift into ‘drama’ in the middle of a nice romantic NC-17 ;) Arrggghhh… “Shoo shooo” *shoo-ing the ‘Drama ideas’ from your head* LOL Big big hugggg~~
Well done, a story needs a little drama…Post soon
i just caught up with your story and i think it’s time for me to actually leave a comment and tell you what a wonderful job you’re doing. this story is soooooooooo great. keep it coming…speaking of which, i think i speak for everyone when i say (repeat) that we’re holding you to that promise. pps
I am looking to read the chapter 55! my friend this post was so good! i like so much ths kind of drama cause this talk will make them stronger than before. take care! big hug!
Geee you’re dragging this out LOL – but remember your promise or I’ll come after you!!! Great post my friend, but I smell trouble with the jerk Eric. Post soon, I’ve started the NC-17 countdown LOL
Wow. How in the holy hell did I manage to first last time?! Ah, to have constant internet access again… soon. Anyway, I GUESS I’ll forgive you for the characters taking you somewhere else. I know how it goes; it’s happened to me before where my ending got completely switched around from what I intended… Glad we’re on the same page with B&T’s destination, and I’m with you ’til the end! HUG to you too, my friend!
Ya know what? Those two should really stop doubting the other and start enjoying each other… Okay, scratch that! I love that style of yours and the constant angst about each other’s feelings. I guess that’s what happens when you find yourself so in love and so happy that you fear every second that you gonna wake up from the most wonderful dream. I guess I can understand the feeling. Oh, and don’t we love this drama that you’re such an expert at unfolding for us… ya know… the banter, the arguing, the chase, and finally the finding each other again! *Heavy sigh*… More, please more… oh, and you crack me up with these promises of yours J, as if you could ever lose us on the way! Thanks!
I am so ashamed that I missed this chapter, normally I’m looking everyday to see if you posted something but this time I must overlooked it sorry.As usual an excellent piece of work with the slowburn which is your trademark. Love the way how you describe the emotions that emerge from them. Thanks for letting me feel the way I feel now. Prachtig staaltje schrijfkunst weeral JLBT. Now I’m waiting for an update of my favourite ‘Pretty Woman’….