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the beginning of a friendship, chpt 31
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Previously on ‘the beginning of a friendship’
Bette:
I couldn’t just go to sleep… I was so agitated… The thought of Tina so close and yet so far away was driving me crazy… I had changed into sweatpants and a white sleeveless shirt and was now having a conversation with myself
*Would it be silly if I said goodnight one more time?*
I so desperatly needed to be close to her… It was such an intense feeling I surprised myself… Although I knew people in love di strange things I never thought I, always-in-control-Porter, would ever feel so… so incredibly OUT of control…
I chuckled at my own thoughts and got up… My legs took me to that door… She was right there… I could feel her presence through the door… as if her soul was calling out for me… It was such a significantly different feeling than everything I ever felt that I knew I would always be able to feel her presence, no matter where were.
I placed my hand on the doorknob, fighting with myself…
Tina:
The moment Bette had left the room I was awake…
*Oh Bette…*
I needed her… Something deep in my soul, craved for her… Something deep in me loved her with a passion I didn’t knew I had in me… And that something was the person I had been hiding for so many years… That person was me…
Her last sentence kept resounding in my head…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
I’ll be right nextdoor if you need me…
Without realizing what I was doing I raised and walked towards the door…
I reached for the doorknob and just stood there for a while… hesitating…
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Chapter 31
Tina:
*Don’t be such a fool, Tina*
My grip on the doorknob loosened and a defeated feeling overwhelmed me…
I couldn’t just go upto her, she was probably sleeping… What would I say? Why would I need her? I let go of the knob and sighed before slowly getting back to the very comfortable looking bed.
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just wonderfull – this story is so refreshing and so full of love. Those two are really in for the long run – when are they going to take the first step and talk about it and maybe go even further…this is great. Post soon – love it
i like the playing bit in this story please keep it up
I love this story so much! So what’s going to happen between now and long awaited chapter 34? Will Bette kick the crap out of Eric? Will they kidnap Rosie from her wicked witch of a mother? Stay tuned!
Hey I’ve been missing in action for a while, but now I’v read all the chapters I was behind of this sweet and cute story….I simply loves this story. It’s such a great build up you’ve created, so chapter 34 will be even more wonderful because of the looooong wait :o)) Looking forward to the next one…..
I love the way the story is going. You write so beautifully, like it is really happening. I love to hear their inner thoughts as to what is happening to them with each scene. You have made them come alive like a movie. I would not change a thing on how you are writing this story. Just think of all the build up that you are bringing forward into one kiss. It will be magic for sure. Now, can you come and write my story, so that I can have a Bette or Tina? My life is boring compared to your story telling. Thank you for this wonderful story. Say hi to Rosy for me.
ok thanks for the 7 pages that make me feel better that u did not slam the door in my face u closed it softly but closed none the less lol grrrrrrrrrrrrrr
“You want to play eh?”I can tell you for sure…You’re killing me here!!! How can you do that? Your story is so great!!!I just can´t imagine how you´ll do 2 more chapter until the kiss but i´ll be glad to find out… hope soon!!!Thanks for this post! Great job!!!
???? been a silent reader for weeks but this makes me comment… how these 2 are going to restrain from kissing for a couple of chapters???? don’t get it!! i’ll take it that the next chapter will be about the gang and you’ll start chap 34 where this one finished!!!
hehehehehehe, ik ben eerst……
So you”re going to tease us till Chapter 34. OK, guess I”ll have to wait.
You know, I’ve heard tickling is a sign of sexual frustration and is an easy segue from frustration to foreplay. ;) A kiss on a forehead or cheek is a nice start. I imagine Tina saying “Oh Bette…” while laughing and trying to breathe during the tickle war sounds a lot like…okay I’m gonna stop there or I’ll NEVER get to sleep. I’ve already been up all night and decided to check the site one more time for new material before going to bed. lol
Oh man..gotta wait till chapter 34! lol… you are such a tease. They are so cute together, Bette has to stop thinking STRAIGHT lol, it’s so obvious the sexual tension between them. Why not giving the Straight girl some fun.. Lol.. thanks for the fix today.. 7 pages! Cheers mate :)
wow seven pages, thanks! I really love your B and T they are so cute, i also love the way you have built the sexual tension. Can’t wait for the nest chapter =)
Well, for me it’s just the same which lips they first kiss, just don’t let us wait till chapter 34 ;). They can have sex first and then seal it with a nice kiss….hoe is het mogelijk, wachten tot hoofdstuk 34, dat is misschien volgende weekend, jij plaaggeest. Wel je weet het wel op te bouwen, zo wordt het verlangen steeds groter nietwaar :D.
adoring the build up.. it’s nearly always better than the actual event, but with your writing i very nuch doubt that. genius as always.x.x.
you know what…I admire you…you’re the only who kept reading 31 chapters without a kiss…ufff….And this one just good as the others…Its remainds me when I was with my firts gf…7 years ago…was the same jeje…we use to call each other baby, play around..etc..But we kept on denial of our feelings..until the day she kiss me…
Alright, I’ll wait till chapter 34… but if these chapters weren’t so darn good, it would be a much easier wait!
LOVE IT!!!!!!, so now 34 is next???
I like that you are making us wait. To start to fast after her just breaking up with that man. Not scare her off, plus they are slowly getting to know each other. I think it’s great. Thank you
I can’t wait for chapter 34. This is a great story and I look forward to many more chapters.
oh wow… that could be soooo hot.. “Oh Bette…” haha.. imagine u haven’t written anything erotic, and yet… this has been like a foreplay ;) can’t wait… post more soon please….
AAAAAARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! chapter 34 eh….do u promise, cause I don’t know how much more I can take, b4 I start looking into finding where u live (evil laughter and rubbing hands together). AND UPDATING MORE OFTEN WILL HELP!!!!!!!!
Chapter 34, heh, if we must, we will wait. So hard to do with chapters like this in between. Love how you have them interacting with each other and the thoughts they are having regarding each other. Thanks for the post.
Great story, great chapter…and I will be waiting… But I think you are right..all this tension, thoughts is needed for the story……looking forward for the next post…hm 32 :)
Something must be going to happen to keep them apart for a little while, because they really can’t go on tickling each other for the next two and a half chapters, can they?
i enjoyed so much this chapter! all the little word game and the glance between they was really sweet! this was awesome chapters! keep going! you do this really really great! take care
ch. 34….i’m counting but i’ll be reding because i like foreplays and other stuff too…well done, love this chapter, intense again..and you do intensity so well
So sweet and cute and fun!